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Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great news! Thank you!
kisses
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Are you going to write more chapters? please plase please!!!
Author's Response: I have chapter 10 waiting to be validated now. LOL!! : )
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hi! my name's anna, I'm an italian student and I've been reading your story! I really like it. I'm new in here and I'm not soure about what can I write in a review... so I'll write you what I've been thinking while reading... While I was reading I couldn't Help thinking what if Bella tried to communicate wht alice trough her visions? I mean, like in that chapter of breaking dawn, when Bell writes Alice that she wants to send Renesmee to Rio. I think that Bella feels very scared of what James is feeling for he,r and of what she is feeling to James, so she would like to keep a connection with the Cullens truough Alice. I think this could herlp her. I think she could concentrate and send Alice messages trough her visions, saying she's ok, what is happening...
I hope I was clear enoungh...thank u for writing
kisses
anna
Reviewer: baybeet (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 9
next chapter please!!! i'm dying here!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay. I've written chapter 10 but I still have to type it and beta read it before posting. I'm going to try to do that before the end of the weekend. : )
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 9
Please update soon! Pretty please. I was reading this for the first time, and this is a very complex story that is developing here. I want to know how successful James is going to be at attaining which affections from Bella. How will Bella deal with it as well as Edward.
When he kissed her, I thought that he would push further. LOL
Reviewer: Charlene (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
I am really looking forward to the rest of this story. Very interesting twist to the love triangle here. I like E&B stuff, but it's nice that you are giving James more depth. I'd be interested to know more about his history. Keep posting please!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Sorry it has been so long since I last posted. This chapter is giving me a lot of trouble. It's all in Bella's point of view and it is going to be rather long. Longer than any of the other chapters so far. I'm just having a hard time getting it just right. Stick with my story, I will update as soon as I can. : )
Reviewer: fan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
First and formost, you let me tell you that I like your story a bit twisted but good keep writing.
I belived you should have let bella wait a little before she began to have sympaty for James you should let it be slowly because it doesn't just happen in 1 day. (but then again it is a book)
As for the the next cahper you should let alice see the name of the motel but let it be a common name where there would be many if she decided to look up the name. I don't know just a thought.
Keep it up. can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jaybird (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
this story is kinda sick...but vampires understand things that we don't, i guess....write more...i like it!
Reviewer: jaybird (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
this story is kinda sick...but vampires understand things that we don't, i guess....write more...i like it!
Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
its just awesome!!!!!!! write more
Reviewer: xxjasperluvrxx (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 9
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO GREAT. POST MORE FREQUENTLY OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!! ;p
Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked the chapter and thought it was a bit realistic. I mean, James is a vampire who dazzles and some people do feel sorry for others, even after the other has done something horrible to them. It just depends on their heart and if they're are willing to. Some people can't, some people can and Bella seems like one who can. Just don't have her too much of a wimp or something. Liked the chapter. Update soon! xoxo-Tay-Ush
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
well and don't forget stockholme syndrom... bella's personality would make her suseptible to it more than most....
poor edward :(
Reviewer: ParentingTipsDaily (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
Although you said James is trying to be the nice guy, I have a hard time believing it. He has conficting emotions because of his attraction, he may even be affectionate. But he is using his predatory gifts to manipulate Bella. The Nice Guy" would never keep her against her will. I know Edward never would. Classic stockholms syndrome exacorbated by Vampire manipulation.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 9
I like this twist. I think it will make a much better stand-off between Edward and James.
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
this is one of the best twilight stories ive ever read
please write more am dying to know what happens when the cullens catch
up to james
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yay for Stockhome Syndrome, poor Bella. Agonnizing watching this play out.
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
I think there's a slight difference between Edward leaving her, and James raping her. I agree, she took Edward back a little quickly, but at that point I was so over the angst I was about ready to chuck the book across the room soooo... anyway, I get that she's confused, but I am frustrated. You're a great writer though, so I would hate to have to start hating this....please don't make me hate it!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry if you don't agree with me, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Don't hate my story. I think you'll be pleased with the next chapter. Bella finds her strength and does something to help herself. Can't say anything more without giving it all away. :)
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter! This new element of James' feelings is definitely going to make things more interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes, to what extent James will suceed in drawing Bella in. Please update soon!
Reviewer: vampireobsessed17 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. This is pretty good. I have to say, I'm impressed.
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
I don't know what to say. Im not up for an Edward bella james love triangle. bella may be forgiving in new moon but no one raped her in new moon. you have created a bella that is off the charts forgiving. bella is tougher than that. her home is with edward and she would be more determined at least in her mind for him. I do get the whole turmoil though that victims go through to become drawn to their attackers and thinking edward would not want her anymore. however this seems to have drawn out long enough and should be more about edward and bella and recovery now. no one wants to find out that james could be decent and care about bella.
Author's Response: Bella is wallowing in guilt right now. Don't worry, next chapter will be more of what you are wanting to see. Bella will be away from James soon. I can't say much more without spoiling the story. :)
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 4
how does James know about Alice's gift??? Second, how is he able to have sex with Bella without killing her, how can he control himself when Edward (the vamp who loves her and his also known for his incrediable restraint) can't????
Author's Response: James knew Alice when she was still human. He knew she had that gift before she was turned. Second, James can have sex with Bella just like the sisters in the Denali coven can. Edward could too, if he wasn't so paranoid that he was going to hurt Bella.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Okay i cant blame Bella for what she just did. the Bastard dazzled her.But i wonder whats gonna happen next.
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 9
Have you read anything about Stockholm Syndrome? Carlisle should bring it up to Edward when he talks about her being programmed.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
grrrrrr
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