WTF?? James is a crazy vamp.  I won't be able to take her again (rape) until she wants me.  Whoa diluded much?  Great story.  It is cool to have more character development to go along with James' role it makes it more interesting to loathe him!  I only get angry within the plot of a story that has merit and yours most certainly does.  Thank You for sharing.

interesting... i hope the sequel is started cause i'm going to go nuts if i have to wait too long ;)

 

Author's Response:

I hate to say it: I havn't started on the sequel yet. I have another story that I'm in the middle of. It's called Eternal Nightmare. I don't have a lot of time to write so I find it really hard to do more than one chaptered story at a time. It would be way to long between updates. As it is, it usually takes me at least two weeks to update. I don't want to make my readers wait too long. I hope to have my other fic nearly wrapped up by the summer. I really can't wait to start on the sequel to this, Volturi Pet. I have some fantastic ideas. Sorry to keep you waiting but I promise that it will be worth the wait. : )

You know...I really wish this story had come with a warning that said it's not complete. There will be a sequel. I hate reading works in progress and if i had known that this was just gonna stop at the most important part, I would have never read it. I want to know what happens with the Volturi. I want to know how they get themselves out of it. I want Bella to kill every one of them. And normally I leave Marcus out of it cause I feel bad for him and he never really does much...Only here he's actually siding with Aro so he can die too. But since you decided to do the story like this and just end it right when it got really really good...i guess I have no choice but to wait for the sequel and read it as each chapter comes out.

That was awesome! Go bella! Now i wonder how this will really all play out.

Wow James was easier than I thought he would be. Now to deal with the volturi.

I had a feeling he was gonna take her there. Well it's not 2 am, and I need to get some sleep. Damn. Guess I'll finish this story tomorrow!

I ha;f expected James to find out that she had used the phone. If only Bella had played along, they might have been at the hotel when the Cullens arrived. Great chapter

Great job. I love the little snipits that show us what the Cullens are doing. Especially when you went into Edward's head and we could see what the others were thinking. Very well done.

Ooo, this looks good! Great intro chapter!

Hmm. Very good. The sense of foreboding that surrounds me is lifted by the little snippets of hope in these chapters.

hmmm dont know if i should leave a review after that ending but i guess i will have to wait & see how it all turns out, but here is my thoughts, now that she is a vamp her gift will be so much more stronger, so when they decide the time is right she will use it jasper will amplify it & they'll wipe the volturi clean out, oooh sounds exciting, im going to check now to see if u have started writing the sequel

eeewww no thx cam gigandet yeh but not the sadistic james we all love to hate you can keep him, but i am partial to some chocolate lol, im thinking there's a lot of chapters left to go so they probably arent going to catch up to him this time, lets just hope he doesnt figure out it was bella that tipped them off & hopefully alice saw the decision to go to the airport