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Reviewer: littlebit561 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 14
great chapter i can't wait for the showdown
Author's Response: Thanks. I've almost finished writing chapter 15. I know you'll love it. : )
Reviewer: shishishi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
omg! your eveil!
Author's Response: Mwahhahahahahha!! I know, right! : )
Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 14
I wasn't expecting to hear from Aro, but I really enjoyed it. And honestly, I'm actually happy he wants to do in James. Yay for Aro! Now, hopefully the Cullens will save her from them!
Great update!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed channeling Aro. I hope I can incorperate more of him into upcoming chapters. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh sorry i thought james could sense when danger was after him and he would just avoid it even though he is a tracker, well based on this story at least that what i assumed because thats how he evaded the cullens this far and i thought that victoria was able to escape that was her thing but i guess i dont know twilight as good as i thought i guess it is about time for another read. lol anyway your story is great full of surprises im just excited to see how it plays out especially now since aro plans on turning bella, i wonder if he'll ever get the chance especially with bellas luck in this story.
Author's Response: You don't have to apologize. I can see how you thought that. James is able to evade the Cullen's because he is tracking them. Just because he is not following them doesn't mean that he is not keeping tabs on them. It's just that instead of following them, he is avoiding them. : )
Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aro's perspective was most satisfying. Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: I loved writing from Aro's POV. I think I might have to do more of him in the future.
Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
awesome!!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
that was good.
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
I think you got scheming Aro perfectly. I think Aro is holding all the cards right now...
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
thank you. it seems like forever since an update but thats only because im impatient sorry. anyway this is getting really good, and i love how aro is tricking james. im surprised he isnt sensing danger or whatever, ahwell everyone wants bella, i just hope she will be reunited with edward soon. hurry and smite james
Author's Response: Sensing danger, that was Victoria's specialty. James decided to send Victoria on her way because he wanted Bella. Karma is a bitch, isn't it?
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 14
james plans turn aainst him how will itall turn out can't wait.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 14
please don't have anyone die!!!!!!!!!! except james. you're more then welcome to exterminate him :D
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
WOOHOO! I somewhat am growing used to James... HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!
Author's Response: James has his own charms, I guess. He is an amazing character. It's too bad that he was killed off in Twilight.
Reviewer: pirategirlashley (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 14
this is so good. i really enjoy the way you have james and bella sorta linked together. and i think your dead on with the cullens. espacially Alice and Edward. they love bella somuch. its so great.
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 14
Really loved it! Please update soon
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 14
You did good! Very exciting!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 14
well well... Seems Aro might be helpful for the Cullens for a little while at least... he has an interest in seeing Bella as a vampire at the very least :)
I'm thinking Edward and/or the Cullens in general take care of James, then Aro tries to make a deal or at least forces the Change to take place in Italy; though I hope Edward gets his chance to do the biting :)
Author's Response: Some good speculations. Yes, Aro is very interested in Bella. He wants her for his collection...
Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aro was great, you did a great job. I think Aro's plan is to use Bella to coerce the Cullens into joining the Volturi, and then turn her anyway so that he gets everyone he wants. After using the Cullens to off James, of course.
Good story, can't wait!
Danielle
Author's Response: Yes, Aro is the master manipulator. James was a fool to think that he could coerce the Volturi into doing hs dirty work.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think it was brilliant
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 14
Can't wait for next chapter...I just hope nothing bad is going to happen to Bella when she will be alone in Volterra... Aro seems to want to "protect" her (or her gift)...
Anyway I don't think she will let anyone of the Cullens sacrifice for her life or her freedom...I hope she will give Aro a bit of troubles in his perfect plan...go Bella!
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 14
...waiting waiting waiting...cuntdown to next chapter...Aro is very nice...I think he wants the Cullen to kill James and then kill the Cullens himself to have Bella...evil vampire...
I'd like a Bella pov, but this was perfect...why is she so depressed?
Ik James is going in the countryside to meet the Cullens, does he have to leave Bella? alone? in Volterra? with Aro? unprotected?
AAAAH!
Author's Response: Don't worry. Bella POV coming in the next chapter. Hopefully, I'll have it finished soon. : )
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 14
Yay, an update! That James is a sick bastard. I'm glad that Aro has him figured out and wants rid of him.
Hmmm. I think Aro is going to watch while the Cullens' destroy James and then exchange Bella's life for their collection of powers. Something like that.
So... Aro is actually bothered that James raped Bella? Somehow I was surprised by that. Don't ask me why.
Author's Response: I'd like to think Aro isn't as bloodthirsty as S meyer portrayed him to be. He is cunning and power hungry and he does like to coolect those with special powers. They fascinate him. But just because he covets the abilities of others doesn't make him a sadistic fiend. He follows the traditional diet of a vampire but doesn't believe that they should prolong the torture of their victims.
Reviewer: Lobo (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 14
You should, MUST, update soon, this is too good to wait for. PLEASE!?!?!?!?!
Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 14
omg I feel like there is no way in hell the Cullens can win this one! This story has a happy ending right? RIGHT?????!!!!!!????
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think Aro wants to get rid of James. Then use Bella to lure the Cullen's to join the Vulturi in order to live. Edward would just to be with Bella.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
I was so happy to see that you updated
great chapter
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