Yeah! I was so happy to see Chp 6 posted today. Another awesome chapter, even if it was short. The James/Bella POV's are the most interesting to read. Although, I'm looking forward to Edward catching up with them. Edward is probably completely loosing his mind at this point in the story. I look forward to his savage retribution in future installments. Keep em coming! You're story is the most intriguing on this site!  

Author's Response:

Thanks for your awesome review. It's really gratifying to know that people are reading and enjoying my story. I've become addicted to writing fanfiction and I've already started brainstorming for ideas for mt next story. :)

Waiting for the next chapters. Please hurry.

OMW!  I sooooo love this fic.  You've managed to suck me in completely and I am waiting with bated breath for what'll happen next...pins and needles lol  I think you did an excellent job on Alice...very realistic and honestly....with everyone.  Can't wait for more, hurry back soon, Mwah

Well first I must say that that chapter was excellent. Now on to the more negative things: that chapter was way too short! Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update? Sorry. Your story is excellent, interesting, naughty angsty, and exciting. Please please please don't do a Breaking Dawn and let Bella get preggers. Let everything be frozen in this vampire world please. Kthxbai! Oh, and please update soon. I am so curious what will happen next?

Thank you for your great story.  So many of them (and I like them too) aren't feasible with the original story, but this one could be and I really like that!

Yay! I love this story! I cant wait for another chapter!

Poor Bella!  I am anxious for what is next!

Wow - very angsty, but very compelling!  It's so heartbreaking that James took her virginity away from both her & Edward.  I admire the way you're developing the characters.  I have a feeling it's going to get worse before it gets better, but hopefully soon Bella will at least learn that Edward will never not want her.  Great work - please update soon!

Amazing! I have been looking forward to your next chapter for days! you are doing a really good job ;)

This story is heartbreaking for Bella and the Cullens, but especially Bella.  Not only is she trapped, but there's no hope of escape and she has no idea where she is.  Also, she feels like she's not good enough for Edward.  This is just so awful!  I guess that means the story is good, if it upsets me this much, huh?

i for one am very intrigued by this idea.  I cannot wait to see how this all will play out.  I always wondered what would have happened had edward not shown up in time.  like i said, i cant wait to read more!!!

WOW! I just registered with this site. Your story caught my interest because of the original, bold idea behind it. "Human Pet" is my first taste of Twilight fan-fiction and how quickly you've gotten me utterly HOOKED! This is very well-written! I love how you include the various points of view, and yes, you did Alice justice here. You've done all the characters justice. You write James very convincingly too. I don't know if you watch Heroes, but I keep thinking of Sylar as I read your version of James. That is a compliment too because Sylar is a great bad guy. You have me on pins and needles for the continuation. I am dying to see what happens next with James and poor Bella. Then there's Edward - you do a great job of showing his anguish. I can litterly feel the utter torment he is experiencing with the knowledge of Bella's torture. Plus, Bella's pain is palpable. It's also very interesting to see the differences in how James views things happening, to how Bella experiences it. Powerful stuff! Please post updates soon!!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. It pleases me to no end that you like my story. This is my first attempt at fanfiction. This story has been in my head for about six months and it took some courage to finally start writing it and posting it. I was afraid that it wouldn't be good enough. It's very rewarding to finally have it come to life some place other than inside my head.