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Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
Very Good... I loved this exchange! I could so see the two of them saying this.
“Bella,” he groaned. “Please, tell me to stop!” He thrust hard against me.
“Not. A. Chance!” I managed to say in between gasps. We had gotten this far, impossible for me to let him stop now.
Edward emitted a noise of sheer lust, and I moaned wantonly as he pushed a long finger firmly into me.
“Bella! I’m sorry!” Edward exclaimed in response to my cry.
“Don’t stop! Not hurt...Feels so good!” I gasped. It seemed that monosyllabic words were all I was capable of at that moment.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm doing my best to keep them as true to character as possible!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
Love it...
This line was so Edward. You did a great job capturing his essence.
Edward continued, “You see, I’ve always thought about what it would be like to have you here with me, like this. The thought alone has been enough to drive me to distraction more times than I would care to remember. And now, having seen you, having touched you, Bella, I don’t think I can go back to how things were.
Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 4
Good Chapter.. Silly Bella trying to think when his Icy hands are all over her.
Author's Response: Silly Bella indeed!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hello.. That boy with out his shirt would be like Christmas!
Author's Response: And everyone loves Christmas!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hitting a soild object! Love it. Poor Edward.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! You'd think Bella would have learned her lesson at this stage...
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start to teh story, can't wait to see how Bella Gets out of this one...
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
I like the development.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
great. your arrangement of pre-wedding workout is better than others. please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall...
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
yum-eeeee!!!! that was absolutely delicious I wish I could be this creative hahahahaha. yay for nights alone at Bella's! can't wait for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Everybody loves sleepovers! LOL!
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Bonus Post - Charlie's P.O.V.
I like the coversation between Charlie and Edward. SM did not make it happen at her 4 books. Charlie should have loved Edward if he would have chances talking to Edward.
Author's Response: | thought it needed to be done... I'm not sure if Charlie exactly loves Edward yet, but at the very least, he has started to have a lot more respect for him. Thanks for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
yay charlie. what a mature dad he is hahahahaha =)
Author's Response: lol! I agree with ya!
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is so beautifully written! The combination of youthful love and lust is just right ans very believable. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your review! I'm trying to keep the balance just right between first love and first lust, so it's great to hear that you think I'm managing to do that in a way that is believable. Thanks again, and the next chapter shouldn't be far away...
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
YOU ARE KILLING ME! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *tries to resusitate, but in vain*
Oops, sorry! I guess a new chapter is the only cure! She'll just have to wait another day or so... I'm sure she'll pull through!
Reviewer: AradiaRising (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh now it's just MEAN to leave off in mid-sentance like that. lol Mean I say! *pout*
Very much enjoying the story.
Author's Response: *sticks out tongue*
Nyah, nyah, nyah, nyah, nyah!
lol! :)
Glad to hear that you're enjoying it! The next chapter should be up within the next day or so
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 9
i really hope that bella doesn't suddenly push edward away while he's doing all this stuff!
excellent chapter, by the way.
please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! We shall see...
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
what???? that's a hell of a place to leave us. you are a devil!!! obviously i thought that the chapter was good. but we didn't even get to see what else alice packed. come on i know her well enough one pair of pjs wasn't all she packed.
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm mean! :p
Yes, you do know Alice well...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I love that you love it!
Reviewer: keerplunk2809 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
wow... that was so hot! and so unfinish... haha.. i want to se what happen later!
Author's Response: Thanks...and trust me, you will see!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
wow, that was intense! Good goin:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: minutewithoutyou (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 9
You just had to leave us hanging didn't you! That was so wrong! Oh so very hot though. Keep up the good work! Look forward to reading more... Hopefully soon!
Author's Response: Yes, I did! As it was, that was probably the longest chapter I've written ever! Glad you enjoyed the lemony goodness!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
THAT WAS F**KING AWESOME!!!!!WOO HOO!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a mill! :)
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
That was very gracious of Charlie. I know this is difficult for him, but they are about to be married after all. The lemon was totally hot and I loved it. I always love Edward and Bella together. It's no wonder they are everyone's favourite couple. Ahhh.
Author's Response: Exactly! Charlie has to move with the times! Glad you enjoyed the lemon :) I love Bella and Edward too...
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 9
omg u just left us HANGING?!
this has got to be the best cliff hanger of all time..ahaha
Author's Response: Yes, I did. What can I say - I'm a meanie!
Reviewer: sparkles (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 9
wow
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 9
It's gonna be a looong night! Go Bella!
Author's Response: Let's just say I'm glad that Charlie decided to spend the night at the Blacks' house...
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