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Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow...I really hate him. Hurry Edward!
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, that was a very written. I wonder what will happen when Victoria catches up to them.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Again, poor Bella. It is a great story. You MUST update SOON!
Great writting.
Reviewer: bellavita (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
great story!!! it's terrifying but i can't stop reading it. Update soon!
Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
Eep! Is he going to kill her?turn her? Hmmmmm...
How's Eddie doing? Could you write some of his POV in the next chapter?
I absoulutely love this story. I really want the next chapter!!!!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Sorry, no spoilers. Next chapter is in Jmaes' POV. But don't worry. We'll hear from Edward again.
Reviewer: Caitylovestwilight (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 3
wow, you've obviously thought alot about the perspective of Bella in all this. Well done. This is a incredibly interesting story, keep going. I'd like to see Edward's perspective again, but I imagine that will come in good time. Good job!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 3
Your story is really scary. And I love it!
Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
I thought this was a very good chapter. James is very, very evil. Poor Bella.
Bring on the angst, I say!
Author's Response: lol. You'll really like the next chapter then,
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
WOW....evil
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Perhaps a little Alice PoV. Short visions about what Bella's enduring. To say I enjoy what I'm reading atm sound wrong, as what I'm reding is torture and rape. However, seeing the Cat and Mouse game James will play with the Cullen's is a big interest to me. That and reading about various awful things he may make Bella do, as well as do to her. Call me a sadist, but your story brings that out in me. The worse James is, the more I can hate him. The more I hcan hate him, the better it will be when he gets his just deserts.
Author's Response: I do plan on doing some of Alice's POV in chapter 5. We'll hear from some of the Cullen's in that chapter. First I want to rewrite the scene from the last chapter in James' POV.
Reviewer: Anima Bella (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, this chapter was intense!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
wow, I would like you to continue with the points of view youve got so far. You did justice to Edwards character. Hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor bella. I wonder if she will get stolkhome syndrom from being with James too long.
Author's Response: I'm not going to give anything away but it's an interesting theory.
Reviewer: ForeverxWithyou_ (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
god please update soon, that cliffhanger was almost painful hahaha
your doing an awesome job so far, that was scary! lol
xx
Author's Response: I love cliffies. They are annoying but it makes it a better story for it to have susoense. :)
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
The only thing I'd like to see happen at this point is another chapter!!!
Author's Response: It'll be a little bit longer between chapters this time. I've decided to write the last scene from James' POV so we could see some incite into what is going on in his mind. It will help my story flow a little better, not to mention I'm interested in what he is thinking. It was'nt part of the original rough draft I'd created for this story and James' character is difficult to get into. But I promise, it'll be worth the wait.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good writting. Poor Bella.
Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, now I want to helpkick James'ass! The story is gettig very intresting. I wonder what Edward would do if he heard about this little act?
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oops, he bit her....so that would mean that she's not going to be human if she lives....I can't wait to see what happens now because I don't think Edward is going to be able to suck the venom out in this story.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
i hate hate hate hate hate hate hate HATE JAMES
Edward needs to come and rescue Bella!!
Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
i love this story!!!!!
:D
update soon. please. you are killing me here.
can Alice see where they are or not?
:D
Author's Response: No Alice can't see anything just yet. Remember Alice's visions are subjective and James is smart. I'll explain more in the next chapter as it will be from James' POV
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great story line and idea, but how did Bella already know what a singer was? Didn't they learn that in New Moon?
Author's Response: Bella didn't know what a singer was. In the first chapter, James asked her if she knew what a human pet was and she shook her head no. Then he said, "You see, Bella. Your blood sings to me. I never wanted something so much in my life." Remember also in the original Twilight, Edward explained in the meadow about what her blood did to him. While James didn't explain it in as much detail as Edward did in New Moon, Bella's a smart girl and put two and two together.
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting twist, but I'm sure Bella can survive almost anything to be able to get back with Edward or to keep him safe. We'll just have to see...
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Edward. You did get Edward right. :( I hope he finds Bella. Soon.
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, this is way tooooo goooood! You are just going to have to write faster!!!!
Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was really good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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