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Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
I was just checking in case I missed an update for Irritable Grizzly and found this. I don't know how I missed it before. I love it. As usual you are an amazing writer and I miss IRA.
Reviewer: KHolyoak (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well, you achieved your goal! This little gem IS both tasteful and erotic! Two thumbs up!
-Katherine
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! One of the best! This story was tasteful, sensual, erotic and sexy as hell! This was done so incredibly well, I got goosebumps! This was just incredible! I could have read a hundred more chapters like that one! Wow! You so need to write more of these. ;D
Reviewer: xmenlover (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
love it
Reviewer: xmenlover (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
love it
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
this is incredibly descriptive the are so may metaphores/similies. it was dizying. i had to read some things over- i got lost in description. but the descriptiveness added to the feel of the fic and if i wasnt a virgin with every thing besides knowlage *cue blush* id probably connect really well with this.
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
You definitely can write a decent sex scene:) This one is the best i've read here so far. I can't wait for some hot scenes in Irritable Grizzly Adams I'm reading now.
Reviewer: StarshadowTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. If you were going for tasteful and erotic, you definitely achieved both. Very, very erotic, in fact. Ironic that this is the last story I read before I go take a shower. Yeah, I'm serious, here.
I liked how you managed to have a point to this story instead of just a sex scene. It was about Bella and Edward bonding through sex, him learning that he could, indeed, do 'this'. Very nice.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beautiful, sweet, tasteful, and very erotic. Well done!
Reviewer: OpenToedShoes (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was very well written... and so descriptive. I could almost feel the emotions and sensations as I read the story. Really well done!
Reviewer: gkk (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very, very sweet... and just enough anxiety to give it the B&E flavor. There's something more tangible about the "first time" stories when they are utterly beyond words. Too many authors spend too much energy in the less than tasteful descriptions which IMO goes against our "gentleman Edward's" nature.
Bravo!!!
Reviewer: twitterbug (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
One of the more tasteful renditions I have read, great job!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was really beautiful, I loved it, thanks!
Reviewer: itsme (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was excellent!
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
very very nice. :)
Reviewer: jesskaye101 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very cute!!! Very sensual and well timed.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was HIGHLY erotic. I feel like I should be smoking a cigarette right about now.... So sensual and romantic. Wow. Wonderful.
Of course, I am thrilled that you are in an Irritable Mood right now.... I love that one as well!
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Large but not irritable, please ;) Gianormously terrific fanfic- keep writing more!
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
this turned out very well!
Reviewer: dandyangie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
yummy :)
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was delightful :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very, VERY tasteful and erotic! Wonderful shot.
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yes, you can absolutely write a tasteful and erotic sex scene. That was amazing! I think my favourite line, and it was hard to decide because this whole thing is perfection, was;
"He paused, trying desperately to silence this new beast arising within him - the phoenix of his masculine, human self resurfacing, untamed, from the ashes of his undead body"
Fuck, that was beautiful!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was so sweet :)
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