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Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh lawd!  That is the hottest 'touch but don't touch' scene I've ever read!  Jeez...I think I need a cold shower before I go to bed...



Author's Response:

Here's a loofah, girlfriend. I've been handing 'em out! You guys make me freak out when you say things like "ever read" and "hottest." So sweet!!

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

hahah edward as a hangover cure...you could make zillions.

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

haha gay jacob is a jacob i can stand. i'm very interested to see why edward fancies bella but will stay with she who must not be named. ugh.

 

brilliant story. <3 x

Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 13

Finally they get some sort of a release, if they have to wait any longer than those next two weeks to be together i don't think they will make it and they might cheat on Tanya. I don't think many people would be upset that they cheated on Tanya, after all she is just using her mothers death to hold on to Edward longer so that everytime he tries to break up with her she can bring it up. Please tell me it is only two more weeks. thanks for the chapter and i can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

I cannot tell you that it will be two more weeks.

I can tell you that it will be no MORE than two weeks. :D Catch my drift?

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: theREALbella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 13

wow. just...wow.  I just started reading this story a few days ago and I love it.  You definitely had a good idea to give them a release without them crossing too many boundaries.  I can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

yay tanya having a janice voice. yay, masen not liking her. i mean, uh, not that i'm bitter or anything...

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

O.K. that was freakin hot as hell. I am going to have to attack my husband right now. Good job. My husband thanks you. Can't wait for the next update, I love this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Justafan. You're very welcome, Justafan's husband. Now go make some sweet, sweet love. :D

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

uggghhh, you let me escape jacob, but force tanya on me! ugh.

 

sniffle...

 

haha x

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was freakin HOT go girl u did a great job



Author's Response:

hehe...thank you ma'am.

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

"stick a cullen in me." every sensible girl's fantasy.  sigh. i also love that your edward and bella love trainspotting. it's one of my favourites.

Reviewer: Angel_Joy (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was the hottest 'non-sex' ever.  EVER... 



Author's Response:

OMG...you guys are killing me! Thank you so much, I don't even know what to say. :)

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

okay, so at first when jacob appeared, i'm not going to like, i was irritated that i could not escape him (yes, yes, i realise he's a good guy, fine) even in fan fiction; therefore, you can imagine my happiness when you made him gay with sam. i don't know you, but i utterly love you. hahahah great story so far.

Reviewer: elfis (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 13

Dude, seriously, I dunno how they didn't actually go for it... I mean, I couldn't have held back, rly ahahaha. They have INCREDIBLE self control... I liked it, it was rly sexy and all but, I dont think ANYONE could have held back ahaha

Anyway, it was really cool... I heard once that one of the things that can be better than sex itself is anticipation... Now I'm wondering how you will write the chapter when they actually do it, it will be hard to top this one :P

Gratz!

Reviewer: ludeste (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 13

a very different take on the usual lemon! but it was great, and it made it even hotter :)

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 13

wow !!!!!!!!!!! I loved reading this chapter and I can not wait to seee what the next chapter has to bring

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

THAT WAS JUST HOT

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

lol awww i love that edward ran into the door.  like any of us would care in the slightest. i'm off to chapter two :D

x

Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 13

The drunk advantage line was from Friends!!!  Love it!!  Let them be happy soon!

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

Well Tanya needs to go...like now!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

There are no words. It was hot and emotional and just....wow...



Author's Response:

aww...:) Thank you, sometimes no words is the best reaction!

Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

aassome

Reviewer: AprilDiamond (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

Your friends quote: "drunk enough to know I want this, not drunk enough for you to feel guilty about taking advantage" was what Monica said to Chandler the 1st time before they slept together in London. (I'm a Friends fanatic!) And now for your review, you are killin me with all the sexual tension between these two!! Please let them do it already! LOL Great job though, they are keeping their word- UGH 2 more weeks... I wish I could just commit Tanya to a mental hospital myself so these two lovebirds finally hook up! and now I leave you with a Friends quote of my own... "He's her lobster!" :) Have a good night and keep up the good writing!



Author's Response:

Great job! Here is your boobie grab-- *HONK HONK*

I am a friends fanatic as well!! :) Glad you liked the chappie.

Reviewer: babybird66 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hot damn. Those were my exact words when I finished reading this chapter. God this chapter was amazing. You are a genius! I actually thought they were going to have sex and I was thinking oh know Edward's going to feel guilty and might pull away from Bella but this was perfect! Is two weeks over yet? :(



Author's Response:

Aw shucks, a genius? I certainly wouldn't go that far. I am, however, beyond thrilled that you enjoyed this. I REALLY enjoyed writing it. Just thank Rob's sexy ass for being my inspiration lol.

Reviewer: bambi_frious (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hot damn. That got me all hot and bothered. GREAT JOB! Can't imagine how it will be when they FINALLY get together. Damn.



Author's Response:

Wanna know a secret? Nah, can't tell you, I'd give away the story.

 

But I'm really glad you liked it. :D

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 13

VERY SEXY...SO HOT!!!!CAN'T HE GET OF OF TANYA NOW? HOW ARE TWO WEEKS GOING TO MAKE ANY DIFFERENCE? TANYA IS A CRAZY, NASTY BITCH  AND SHE WEEKS WON'T CHANGE THAT!



Author's Response:

Easy does 'er dear lol. The weekend is not over, there is still time to toss Tanya, you never know..............................................

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