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Reviewer: Winterstale (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Perpetual Thirst

I know it's been ages since you wrote this but just wanted to say as an Em fan,  I really appreciated it. I don't think I've ever seen E written with any hint of the terrifying, perfected killer vampiness (at least towards a human) and it's refreshing after SO many 'Bear gets Em/ Rose saves Em' fics. I would assume you have abandoned this as a viable series since it's been so long ago that it was posted but I would love to see this expanded into a multi-chapter fic. So many possibilities! You have a great premise here.....I'd love to get my grubby mitts on this one.

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Perpetual Thirst

I don't know who this person is, but I guess that's the point, isn't it?  Emmett fought himself and lost, but never knew the consequences of his defeat.  This was really well written and interesting, especially in the reversal in the end, where she is now strong and does to someone else what was done to her. 

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Perpetual Thirst

Wow, that was wonderdful. But the only thing is that Emmett killed both of his singers, not changed them. I thought that was very good though, two thumbs up.

Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Perpetual Thirst

wow this was awesome! truely interesting, i think you should make a series out of it, not just a one shot.

but its your decision, very good though:]

xx



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I was thinking of extending this story, but I wanted to see how people felt about it first. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Perpetual Thirst

Very effective writing.  I got scared as Emmett was killing her.  Wonder what he would think if he knew that she survived ...?  Wonder what she will think when she starts to understand what has happened to her?

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, it means a great deal. The story scared me a little too! Thank you.

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