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Reviews For The Escape
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Part 2

Oh I likey ... a new twist! Wonder where they are going ... hmmm, and what's gonna happen?



Author's Response:

We shall see...

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 9

YUM



Author's Response: Very yum!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 8

ooo la la



Author's Response: Indeed! ;)

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Part 2

Oooooh!  A trip!  Where could they be going, prey tell?

Hmmm.  Good chapter, well worth the wait I think.  NOT that I want to do it again, though.



Author's Response:

All (or at least some!) shall be revealed in the next post!  I'm pleased that you though the wait was worthwhile.  I will do my best to avoid keeping you hanging on so long again!  :)

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

LOL the thought of what Charlie is gonna say ... too funny.



Author's Response: Haha... Charlie might just suprise ya!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

WOW! Fantastic ... love the emotions and the contrast with Bella's embarassment and the humor at the end ... FANTASTIC!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I can't wait to hear what you think of the rest  :)

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Part 2

Charlie has come a long way.  :)  Can't wait to see where they go.  Enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Hasn't he just?  :)  LOL, I'm proud of him...

Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Part 2

Please update soon, I can't wait to read more. This chapter was great!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  I assure you the next update is not too far away :)

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Part 2

This is a very good story!

Looking forward to the next update :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm looking forward to you all reading it too :)

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

THIS AND THE BIRTH OF THEIR BABY ARE MY MOST FAVORITE TOPICS  AND I CANT WAIT TO TAKE THIS JOURNEY WITH YOU



Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you are enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 11

Okay, not to be a bitch, but will there be an update anytime soon?  I understand so completely that real life trumps all fanfic endeavors, but this is on my list of 'keep an eye out for' stories :p!

 

Hope to hear from you soon and that everything's alright



Author's Response:

You're not being bitchy at all! I know that feeling well, waiting for an update that looks like it might never arrive! However, I can reassure you that this fic is far from abandoned.  In fact, I just sent the next chapter to my beta for validation, so assuming I haven't forgotten how to write, it should be up for your reading pleasure within a day or two! 

Thanks for sticking with me,

Shelly

Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

LOVE the shoutout to Beatles history!  Brought tears to my eyes...(I'm a Beatles fan -- and an anglophile -- as if you can't tell.)

 

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more, and soon. 

 

Okay, I'll stop my pathetic groveling now.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I'm a bit of a Beatles nut too, I must admit! Going to Liverpool in October with my sister for a few days, so can't wait! *squeals like the fangirl she is*

No need to stop the grovelling, deary... It makes me feel special! LOL!

Next update should be up VERY soon.

Shelly

Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Bonus Post - Charlie's P.O.V.

Awesome!  I love your take on Charlie, and the elegant way your Edward speaks.  I love your little sprinkling of Britishisms too!  And Raynaud's disease -- brilliant.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Charlie is fun to write! As for Britishisms, I'm an Irish gal with a penchant for the clasics, so I guess they're the two reasons for 'em!

Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent! Beautiful!  You are an excellent writer.  Your depiction of smut-- and romance -- is just perfect. 



Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you! Seriously! :)

Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 4

Beautiful!!!



Author's Response: Aw shucks Shelly XXX

Reviewer: btrimble (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

Just today found your wonderful story. I love the way you write Bella and Edward discovering each other: it's incredibly captivating and it flows so well, and perhaps best of all it feels right for them. Thank you!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and the next, and the next...).



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you are enjoying it all so far.  I try to write B & E as the teenagers they both are under their mature facades, and let's face it, it's not always smooth sailing!  There are lots of hiccups and misunderstandings along the way, but they love each other deeply, so I'm sure you can guess that it'll all turn out happily ever after.

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 11

I really like the side references you come up...Alice and the Beatles for example.  Looking forward to an update!  (Longer chapters? pretty please?)



Author's Response:

ThankS!  I'm a bit of a trivia nerd, and I love throwing in bits of random references into what I write.  I guess I can't escape my inner teacher, wanting people to learn as they have fun reading, lol!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Bonus Post - Charlie's P.O.V.

Excellent!  Loved having Charlie's POV and loved that he is wiser than he lets on :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I love writing him! 

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying your story!  Your Bella and Edward are spot on!  (And the intimate scenes....hot!)  Can't wait for more:)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! :)  I'm doing my best to stay as in-character as possible, so it's great to get feedback from readers keeping me on-track.

 

Shelly

Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

lol...sorry, all I could think about for the last third of this chapter was, "are they going to wipe her stomach and hand off, or just keep talking?"  Heh.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Bella loves Edward unconditionally, sparkle spunk and all...

Reviewer: lovelivelaugh (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 11

are you going to do her wedding day too?

im eager for more please

 



Author's Response:

I'm sure that is a possibility... ;)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

Alice reminds me of Mary Poppins-practically perfect in every way!



Author's Response:

Isn't she just! :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

I can't wait for Edward to see her!!!  Great update.



Author's Response:

I know!  Me neither!  I love weddings :)

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

Yes, you really do have to love Alice!  This chapter was so sweet that I couldn't help but smile through the whole thing!! 



Author's Response: She's a sweetie pie! Glad ya liked!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 11

Of course Bella is a beautiful bride.  It is Bella, after all.  Edward chose her because she's special.  I'm really looking forward to the wedding.  I admit it.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree with you more!  Bella is the special person inside of us all that's waiting to be uncovered.  :)

As for the wedding - me too!

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