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Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 13
Very nice! Though I was kinda hoping they would just say "screw it" in the heat of the moment and go for it. Still, it's about time they got some action!!
Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
this chapter was amazing i cant wait until he finally dumps pyshco tanya UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON!
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
that was hot. im so sick of them not actually doing it and dumping tanya. but in reality suspense is better. and i think you are doing brilliantly!! i love this story.
Reviewer: FANGbanger (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
holy jesus christ lord above.
SO HOT.
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Author's Response: :D that's like the best review ever. Thanks!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 13
that was intense!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
Please hurry and get rid of Tanya. These two are going to explode if they don't get together for real. I enjoyed reading it. Update soon.
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
love this story can't wait for Edward to finally be able tp ditch Tanya.
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Holy crap that was a very hot mutual masturbation scene!!!! Wow can't wait for real lemons from you!
Author's Response: :D thanks
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 13
while i appreciate their nobility and morality in the whole matter, i would still kinda consider that cheating. hey, not that i'm complaining or anything...
Author's Response: Yeah, it was cheating....hehe--woops.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
WOOOOOOOOWWWW....that was reallt bizaarrrrrreee!! but you wrote it gooooodddd!!
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
Fucking awesome chapter. I wish he'd dump the other chick!
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 13
When is the chapter where Tanya goes ape shit on everyone's asses? WE NEED THAT NOW! Not tomorrow, NOW!
Author's Response: Well, I could tell you exactly which chapter that takes place, but come on now. That would ruin all the fun! :)
Reviewer: mommyjgv (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 13
Would review...but..umm...at a loss for words right now....;-)
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
good god tanya is a lunatic. edward is gorgeous, though. hahah, at least the lamp was the only casulty.
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 13
HOT! Great story... death to Tanya...
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was hot... but damn it all, Tanya needs to go! (erm, yeah, that was still cheating edward! ) Guh, hot *shakes head* Yeah, I really should not have read this at 9 in the morning. My day is going to be long if I don't sneak in a lunch time quickie. Bwahaha
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 11
i love the canon twilight you're incorporating. again, i heart this story. minus the tanya, naturally. lol.
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
HOT! HOT! HOT!
God, can't Tanya just dissapear already?
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
Loved it. Very hot!
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was awesome. You are brilliantly smart for figuring out how they could do it without touching.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
HOLYHOTFUCKSHITUNG......! What a way for me to wake up in the morning!! That was the best ever!!!! LOVED it! Cannot wait for these two to really come together! Fucking Bella and Jake had me rolling .Bella and the lei of dicks!!! BWAHAHA!!!!! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: HAHA. Good morning, barbarito! :D
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow! That was awesome! I loved it!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 13
woah...
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 10
i usually shy away from jakepov, but gay jakepov sounds brilliant.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
I knew Tanya was going to be there...sigh.
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