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Reviewer: bellas_alias (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
that wass the worst cliffhanger i have ever read.... it is evil to leave it like that. other than that is was a good story
Reviewer: tbdrew (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
I loved reading Carlisle's POV. But why didn't they fly to Edmonton? Oh, well. I'll have to read and find out...
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow that was quite an ending, lol. This was an amazing story but when are you going to start the sequel of did you already and have it on another site? I loved this story very much and i very much enjoyed reading it. Your an amazing author and i look forward to reading more from you. Well until next time mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: No, I have not written the sequel yet. I do intend to still write it. I've been working on some other stories at the present. Once I get those completed I will begin work on Volturi Pet. I hope that will happen in the near future. I know that this story has been complete for a year. hanks for your review and keep your eyes peeled for Volturi Pet.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 18
wtf is all i have to say
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 10
i like what you did to bella sheild and things with james venom that is very interesting so far this story is very good, lol and very disturbing that i have to skip parts, lol well until next time
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow i was able to read through that fast. Great story.
Reviewer: shaqbarcalis (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 20
AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
Pretty good.
Reviewer: Loveisdifferent (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 20
HOLY SHIT! I really think you are amazing! I mean your a mom, how can you write so, well, amazingly. I mean mom's dont write about rape and stuff, the last time I checked. But I really loved the story. I always reveiw after finishing so I know I like it. And trust me, I cried so much in this. It was amazing. It was so amazing I can't even explain how much I liked it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this and make the sequel! I think I'd die if you didnt! Thank you for writing this and much love! P.S: I have read your other stories and I really love them it! You really need to keep writing! Love ya!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I do intend to write the sequel to this entitled Volturi Pet but my fanfiction has taken a backseat to my newest project. I'm writing my first novel and I entered it in a contest over at the Writer's Coffee Shop. If you like Human Pet you should go and check it out. It's titled Haunted Memories.
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 20
Great story! They better not end up with the Volturi! Please update soon
Reviewer: myppe (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 20
I can't wait for Volturi pet!!!!!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
very good Angry Carlisle... loved it!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
great story... angry @ her reaction
Reviewer: Mohanie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
BRavo wonderful story!!! Please Please hurry with part 2... I really want to see a voltori/ cullen standoff!!! With Bella's new power that would be amazing I bet!!!
Reviewer: Randi1857 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
F***ing get her home is what I think—and make sure she’s still human while you’re at it! Btw, this is good, but the suspense is friggin’ killing me!!!
Reviewer: Randi1857 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Is James going after Bella because of Alice?? I am litterally banging the keyboard I'm so mad at James! I want to cheerfully beat him to death with his own arm!!!
Reviewer: redsoxlove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 20
i picked this story because i'm constantly waiting for updates, so i wanted to read one that was complete..i really wish i had a warning that this would end this way. i would have waited to read it!
Reviewer: trushel (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
I love this James.
Reviewer: trushel (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is a great idea for a story. Hoe boring would it be to tell the same story over and over again? Im glad ouve gone here and Im intrsted in James and Bella relationship. Hopefully there is a discription of James in Bellas eyes .
Reviewer: trushel (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
Lovin it .
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 20
so awesome this here is
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 19
awesome
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow...very awesome chapter
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow...very awesome chapter
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