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Reviews For Evening Falls
Reviewer: Samantha Whitlock (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 06:15 AM · On: Clash

I'm totally riding that train to Crushtown with Elisa. James is kind of a catch:D Brooding bad boy and he writes poetry? *swoons* This was a great chapter...well, half of a chapter. The first half was great, too:) Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I know; I dreamed about guys like Jimmy and when I finally and sadly realized they weren't actually out there (or not often, anyway) I figured they could at least exist in my story.  I'm so happy to know you're enjoying the story - thanks again for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:33 PM · On: Clash

WOW! This story is bloody brilliant! I adore it! For some reason I wanted Elisa to have more encounters with Jacob Black. She seemed like his perfect partner, and in no way a replacement for Bella. I still wish she could see him....*pouts* I was a total team Edward girl until I read Breaking Dawn and now I'm a Jacob girl all the way. I think Jacob and Elisa could have been something really great. ARRRRGHHH and Jasper is just doing my nut in! Why is he being all mean and moody...I understand he can feel Elisa's feelings but come on Jazzy...Crack a smile! Love love love Edward and Bella in this fic...Edward especially..Like a Virgin was so funny I almost cried :D

Brilliant lovey, and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments!

I loved Elisa and Jacob together too...in a way I really wanted to put them together.  Circumstances just weren't right for them.  *sniff*  I do love Jacob now too and I wasn't a fan of his for a long time. 

 Jasper's attitude is mostly because he thinks they're all being idiots, taking in another human, and risking so much, plus he thinks Elisa is too reckless, and well...he's kinda right.  :D  There's going to be a lot of developments in the Elisa/Jasper relationship though...I'm having fun with them being a bit adversarial to each other but there may come a point where their attitude towards each other changes - whether it's for the better or for the worse I'm not saying yet.  =P

Thanks again so much for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Clash

AHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE!!!! Oh yeah, go Elisa, go, go, go ELisa, woo!! Boy, I wish I could think of some of these lines she says at the right times, so I could sound smart too.... But JAMES, or JIMMY!!! OMG!! Everything I wanted him to be, and the likeness between him and Edward was hysterical. At first he seemed like EMO BOY, y'know, the 'Captain Emo!' type, but my fears are gone on that subject.....reminds me of a guy in my school, but I don't like him and he's not this deep souled person that Jimmy is.....

And the next chapter, oh wow! I can't wait to hear it--i know how it feels to build up a chapter for a long time, believe me--and i'm definitely gonna like it. ^_^

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I know Jimmy's brand new to the story but he's been in my head for a long time and I love him, so it's a thrill to know that others might like him too. 

I'm excited to write the next chapter but so nervous too.  With the way I write, it might end up being two or three chapters, lol.

Reviewer: fabricating-evidence (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 10:51 PM · On: Dreaming: Elisa

Ugh. Remedial math is hell. 

Love this story - the Elisa/Rose moments are really sweet. Have you read the Puppet Master? Its on the fanfiction.net site - somewhat similar in that a normal person ends up in Twilight. Good stuff

*Added to favorites* Great job! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I love writing Elisa and Rose and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I haven't read The Puppet Master beyond the first couple of chapters but I hear it's very good.  I'm saving it as a treat to myself once I get done with this series.  I think it's here too - at least I've seen the thread for it in the forums. 

 

Reviewer: smellyia (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 07:43 PM · On: Things Worth Dying For

"be kind of vain through my thirties and forties"

This whole section is GOLD.

"statuesque and sexy may have passed me by but being little and cute really comes in handy sometimes"

Don't I know it. This was fabulous.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  That was one of my favorite chapters to write so I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  Elisa's just fun to have in my head.

Reviewer: Bailing1521 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:15 PM · On: Miles To Go

I really just love Elisa.  Her humor, while possibly ill-timed, is infectious.  "Munchkin Princess" is hillarious!  As was her van comment in the last chapter and Emmett's response.  So many twists.  Nothing like a good time-shift to keep things interesting.  I'm definitely looking forward to the start of school and the introduction of her non-Bella branded crush.  Where the heck do you come up with these descriptions!  They're so clever.

Author's Response: Thank you so much again!  :D  I have many more twists planned...I swear this story just goes on and on in my head.  I'm working on the next part of Elisa's chapter now and it's so much fun to write.  I hope you enjoy it! 

Reviewer: Bailing1521 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 11:33 AM · On: The Storm

First of all, I love this story.  I took a chance because I'm not usually a huge fan when OC's are a main part of the plot, but you've done such a wonderful job incorporating Elisa into the Cullen's world without making her a scene hog.  In fact, I love her refreshing, sometimes self-depracating humor so much that in chapters where she doesn't appear, I'm like, "Where's Elisa?  I miss her!"  BTW, I really love her relationship with all the characters--esp. Emmett and the bear scene, Rosalie's exasperation after Elsa's showdown with Tanya, and Edward's teasing of her when he talks about her crush.  Esp. poignant is the way you describe the blossoming of Rosalie's protective side.  You make a prickly character so likeable in many ways. 

HUGE compliments on chapter 8, btw.  Wow...I was totally engulfed by all the anguish between Bella and Edward and was so relieved that the two of them finally came to a true understanding.  Besides, there is something so deliciously wonderful about a tortured Edward.  Hee hee.  I can't wait to read what happens next and figure out what is really going on with Elisa's memory.  Plus the dream...hello!  Freaky!    Keep up the great work.  I look forward to more chapters--soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  That means the world to me - I've grown to love Elisa so much and to know that others enjoy her as well is so great.  I definitely wanted to incorporate her into the story in a way where it wouldn't change too unrealistically so it's very good to know I'm somewhat successful in that. 

Rosalie is definitely one of my favorites; so much fun to write.  I love bringing out her big sister/maternal instincts.

And thanks again for the comments on Forever.  I've used this story quite a bit to work out my own issues and unanswered questions, and one thing that always bothered me about the Twilight series was Edward never quite committing to making Bella a vampire and Bella ignoring how strongly he felt about it, so that was my way of working it out.  It was definitely one of my favorite things to write.  Thanks again - I very much appreciate that you took the time to read and comment!

Reviewer: katdan2003 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 07:59 PM · On: Miles To Go

Excellent story line...love Elisa!  Please post again soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  The next chapter will be up this week - I can't wait to finish it.

Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2008 03:29 PM · On: Miles To Go

I'm still a bit new to this whole Twilight fiction bit - ;o) - but I have to say I enjoy this story so much.  It's rare for me to read WIPs in any fandom but I couldn't resist this one after the original.  I love that you get into the minds of so many characters.

And this chapter?  Makes me want so more because really?  Spinning-changing-life-altering moment of time?  I need to know why.  :o)



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I have so much fun writing this story and feedback like yours makes my day.  It's fun playing around in different minds but exhausting to write sometimes.  :D  Thanks again for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 12:59 PM · On: Miles To Go

.........................................
What happened?!?!?! WHY DID EVERYTHINGGOSWIRLYVORTEXISHANDELISASAWTHINGS?!IT'SLIKEONTHEDISCOVERYCHANNELORLIKE SYLVIA BROWN!! AND THE EXCERPT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE!!!EXCERPT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE IS FINALLY HERE!!! THE HUNKY CANADA DREAM BOY I'VE BEEN HOPING EXISTED ARRIVED RIGHT ON TIME!!!!!! And the way you wrote it....the way you WROTE IT, Avalonia!! Is there any end to the perfection that is your writing?! I absolutely have to repeat it, HAVE to!!


"Poetry? He wrote poetry? Could it be...a boy that was both pretty and deep? OK, I was definitely riding the train into Crushville now and it was with no small amount of relief. Goodbye, Edward. So long, Jacob Black. It was about damn time I got to crush on someone who hadn't been branded by Bella first."


That is so SO Elisa, saying stuff like 'about time I got to crush on somebody who hadn't been branded by Bella first.' That, my dear friend, that one glorious, yet humourous sentence is enough on its own, coupled wih the fact that my DREAMY CANADIAN BOY WHO I'VE BEEN BEGGING YOU TO CREATE IS NOW FINALLY HERE AND I HOPE HE IS THE PERFECTION OF MY--I mean, Elisa's--DREAMS!!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I think you'll enjoy the next part of the chapter - it's been fun to write, anyway.  One Canadian Boy, coming right up!   Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 04:59 PM · On: The Storm

'Ello Moto. Anyway, like I said before, that was A to the W-E-S-O-M-E!!
By the way, have you read 'A Day in the Life of the Cullens: A Play in However Many Acts I Get Around To.' by marve? It's the most hysterical thing I have evah read evah, besides El's smart mouth, hee hee, and if you haven't, go read it and get back to me ^_^ Byeas!

Author's Response: Haven't read it yet but I've seen it up - I'll have to check it out.  I love the funny fics SO much.

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 05:17 PM · On: The Storm

This review is a sign of how dedicated I am to this story, because I am 5 hours away from my house and must use my grandparents' computer.
But that's beside the point. Anyway, what I signed in to type was: Wowza, that was perfect. Crystal clear enough that it was apparant what was happening and the feelings at the time, yet vague enough that it wasn't a disgustingly smutty piece of work. In short, it was perfectly clear, yet also perfectly vague, if that makes any sense, and I loved it. Just more testament to how incredibly descriptive and creative you are, my friend. Please keep going on this!!

Author's Response: I missed responding to this one!  I'm so sorry.  Thank you so much for your comments - it was such a hard chapter to write and I'm so happy you liked it. 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Bittersweet Symphony

Woohoo! That, my friend, was, as I said before, exactly to a T what should have happened in Breaking Dawn!! I loved the whole "You've already forgot me," "In a different world you and me together," dialogue between Jakey and El *hope you don't mind--nicknames are soo fun!*

LOL, I LOVE delves into the mind of Edward, because his thoughts are so awesome!! I also love watching *or reading....?* him be nervous, because in everything he's so unnervingly, upsettingly, infuriatingly CALM AND COLLECTED AND UNSWERVED BY EVERY LITTLE THING!! I mean, for God's sakes the vampire HAS to get nervous sometimes, and when he does, it's fun to watch-slash-read. Hehe, can't wait to read the wedding night chapter, not because of smut *ugh, gag me with a spoon!* but because I can't wait to read the dialogue. Edward nervous while Bella is perfectly calm is a refreshing change of pace we need to see more of. Well, bye!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I think the Jacob/Elisa scenes were some of my favorite ever to write.  I also love writing Edward - it's fun getting in his head.

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 12:05 PM · On: Dare You To Move

Ohmygawd...... I'm sorry I didn't respond sooner but I was gone the whole weekend on vacation, but this was delightful to come back to......
First off, I love the song choice. 'Dare You To Move' is one of my all-time favorite songs, and it's on constant rotation on my iPod.
Second, this is what it should have been like in Breaking Dawn. This is how I imagined the wedding, but ti didn't go so beautifully as this.
Third, I love the 'every step I took, I said goodbye' idea. How she says goodbye to Renee, Charlie, her friends...... It's such a beautiful thought and should have been included in BD.
These passages is especially my favorite.....

" Most of all, goodbye to me, Bella from Phoenix, Bella of Forks, human, clumsy, insecure Bella Swan. I'd learned all I could from the me I was right then. Now I was choosing to let her go, to metamorphasis, not just into a vampire, but into an adult, a lover, a fighter, and a wife. Everything was going to change. I wondered what this new Bella would be like. I hoped that I could be proud of her. I hoped that she would be someone who deserved to be as lucky as I knew I was (.....) The time for goodbyes was past now. My future was waiting, and on steady legs and with a soaring heart, I walked forward to meet it. "

How beautiful is that?! This is exactly what I imagined in BD, but all it said was Rosalie doing her hair, walking down the way, saying vows. I'm not saying it was bad/boring, but this is beautiful and should have been what happened. How Bella feels on this--all the terror yet happiness--you convey so beautifully. You definitely have a future in writing, my friend, and I hope the rest is as wonderful as this!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really loved writing this chapter.  I was always a very vocal member of Team Bella Gets Vamped back when we didn't know whether it would happen or not, but there's a certain amount of grief and loss in that life path too.  She really is giving up an incredible amount, and she's walking away from a lot of good people.  I wanted to acknowledge that.  I am so glad you got what I was trying to convey; that means I didn't go too far off track.  Thanks again for your reviews! 

 

Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 08:29 PM · On: Dare You To Move

Yay...getting closer to new stuff!

Can't wait...your vagueness is wretched.  Quit being such a damn tease and post something already!



Author's Response:

Hahah so sorry for that vague response.  I was trying to respond to iliveinfantasies and ended up responding to yours instead.  I know; I'm so vague.  I'm afraid if I give too much away people will realize how insane I really am.  I'm trying to suck you all in slowly.  I hope the new chapter will be out on FFN tomorrow...I hope I hope I hope.

 

Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 08:40 PM · On: Wedding Daze

Aw.

You know I love this!  It's beautious.  You should have a million reviews, but like mine, yours gets lost because it's not NC-17 and because it needs a banner!

 

You're my favorite! Let's get crackin on the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Oh...hehehe...well, there's definitely, maybe, could possibly be a Canadian guy in Elisa's future.  The thing is...the path to true love is never easy.  And a lot of things are not what they seem.  Oh, and sometimes the things we want are not the things we need. 

:D  Do you think I could be any more vague and annoying?  I'll just say this:  Elisa definitely does have a romantic future ahead of her but there are definite obstacles and false starts along the way. 

Thanks again for continuing to read and review...I'm so glad you're enjoying Elisa's journey. 

 

 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Wedding Daze

Ai'ight, now that the wedding is finally up and center, time to focus on something infinitely important to my survival--KNOWING IF ELISA GETS HER HOT HOCKEY PLAYING CANADIAN GUY OR NOT!!!!!!!!1!!!ONE!!!!!!11!!ELEVEN!!!!1 You know, I've been rooting for her to find him since you decided on Canada....if there is no Canada boy, I'll be.....well, rendered speechless, for one thing, but I'll still love this a ton, so no worries/pressure!! *turns away, praying* Please, please, please let Logan (my name for the not-yet-created guy--but whatever name you choose will be greatness with me) be there.....and hot.....and hot!

Author's Response:

Crap.  I responded to this but somehow got it under sideadde's review instead.

I am such a moron.   

 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 05:40 PM · On: Wedding Daze

Oh, HUZZAH!! FINALLY, ALL ROADBLOCKS ARE GONE, and they can finally get hitched, tie the knot, et cetera, et cetera.
That, my friend, THAT was what I imagined Tanya to be--a skanky, hooker-type, motherf-- *gets hand slapped over mouth*
And, finally....the day we were all waiting for. The wedding, huzzah, hurray, yippee, et cetera!!!
I hope there's not any more bad things on the way--because I already know what I'll say if bad things happen: "Dangit, Jim!" Yeah, my friend *let's just call her 'B.'* says "Dangit, Jim!" when nothing goes right and it rubbed off......my vocabulary is weird that way. I say stuff like kerr (means cool) dangit jim, gack, (means ahh!) your mom (when someone says something like 'who called?') and OMJ (oh my Jonas). Yep. And that chapter was OMJ-worthy. I just hope this peace lasts long enough.....
But seriously, Tanya not loving Edward, just wanting him as a, pardon my French, "bang buddy," was exactly what I thought she was like. Imagine my disappointment when she was nice. Blech.

P.S. When I read the top, you know, "Thank you to any that are reading this and special thanks to iliveinfantasies and sideadde for your feedback - it always makes me smile. :)" I was like 'iliveinfantasies.....wait, that's me! Yay!' ^_^

Author's Response:

*chuckles*  Did I make her sound that bad?  Really?  I actually like Tanya (I mean, my vision of her.)  I always figured she wasn't really a villain; I mean the only thing she ever did 'wrong' was like Edward, and we're all guilty of that.  OK, so she tried to wreck the wedding, but still...  :D  She really does love Edward, but not in 'that way'.  Her actions were motivated more out of loneliness than a desire to be malicious. 

Anyway, I'm just trying to give her some layers here and there.  I wrote this chapter before Breaking Dawn came out and I'm glad I did because although I don't think of her as evil, I don't think of her as too nice either, or sitting around wringing her hands waiting for a husband to come along, which is the impression I got of her in BD. 

I hope you like the next chapter; see, I told you it would lighten up.  :p   

 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 12:15 PM · On: Unexpected

OHMYGAWD THAT WAS AN ANGSTY ANGSTY ANGSTYYYYYYYYYYY CHAPTER!!! HOW ELISA IS FEELING SORRY FOR JACOB, JACOB RAN AWAY, EDWARD'S TRYING TO CONVINCE BELLA TO DITCH THEIR OWN WEDDING, AND TANYA?!?!?! WHY ISN'T ANY F-- I MEAN, THING GOING RIGHT ON THIS MOST PERFECT OF PERFECT DAYS?! AFTER THEY'RE MARRIED IT'S GONNA BE SO MUCH BETTER...... I mean, come on!! Avalonia, you're killing me here with all the angst!!! The Jakey factor is taken care of (yay, no imprint, right?) But now, Edward, trying to ditch his wedding?! I can't be-LIEVE IT!! Why, oh why......Bella, Bella, Bella, if you can hear me, please say no to ditching this, please please please!! Avalonia, please make her say no!! Please please PLEASE!! Oh, make Tanya go away, or not cause trouble, please!! (sobs) Please, Don't ditch your wedding, please pleaseplease!! (sobs some more) Oh god, now I'm hooked more than ever, please let everything turn out right in the end.......

Author's Response:

Teehee...I'm sorry.  It was rather angsty, now that I think about it.  I can't help it...I love the angst.  The Elisa/Jacob segment was one of my favorite things to write ever - I had a lot of fun imagining their little battle of wills.

  It does get lighter very quickly but as to whether Bella takes Edward up on his offer...well, I'll go upload now so you shouldn't have to wait long to see.  :P  Thanks for continuing to read and review!

Reviewer: SiDEADde (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 09:11 PM · On: Unexpected

I love this story.

You need a banner!  I wish I knew how to make them.

New stuff new stuff new stuff!

 



Author's Response:

I want a banner now!  I do know how to make them, but my skills are limited, so when I do it they are pretty ugly.  I have a graphically talented friend...maybe I'll beg her for one.  I'm working on the next chapter now.  Already seems like there's a LOT more Alice in this chapter - wonder whose influence that could be?  :D

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Beautiful Day

Elisa's gonna have fun in Canada, eh? Well, hopefully she finds her Candain cutie! Her hockey heartthrob! Her mountee magician!! Her......um......Well, her boyfriend.
I love Jakey, fo'sho, but I can't wait for El to dig into him, because she's a spitfire!! And it's EXCITING!! Unless he imprints uopn her, which ain't gonna happen, not on my watch......right....? Yeah. Anyway.....

So, HYPOTHETICALLY, if *when?* there is her hockey-playa boyyfriendd, what shalt his name be....ith? Um.......Joe? Kevin? Nick? Frankie? *I've got Jonas on the brain......^_^

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Beautiful Day

Wow, talk about a seriously f--I mean, screwed up day! *No, just kidding, I don't swear.* Billy interfering, which he always does, Jake hiding in the bushes, and Renee coming to the wedding.....THIS IS BETTER THAN LIVING LOHAN AND KEEPING UP WITH THE KARDASHIANS COMBINED!! *grabs popcorn* No, I don't watch those shows....but I see them on The Soup.....By the way, you should watch The Soup on E!
Elisa stalking off to deal with the Jakey factor is gonna be good.....Excitement!!! But slugging werewolf equals broken hand, so she better be careful!!!!!!!!!!11!!!!ONE!!!!!1!!!!11!!!!ELEVEN!!!1! And Bella's reaction.....

Anyway, about that hot Canadian hockey-playing boy.....is he gonna show up in Canada der, eh? Elisa needs some Canada-leafy-maple syrupy-hockey love! ^_^ Unless.....but no, not Jacob.....he can't imprint on her.....well, technically he CAN, because he hasn't seen her yet, but hot Canada boy is plan A, but i'll gladly accept Jacob. I love Jacob, did I ever say that? Love. Him. So, I'm a supporter of Jenesmee, 'better than Brangelina!' Or Eliob.....?



~"Got the news today/Doctor said I had to stay/A little bit longer, and I'll be fine"~ Nick Jonas *

Author's Response:

Hehehe, Elisa's going to have a good time in Canada, that's all I will say.  :D

Thanks so much for reviewing!  It really cheers me up.  There was actually supposed to be another chapter uploaded with this one but it didn't go through for whatever reason; I'm going to try resubmitting it, plus another chapter right now.  Thanks again...hope you enjoy the Jacobness coming up.   

 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 10:09 AM · On: Dreaming: Edward

Ge......js......ak......un......le........
*gestures wildly with hands, trying to find words that describe this right now*

*starts shaking like a leaf on crack...you know what's coming....*
OMYGAWDTHATWASAWESOMEWITHJASPERANDELISAANDTHEREMEDIALMATH,HAHAHAHATHATWASLOL-WORTHYANDTHENBELLA'SNIGHTMARE,WHAT'SWITHTHEBLOODONELISA?ISSHEGONNABLEEDONHERORWHAT?ANDEDWARD!!!ILOVEDELVESINTOHISMIND,HE'SSODEEPANDYOUREALLYCAPTUREDITWELL,ANDYOUKNEWIWASGONNASPAZZLIKETHIS,BECAUSEIHAVEBEEN,ANDYOUAREPROBLYTHINKIN'OHGREAT,NOWSHE'SGONNAGRINDOUTANOTHERSPAZ-TASTICREPLY,RIGHT?'WELL,YEAH!!ANDSTALKERBOYEDWARD,HOWFUNNYISTHAT?IWOULDBEALITTLESCAREDTOO--BUTMOSTLYENDEAVORED--ANDTHEWEDDING!!OHHALLELUJAHTHEGLORIOUSDAYHASARRIVED!!!ANDTHEWEDDINGNIGHT.....*GULP* MAYBE YOU SHOULD DO WHAT STEPHENIE DID AND KEEP IT VAGUE, BECAUSE I HAVE NO STOMACH OR BRAIN TO READ SMUT OR LEMONS OR WHATEVAHS, BUT IF YOU WRITE A LEMON MORE POWER TO YOU. AND CANADA!! *holds up leaf flag* OH CANADA, THE PLACE I CALL MY HOME.....No, just kidding. I was only in canada once, and i don't remember it at all......BUT CANADA!! ARETHEREANYCANADIANVAMPIRES?!?!?!?! MAYBE ELISA WILL MEET A HOT-TO-TROT CANADIAN HOCKEY-PLAYIN' BOY-SLASH-POSSIBLY-VAMPIRE? AND HE'LL BE ALL 'HEY DER, LIZA, HOW BOOT DAT DER EH?' AND SHE'LL FALL MADLY IN LUV WITH HIS FREAKY ACCENT (WHICH I CAN IMITATE QUITE WELL DER, EH?) AND HE'LL BECOME A MOUNTEE!!!!! YAY MOUNTEES!!! AND, EMMETT IS FUNNY HOW YOU PORTRAY HIM, THE ONLY THING THAT WOULD MAKE IT EVEN FUNNIER IS CHARLIE THE UNICORN QUOTES!!! BUT, I LOVE WHATEVER YOU DO, SO OK......

*cricket, cricket*

Yes, I love Charlie the Unicorn!! ^_^

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for continuing to review!  Bella's nightmare...well, there's definitely a story behind that.  Usually when I throw out things like that, they may hint at more than one event... 

Canada's going to be interesting to write; I've only been there once myself so I'm depending a lot on Wikipedia and secondhand information to fill in the blanks. 

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:08 AM · On: Just a Girl

So, what, is this your 13th review? And I'm responsible for....9, 10 of them? What does that mean, do you think? *"Um, that you love the story?"*
Well, obviously...... ^_^ Seriously, maybe I should back off a little bit? Or not? Your wish is my command, Avalonia. *bows*


Funny, now I have that song, "Genie in a Bottle" running through my head.... *I'm a genie in a bottle.....*

Reviewer: iliveinfantasies (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Forever

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!ONE!!!!11!!!ELEVEN!!!

FI-NAH-LEE!! I've been waiting for something like that to happen! In Breaking Dawn, or any of the other books, I wish she'd have told him that, "And you're really so sure that I don't understand what I'm doing? That I haven't thought this out? Edward, at some point you have to give me a little credit here. You can't read my mind, so stop assuming that you know what I have and have not considered. I know exactly what I'm giving up. My parents, my human future, children, growing old,...and if you don't think that I understand how precious those things are then you've seriously underestimated me. What you don't understand is that I want you and I want eternity to spend at your side more. I don't ever want to have to be without you, Edward...it would make everything else meaningless. Everything." TOTALLY MY SENTIMENTS!! Can you read minds, too? Because that was EXACTLY to a T what I was thinking, and it's about time he realized that......I mean, don't get me wrong, I LOVE, NO, ADORE, EDWARD CULLEN, but he needs to stop thinking she doesn't know what she's giving up. But I still love him anywayz ^_^
LOL, my fave line was "With my crazy luck, the first time I went to King's Cross Station I'd stumble, hit my head, and wake up at Hogwarts. Just imagine all the trouble I could cause with a wand..." Funny, because people are always comparing the two, asking the Eternal Question: "Which is better, Twilight or Harry Potter? Vampires or wizards?" Plus, the mental image of Elisa running into Ron, Hermione, and Harry, brandishing a wand.....*gigglesnort!* She's probably Avada Kedavra them......*gigglesnorts again and tries not to choke on pink lemonade* That would be an excellent idea for a spin-off.....they all take a trip to London, she actually wakes up at Hogwarts, hiliarity ensues, she makes it back to the Cullens and stays with them fo'evah and eva.

*cricket, cricket*

Well, a girl can dream, can't she?

Author's Response:

I am really glad you liked that conversation.  Two things that bothered me had always been, first of all, that Edward was so reluctant to make Bella a vampire, and two, that she was so willing to force him to do it anyway, knowing how strongly he felt that it was wrong.  This was my way to try and put those issues to bed - they can't be completely resolved with one conversation but I needed them to make their peace with it.

LOL, Elisa at Hogwarts...the thought boggles my mind.  It would be funny though.  No, I think she's pretty good where she's at plus I have all this drama planned....  :p

Thanks again for your review!  :D 

 

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