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Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 14

Luv Family Guy! More quotes the better.

Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

Luv Family Guy! More quotes the better!

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

The Giggity part was hilarious!!! She said that shit out loud!! lol too funny

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

That was freakin amazing i cant wait until they can just be together. great chapter loved it :)

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 13

holy shit!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

I can't wait until these two get together. But, I think that Tanya will no make it easy for them.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 14

i love this story and the Edward outtakes

How many chapters do you propose on writing ?



Author's Response:

This story will be 27 chapters, plus an epi.

Epov will probably be...ohhhh I'd say ten chapters, give or take?

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 14

i love this story! I really do! Should be an interesting visit for them with Charlie! hehehehe

BUT... I think Bella is giving edward WAY TOO MUCH and not getting anything back in return! Im an angster unless you cant tell hehehehee...I would like to see Bella Realize how really fucked up her putting up with being placed on a back burner is... its like Edwards put Tanyas needs in front of Bellas and Bellas put edwards needs in front of hers....shes always in the back! 

Something fun might be Edward and Bella supposed to meet up with his fam at that jazz place again only to be tagged along by tanya...cause lets face it..shes a pain in the ass! And magically someone comes along that knows the fam and hits on Bella when she states her relationship with said "person" is complicated the new guy points out how incredibly jacked up the whole situation is and scares edward straight! 

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

great chapter...i can't wait for them to actually be together and tanya out of the picture..they're very cute together...and i loved the giggity remark! update soon please!

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 14

Seriously cracked up about Quagmire! Made my boyfriend read it too since we share a love of Family Guy!  Amd that decision about Tanya better mean that she is no longer in Edward's life! Poor Bella can only take so much rejection before she cracks! I can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

I really love the story!!!!  I do think that it is silly for them to hold back from expressing their love when no one else is around. Edward has already told Tanya he wants to break up - there is nothing going on with them physically......I think he should call it quits now - screw the 3 week time limit(I know it is lees than that now) - it won't make any difference in Tanya's recovery and her sister is already with her to pick up the pieces. The less time Edward spends with that crazy, possessive, violent bitch, the better.  She is just manipulating him.

So, there you have it..my 2 cents worth :)

Reviewer: Kolene (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 14

Between this chapter and last chapter can you say more thn one cold shower or the toys are coming out to play.  Nice job.



Author's Response:

*Tosses Kolene some batteries*  Have at 'er babe!  ;)

Reviewer: sixeightshuffle (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 14

You should feel entirely honored, because I'm so horrible about reviewing but I think I've reviewed every chapter that's come out since my first, incluuuuuding Uncle E.  These guys are killin' me.  I don't know how they have enough willpower to be that damn close and not kiss.  I'm not a fan of cheating, but I woulda done it, haha.  Ah, well.  All in due time, I suppose.  As always, love this chapter, and you, and you're brilliant...and I hate you for it.  xxx



Author's Response:

Aw don't hate on me, you write better than I do, dork ass!

:D luv ya.

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  So do you have something interesting planned for Edward meeting Charlie?  Can't wait.



Author's Response:

maaaaaybe....

Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

you totally need to update this story more often!!!!! GRRRR!!! :) i loved this chapter! to bad edward didnt get the chance to say that he loved her:( i cant wait for next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: nw1013 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

I've been reading this story from the beginning or close to the beginning, however, I'm not much of a reviewer mainly because I read a lot of stories and just don't have the time between that and real life to do it...that being said, I love this story. It's original, it's smart, and it keeps me on edge wondering if they're going to give in to each other before things with Tanya get resolved...the attraction, the sexual tension...it's fabulous...just thought I'd share because I should really be sleeping but checked my email one last time and had to read the new update...I figure a story that has me giving up sleep to read deserves a review :)



Author's Response:

I totally know what you mean about reviewing...I suck at reviewing. The fact that you took the time to review me really means a lot. :)

Your words are too kind, and I really am sorry bout keeping you from your sleep! lol

Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

CANT WAIT!! VUT I GUESS I GOT TO!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

excellent chapter

Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14

ok the wiping white stuff off with his clothing line had me dying...but also, the build-up here is killing me. :)  i just know that some crazy shit is going to go down with tanya...

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 14

Very good chapter!  It made me laugh, which I needed.



Author's Response:

Glad I could help! :)

Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

OME! please update! :D that was the hottest chapter ever, and i can't wait to see what you have next! <3

Reviewer: unkittenlike (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 13

LOVED IT!!!

I read this story in one big read and even then the sexual tension was huge,

 Great story!! I ♥ IT.

 

Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

DAMN DIGGITY that was HOT!

Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

i like this! its quirky, funny, well written!

Reviewer: orangecosmo26 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was hot and amazing and yet I somehow feel like bad things are coming... I know that it is not going to be that easy with Tanya that in two weeks all will be well.  I guess I will just have to wait and see :)

But for now, it was awesome!

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