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Reviewer: Wish Upon A Star (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Stranger

Uh oh....



Author's Response:

i see..... :))

Reviewer: Wish Upon A Star (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Ready

Wow.



Author's Response:

interesting....

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Confusion

I thot Esme might be lying - too much of a coincidence!



Author's Response:

i know. i was hoping someone might pick up on that...

Reviewer: pickle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Friend

This is really, really good!



Author's Response:

glad you like it!!!

Reviewer: pickle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Ready

So like Alice and Bella.

Really good so far!



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Confusion

So happy for the update, I never know what is going to happen next in this story and I love it! It keeps me on my toes :) Can't wait to read more :)

I am sure whatever Irina plots is going to be pretty bad and make Bella hate Edward even more lol (but would we want it any other way?) :)

Poor Rose, I just feel so sorry for her, Hope everything turns out better for her!



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it..and the reason i make it so unpredictable is because that's the kind of story i like...if you can guess everything that happens, why should you read more????

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Confusion

I just re-read chapter 9......I forgot about this exhange between Edward and Bella..........  "Pretending I hadn’t heard her, I continued, “You were the most beautiful person I had ever seen. I forgot about Tanya, about convention, about anything and everything except you. Bella, I fell in love with you.” There. It was out.

Bella laughed. “Edward, you are a really good liar. I was almost convinced that you were telling the truth, for a second there.”

I felt hurt. “It was the truth,” I protested. 

I had forgotten that Edward told Bella he loves her........he is so sweet....Although I feel a (VERY TINY) bit for Tanya, her expectations are so unrealistic....How many people are married to their first teenage boyfriend after he moves far away???



Author's Response:

edward is just...confused, and bella doesn't trust him...and tanya is just really clingy.....but when you see them all together....

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Confusion

I love this from Alice-"Wow. I should stop having parties. This is really unexpected.” LOL!!

I admit I'm a bit afraid of what Irina will do...I could be very mean, and well, if it affects Bella, in her pregnant state..well, that is just wrong..but I don't know what her revenge could be.

Rose is pretty delusional..to get pregnant as a cure for her loneliness is nuts!



Author's Response:

yeah, i love that line!!! it sounded like the kind of thing that alice would say!!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Persuasion

thanks! I'll go muggle around.



Author's Response:

have fun!!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Persuasion

everybody is updating Harry. I guess since I love him as much I should go visit. is it on fanfic or a diff sight?



Author's Response:

it's on harrypotterfanfiction.com...but it hasn't been validated yet...it takes forever for stuff to get updated there...my user is lily_hermione_forever.......and i have two stories, if you're curious...

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Confusion

1. going back to forks? and ruin everything after bella and edward are together..

2. in one way no because she used someone that loves her but in the other hand she deserves happiness :)

the chapters are really good atm and i love them :) but they end so fast could youu make them longer ? x

updateee sooon :):)



Author's Response:

interesting theories, but not exactly what i had planned.......and i'm glad you like the story!!!

Reviewer: kouklitsa (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Confusion

I understand the idea/concept of Rose's actions and I fully believe that desperation can make people do crazy things. I like the Rose storyline.

As for Irina's revenge...I don't know but I hope its inventive.

Anyway...

Peace Out.



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like the rose storyline....

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Confusion

All poor Rose that is so sad.. This was a great chapter

Author's Response:

i'm glad you liked the chapter.....

Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Confusion

oh man, i cant believe that esma lied to bella. but that seems to happen alot in this story. i'll be glad when everything is out in the open. and when bella stops being a bitch twoards edward. i mean at least hes trying to be a friend or something and then she just snaps into a bitch fit. haha



Author's Response:

i know, but bella can't help it, i guesss.....and i love your username...it made my day...

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Confusion

Rosalie's situation makes me wonder about how many kids are in her same situation.



Author's Response:

yeahhh, i saw something online about that, and that's where i got the idea...i figured it was something that happened int he real world, so i thought it would add some kind of connection to the real world

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Confusion

Wow. Okay, did not see that coming. So Esme isn't pregnant and Rosalie purposely got pregnant for selfish reasons. Sounds like Rosalie. Interesting twist there chica. Good job!



Author's Response:

thank you!! i'm glad you like it...   :D

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Confusion

thanks for the update.

 

Rosalie's action is not justified



Author's Response:

i know...rose shouldn't have done that, but she was lonely. and she couldn't help it...

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Confusion

I missed you and your story I love it so. I know your busy but I cant stand the waiting



Author's Response:

i know!!! i'm sorry....i had to work on harry potter...it's been a couple of months since i updated, and i thought they deserved an update, too

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Confusion

Esme made a mistake lying to Bella.  Esme should have told Bella that Edward admitted about Bella's pregnancy.  She should be reaching out to her daughter and rebuilding their relationship.  All these secrets are not helping anyone just making more problems.  Now any trust or openness will be tainted.  Bella and Edward relationship or lack of one is going to be trying over the months.  Rose getting pregnant on purpose wasn't right.  Now she has her life but also affecting Emmett and any plans he has after high school. Don't forget we have Jessica telling the world about about Edward and Bella also.  But curious where the story will lead from here. 

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Author's Response:

yeahhh, it's really complicated, but almost everything you mentioned will be cleared up in the next couple of chapters...

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Confusion

I think Rose is been selfish, bringing a baby to the world because you feel lonely?, but then again, that baby will be loved. Not fair to Emmet though...As for Irina, maybe she's planning a fake pregnancy? Can't wait for more E&B interaction.



Author's Response:

well it's not a fake pregnancy, though a whole bunch of people have thought of that...it's actually something that will bring edward and bella closer together...

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Confusion

Irina should tell Edward that Tanya is pregnant!!! Sneak Peeks= Done chapters. Right? Right. So update quick!



Author's Response:

haha, not really. i just write the sneak peeks before the update, and then i find a way to incorporate it in the chapter when i write it...

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Confusion

I'd like to kick Edward in the pants.  What a butthead.



Author's Response:

i know, right!!!!

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Confusion

Wow I can't wait to see what happens next. So much is going on. Fantastic story.



Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it!!!!!

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Meeting

Nice twists in the plot.



Author's Response:

thank you!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Confusion

Great chapter. Not sure what Irina will do. Rose's actions aren't reasonable. They're understandable, but really very sad. Lonliness isn't a reason to have a baby.



Author's Response:

i know....i feel bad for rose,....but who knows, she might not end up having the baby anyway, i might change that part closer to the end...it all depends on how everything fits together

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