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Reviewer: luckycharms0210 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
I always liked Aro. Jovial is a good way for him to be described. You did good with him. Now hurry up and update woman!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
Interesting chapter... hoping the next ones pick up the pace!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! James is so screwed!!!
Since Bella "guessed", doesn't that mean that they didn't break the vampire law?
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 14
bo ya i love aro right now!!!!!!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14
Really great job...Your not gonna end the story with the fight are you...because there's still a lot more you could do after that with edward and Bella or whatever....but ya lol...random thoughts of mine.
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG DO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
sigh.................patiently waiting......................
Author's Response: I sent chapter 14 to be validated on last Saturday. Sorry about the length of time between updates. I have 4 boys, so my life gets really hectic. If it is any consolation I've already started writing chapter 16 so hopefully I'll have it ready by next week to type. Remember "all good things come to those who wait." ; )
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 13
ITaly... really???
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
love the story-especially the angst (makes for a good read:):)
u gotta update:): i wanna see the cullens find bella :):)
love it lots-wetgirlie
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. Keep up the suspense, I love it!!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
Edge of my seat, even though this is the second time I have read this chapter. You are doing such a great job! James is so mean, I love it!!!!
Reviewer: Leprakan (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
This story is facinating and I have great enjoyed!! Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep it up!!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
I just read the first 13 chapters and you are an excellent writer, with excellent insight. I love how James is killing brunettes instead of Bella. I bet he took the clothes off of one of those girls and game them to Bella to wear.
Please, please write again soon. I need another chapter.
Author's Response: You are right about the clothes. James is too much of an ass to go out of his way to get her clothing. It would inconvenience him too much. He only told Bella that he'd take her shopping to manipulate her feelings. You are very perceptive. Glad you are enjoying the story. : )
Reviewer: harrypotterhula (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
ahhhh whens the next chapter coming? :)
Reviewer: pinkflower (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG HURRY UP!
Reviewer: brightangel (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 13
omg please!!!!!!!!!!!! update i love james personality tooo he' s soooooooooo evil:)
Reviewer: shishishi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 13
i love your story! though waiting is a real pain.......... but o well. hurry up i dont like to be hangin! and again i love love love love your story!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 13
Italy. hmmmmm maybe have the volturi turn her or something.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
GO EDWARD GO! :P
love Carlisle...love Alice and Jasper too...:P
I hope Bella holds on! Please don't have James rape her again!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 9
wat the f***???????????????
JAMES AND BELLA??????????????????????????????????
Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
ARGH!!!
CLIFFIE??????
Luv the story but hurry up and get the cullens at that bastards arse!!!!!!
btw (Cullen hurt = unhappy me, but i may be alone in that just for future reference)
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
please update soon. this story is so good. thankyou for writing it.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Oh I need ... NEED ... an update quickly!
Glad Alice is starting to *see* again.
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 13
well I didn't see that one coming...Hope to read more soon
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great work, although I really wanted a larger step in the plot!
Please update soon!
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