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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Confusion

I like the beginning but to be honest, I don't like how the story is going.



Author's Response:

that's understandable...i think it's getting too complicated myself.....but after the next chapter a lot of things will get cleared up, don't worry...and it'll be a lot simpler

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Confusion

I loved this chapter. It had quite a fews surprising  in it. Which is very good. I will be truthful when I say I have no clue as to what Irina revenge would be. Beside her telling Edward that she was pregnant which could be true or not. I could so see your Irina getting back at Edward by sleeping with some one and then passing their baby off as Edward's

I understand Rosalie's actions, however that doesn't make them the right action. Babies need a stable enviroment can Rosalie give that to her baby. She might be able too if she tells her brother and Emmett.

This chapter was brillant good look with your nomination for the Fragile Award on shimmerawards.webs.com

Brie



Author's Response:

i'm glad you liked the chapter, and rose will tell people...she's just feeling a bit unsure of herself right now, because of what happened to bella... 

and irina's revenge isn't that complicated...it actually plays a key role in getting edward and bella together,,,

Reviewer: Julia F (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Confusion

This is all very immature?  How old are you?

Bella seems stubborn and hell bent on just blaming someone else so she doesn't have to feel bad, and Rosalie needs therapy, not the complication of a baby. 



Author's Response:

the story is a bit immature because the characters are immature, and they don't make the right decisions because they don't know how to...not all characters are perfect in decision-making or maturity levels, and that's what make them seem human...and i'm 14, by the way....

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Confusion

I truly think Irina should just stay away. This whole situation is complicated enough with Bella and Esme's decisions



Author's Response:

irina's revenge isn't going to be that complicated...don't worry...it'll play a key role in getting bella and edward together

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Confusion

Aw, poor Rose! :(



Author's Response:

i know...i feel really bad for her...she can't talk to anyone

Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Confusion

Like where you area heading.  Wow that was a revelation about Rose.  What is Esme thinking



Author's Response:

esme is...well...feeling a bit upset that bella didn't tell her anything, because she always prided herself on her open relationship with her daughter. she tried a lot of different techniques to try and get bella to open up, but thats going to go on hold for a while because of how bella pretty much saw through the fake pregnancy...

Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Confusion

yay California is coming up I can't wait for the next chapter and I look forward to Irinas revenge whatever it might be. I can't believe that Rose got pregnant on purpose but then again its understandable because she is lonely. Bella knows something is going on with the Esme Carlisle thing and she has figured everything out she just doesn't know it yet but Esme's plan might turn aroung and backfire on her since she did lie to Bella about knowing Bella was pregnant. I was looking forward to bella actually telling Esme that she was pregnant at the dress shop but then she found a dress that can work, in that moment you can just feel esme's upset sigh that Bella didn't have to tell her. Look forward to the next chapter and mike lol. Although Bella doesn't want to like anyone who is friends with Edward I think talking to mike might help Bella get an inside wied of Edward, as well as mikes situation at getting his girlfriend pregnant and her getting an abortion. 



Author's Response:

exactly...mike and edward had been best friends for a really long time, so mike understands edward pretty well, and he's gonna talk some sense into him...looking forward too that part...and mike's experience is going to help bella out, sorta kinda...

Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Confusion

I know what you mean about plots changing. When I wrote my fourth chapter, it didn't go at all as planned. Now I have to find a way to make my upcoming chapter fit with chapter four.

Anyway, another good ass chapter. This story is really starting to move along well. And you don't go off on another subject: you stick to the point. I love this chapter and I can't wait to see where this story goes.



Author's Response:

haha...creative thinker, i know exactly what you mean...i read that fourth chapter and it was really different from what i thought would happen...

and i'm glad you like the chapter!!!

Reviewer: chicabg (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Ready

This is my new favorite story.



Author's Response:

thank you!!!! that's nice to know!!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Confusion

Great chapter.

I can understand why Esme did what she did (in a wierd way), but the truth is going to have to come out soon.

I wonder when Bella will tell her mom that she's pregnant....Poor Rose. I feel bad for her.

Please update soon?

Oh, just a quick question...Will Bella and Edward end up together? (Stupid question, I know. I just wanted to know.)



Author's Response:

i know, esme's thing was really strange, but she's gonna explain herself later....

and they will end up together...eventually....but i can see what you're going at here

Reviewer: Tiggy (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Secret

you keep saying that more reaviews mean faster you get your chapters out, so i am now sending you a review in hope that you will get your next chapter out asap!!!!!!!!!!!

you are an amazing writer, never ever stop who have a true talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i truely mean it!!

i have a question, why did edward tell esme and carlisle about Bella's situation?? i mean if he really wanted to make things right wouldn't he have supported her when she was ready to tell them?? i mean if some one had done that to me i would find it almost impossible to trust them again. he may be the father but to go behind her back and telling her mum, even if he was worried about her going missing it just dosn't feel right to me.

But I really want to find out what happens next so i hoped i helped inspier you to get the next chapter out faster!!!!!!!

Til next chapter

Tiggy



Author's Response:

i know what you mean; that is something that i think a lot of people have wondered about. when bella finally does find out that edward told, i'm going to include a flashback scene, so that you can see exactly what was going through edward's head. but for right now, edward was scared. when bella told him, he did a little bit of online research, and all of them emphasized how important it was to not get too stressed or anything. and then, edward doesn't realize it, but he actually does care for bella. and then, when she runs away, he worries about what would happen to her. he's even more worried than esme and carlisle are, and so, when they start asking what's going on and why he's so worried, he cracks and blurts it out, without thinking. and then, carlisle and esme start questioning him, and he has no choice but to tell them what happened.

and thank you for the review...it means a lot to me!!!!!

Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Secret

I really can say that I hope you redeem Edward soon..This is the first story I have read that I truly despise his charater at this time.. I do have to say it is interesting so far!



Author's Response:

yeah, i will redeem him, but it'll take a while since i want to make it look natural. and i'm glad you find it interesting!!

edward is a bit of an idiot, and until he realizes that, he won't be able to fix anything. he'll figure this out in california though, which is coming up soon...i'm not sure exactly when

Reviewer: Carliemayyy (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Secret

I love this story to bits.

I wish it was updated more often though.

Has it been put onto Fanfiction yet? You are alot more likely to get feedback over there than here. Just a tip.

Loved the chapter though, Carlie x



Author's Response:

i'm sorry about the updates. i have three other stories--another one here, and two over at hpff, so i have to work on all of them, and it takes a while sometimes because of that.

and i will put it up on fanfiction, i just haven't got to it yet...i'm hoping to get a  bit more on track with my hp stories...it's been forever since i updated them...and then i'll see what i can do about fanfiction :))

Reviewer: edwardandbellabelong2gether (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Persuasion

I like it so far!



Author's Response:

glad you think so

:)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Secret

Interesting story.  Stepbrother and Stepsister new and refreshing.  But to have Esme pregnant as well, adds more to the drama of the story.  Keep up the good work.  Update when you can



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Friend

Does the whole school know she's pregnant?



Author's Response:

well, by the time jessica is done with her calling, texting, e-mailing, and IMing, pretty much the whole school finds out, yeah

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Stranger

Would Edward take advantage of a drunk girl? IDK, but I'm going to find out.



Author's Response:

yeahhhh, he woulldddd, but i'm sure you know that by now    :D

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Ready

Yeah the pill helps you not worry about anything...except STDs.  Ew



Author's Response:

yeaaaa, well luckily for bella, edward doesn't have anything :D

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Persuasion

Good so far.  More details would help.  Whose stilettoes.  What color, material, cut is the dress. 



Author's Response:

i will try to work in more details. thank you for the suggestion :D

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Secret

Loved the chapter, I did find a little grammar mistake.

Esme chirped happily. “How are you this fine morning?” I think you meant feeling.

Other then that I like the chapter a lot especially the little sneak peek you gave us.

Though I was a little surprise to find out that Rosalie was pregnant but it was nice to see. Hopefully, once all the tension is away from them. Edward and Bella will start to grow on each other. Especially once Bela's waistline start to expand. *wink*

Brie,



Author's Response:

oh yeah, they will grow on each other...lol...i've got some fun things planned........

Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Secret

i know i just had a really long review about who should carry their baby to term and i have another theory/ idea about why Esme should not or will not have a baby. I just went through chapter 9 decisions and started think, Edward told Esme that Bella was pregnant after she ran off and Esme didn't bring up her pregnancy until after being reunited with bella. The only person to know about Esme's pregnancy was Bella, causing me to believe that Esme made up her pregnancy to make bella confess to being pregnant and feel more comefortable with saying it. Esme drops hints about knowing Bella is pregnant and is trying to get Bella to tell her she is pregnant such as at the dress shop, she purposely sends bella to the tight dresses while she is supposed to be trying on maternaty dresses, but i believe that is another thing to get bella to tell about her pregnancy. Also esme said she didn't tell Bella about being pregnant because it was a bad example but it could be because she is not really pregnant to begin with. in my opinion, Esme made up her pregnancy to help Bella feel more comefortable with telling Esme about being pregnant herself. You already hinted to someone not having a baby and i think Esme is the person that doesn't have a baby because she was never pregnant. Another theory is that Esme might have been pregnant causing Carlisle to propose but during the month before they topld the kids about being engaged she had a miscarrage, making part of the story true. 



Author's Response:

you know,,,,i wasnt going to do this originally, but i really like the idea, and i think i will change the story a bit to make that work. it sounds interesting, and like the kind of thing esme would do to get bella to admit that she's pregnant. i really like the idea....thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Secret

my sister and I are both reading this story, we are twins and are currently in a disagreement about who should have their baby and who shouldn't. You have already hinted that someone will not carry their baby to term and we both agree that Bella should keep her baby because she is the main character and all. I however think that Esme's baby should not be born because 1. we faound out about bella first and there should not be two babies in the house at once with esme's baby only a month or two older than Bella's baby. I think that Rosalie should keep her child because of her compassion when she was talking about little kids and how she stood by bella when she took the test. Also if Rosalie doesn't have a baby then all the attention will be back on bella about being pregnant with her stepbrothers baby. Plus if bella and Esme were both pregnant that would be even more gossip around Forks. My opinion clif notes version Bella and Rosalie should have their babies and Esme should not. 



Author's Response:

thats an interesting idea, and i think it is a good theory, but there will be some other twists and turns, and well, there might be another person not carrying their baby to term. i knew that one of them was definitely not going to carry to term, but now i think theres another one. it's not definite yet, but i am considering it...

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Secret

heyy sweetie! okay.. this is really hard for me to say because i think it's really rude and down right arogant but this story needs alot of work.. i mean don't get me wrong i ADORE the plot and the whole backaround story but... there needs to be more detail. you need to give the characters depth and realicity. i mean. com'on these people are just down right stupid. i mean i know that this is obviously an ooc story line but stil.... Carlisle and esme need to grow up a little and edward and bella need to really just sit down and have a conversation.. i mean i know your going for the wloe '' bella's preggo so she's always a bitch never mind the fact that her whole life is being torn apart from every angle '' but pregnant people aren't always that bad and if they are , it's only because of discomfort. Rosalie being pregnant is really kind a of random. obviously you needed to have a scapegoat to bella's 'situation' but the way you brought it about was all too wrong, not that the situation is right. um look, if you don't think i'm a total bitch for saing these things or think that everything i'm saying is completely wrong, i understand. but if not, you can always e-mail me xolizzieeexo314@aol.com  and i could maybe help you along if your stuck or something... i really go love your story and i will deffinately be looking forward to see what unfolds next.

your dearest reader,

liz rosario



Author's Response:

thank you, i really appreciate all of the insight, and i might take you up on your offer at some point...extreme writers block, and all that...and i know rosalie was a bit sudden, but i think it will all work out once it sinks in a little bit. details....i totally understand. i think that a lot of stuff is happening right now, but i will definitely try to work in some character stuff...thank you sooo much for all of your interest...it means a lot to mee

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Secret

What a twist with Rosalie!



Author's Response:

i know its a bit random, but i have a reason for the whole thing. trust me.

Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Secret

longer chapters would be appreciated--need quicker updates



Author's Response:

i will keep that in mind. thank you

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