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Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

ok, what's next.  I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

and the hits just keep coming..... not cool not cool at all!

can't wait to see what happens next.... cause Tanya having a lo-jack on Eddie is pathetic!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

"mini cliffy" that was exactly what i was thinking. haha

~ B

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

"minbi cliffy" that was exactly what i was thinking. haha

~ B

Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

Please update soon. I love being on the edge of my seat but dang...I can not last that long to see what happens next.

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 9

It was all too good to be true :(. At least it will help them keep their space to a safe distance. Things are getting really tough for them and complicated and if Edward doesn't do something soon, it will only be worse.

It seemed he had decided to talk to "her" the next day, but somehow she showed up. Now to get us thinking, who did she go with? Wouldn´t it be something if she was there with "someone"? Even if Edward is doing just that. I am mean, but I like Alice am team E/B. And I can wish...

Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 9

oooo my damn!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

I did wonder how long it'd be before Tanya showed up... there's so much potential for an epic donnie brook :)

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 9

i just knew it...... i knew she'd be there!

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 9

she is sooo going to see them

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 9

Ack!! I had a feeling about Tanya being around the moment you mentioned Tanya's sister came to visit her. They were bound to go out and have fun. RUN EDWARD!!

Reviewer: eternalkiss90 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was excited when started reading this fic and realised it already had nine chapters. I just finished nine and well now I am inexplicably sad because there is no more to read.

Excellent thus far, update soon please. Oh and Masen is such a cutie.

Reviewer: southerndaisy (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 9

All I can say is....I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 9

I was afraid of that !  Maybe Tanya'll hook up with Mike?

Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 9

oh no! tanya alert! hopefully it all works out =D i love you for your ultra fast updates!

Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 9

ugh...this is driving me crazy!  damn you tanya!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

poor poor edward and bella ... completely cockblocked ... now i dont know if i agree with what edward is doing with tanya. i think i would do the same thing but someone is just going to get hurt that way ... im excited to read more ... please update soon!!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 9

OH HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EDWARD NEEDS TO DUMP THAT LYING SACK OF SHIT ,TANYA, NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I THINK SHE IS PLAYING HIM!!!!HE CAN'T LOSE BELLA OVER HER!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!

Reviewer: lobster512 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 9

Just started yout story, and I love it.  All the built up sexual frustration is killing me.  And I love love love gay Jacob!  Can he be my friend?  More please!  I'm dying to know what's going to go down with Tanya.  Oh, PS, your dialogue is hilarious!



Author's Response:

Yeah, gotta love the sexual tension. Glad I make you lol :D

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh sheeit!!! Dis aint gon be good, son. hahaaha.

-erinzomg



Author's Response:

Nice ghettoing :) And you are  the shizz for C&Ping everything over on ff.net! Awesome lol

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

Number one - I was an idiot for letting myself get into this mess

^ no truer words have ever been spoken.

I'm still kind of hating on E & B a little. I mean emotionally they've already cheated on Tanya, and that can be just as bad as phyiscally cheating on her. But maybe that's just me.

In this case I kind of feel that they deserved karma to kick their asses, their relationship borders on douchebagery in my mind no matter how 'adorable', even if Tanya is a little nutty. I don't know... it just seems really messed up to me. 

Nice chapter, can't wait for the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Yup, I'm not gonna lie. This story will have some bad decisions in it. Such is life. Even good people fuck up. This is the tale of their douchebaggery, lol. All I can ask is that you take it for what it is, and hope for the best. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilight4evr (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

hope u upload the nxt chapter soon!

Reviewer: DSCH (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

but oh yes...



Author's Response:

hahahaaaaa, what a PERFECT way to sum it all up! :)



Author's Response:

hahahaaaaa, what a PERFECT way to sum it all up! :)

Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Another great chapter! I'm glad that Edward and Bella didn't do anything because they would both end up regreting it later. I have a feeling that the crap is about to hit the fan and I'm hoping that Tanya is kicked to the curb! Update soon!

Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9

please update fast!!!! i wanna know what is going to happen!! hurry! ha please!! great story!!!

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