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Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

oh thank you for giving her a flaw. And those bell tone nasely voices are the worst. Ugh, it's listen to nails on a chalkboard. Ha,ha!  Oh and Edward has some nerve wanting to clear the air to make himself feel better- so that he could clear his concience. Because what does Bella get out of his confession? Absolutely nothing- just more FYI as to why she can't be with him. More pain.

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 16

Dream: How sad! I felt so bad for her, but I liked that she quickly saw the damage. I think we liked it and they liked it, but they shouldn't have crossed that line. Edward is committed to something and someone else right now, whether his heart is in it or not. He has things to do! The line, "I cannot keep what isn't mine" from Britney's "Shadow" really fit this scene. It made me extremely sad.

Yeah, they're cheating on Tanya. But what's done is done. Edward just needs to pack his balls tight, be a man, and break up with psycho Tanya. Please! It's well overdue lol no more! I can't take it anymore!

OMG! I LOVE I Wanna Know! I used to listen to it waaay back then. I still have it on a cassette tape! haha.

 

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

So WTF is Tanya doing to keep Edward trapped inthis fucked realtionship.

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really am enjoying this it's funny, and sexy, skanky. I'm all giggles right now. But I have a question- how do you cyber hump a leg? Shits and giggles? LMAO    oh one more thing- Trainspotting(Fav movie) really? I love it, but not many people can even sit through part of it.



Author's Response:

the dead baby part or crawling in the shitty toilet part?

Both of those are hard, but overall the movie is so fucking awesome. Not to mention Ewan McGregor is number 3 on my list! :D

Glad you're enjoying it, keep reviewing every chapter, I love when people do that! :)

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh he's such a flirt, and she's goes right along for the ride. Fun,fun, fun!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yeah, he is a cute little goober. Boy and howdy, kids do say whatever is in their minds. THey haven't developed filters yet. This was funny.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 16

another wonderful, hot, steamy and romantic chapter. I really hope, for everyones sake, that the big breakup happens this time, I don' know how much longer Edward and Bella can torture themselves emotioanlly before they just give into their physical need for each other. Which may or may not jelp their relationship in the long run, although on the plus side they both know how they feel about each other.

Either way I can't wait to see what happens next, expecially if it involve more paint. Please don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: EmeraldEyes (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 16

Just wanted to let you know, that you've got me hanging on the edge of my seat with these two lovers.  I cannot wait to see what happens when Edward finally breaks it off with Tanya. 

Keep up the wonderful work.  I envy your talent!

 

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wednesday can't come soon enough! Their first time actually together, forget the sex and stuff, but just being together without Tanya is going to be amazing and I can't wait! Enjoy your vacation!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 16

I love thos story

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 16

wow!! love this story. and I usually wait until I have read thru til the end to review but I couldn't  for this one. I love EPOV and think they are vital so please keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh my God you are the bessssssst!!!! Love this so much.



Author's Response:

lol, glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh bless em. I'm glad you fully addressed the cheating thing as I think it would genuinely be a huge concern for the charcaters you've developed. Hopefully we'll have a break-up next chapter - Tanya and Edward, not Bella and Edward... geez.

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

so - uh, no, too, OMG, HOT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 15

LOVED it so much!!! That was incredible!They declare their loved for eachother!!! Cannot wait for more! HOly hell!! HOT how they felt eachother up under the blanket!!!

Reviewer: sweet2nsassy2 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great story, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: bookworm7073 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Why oh why can't things like that happen in MY classroom?????

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

AHHHHHG! Crazy Tanya. Love this story.

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh my! so much emotions, so sweet. I have to give my self a break or I will explode.

Reviewer: shellmarie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 16

Woke up thinking about your story - LOVE IT! I love your writing style.  You made both Bella and Edward believable characters.  I just can't get enough.  I hope you have a great vacation.  I also can't wait for you to return so that you can write more. 

IMO, I think that Edward should break up with Tanya over the phone so that she could have her sister to help her out.  I am really close to my sister and that is the person I would turn to.  If he breaks up with her in person, Tanya doesn't have anyone to lean on. 

 

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

HOLEEEEEEYYY SHIT! That was hott! I may need to change my panties after that little tryst.

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

wow that is all I can say

Reviewer: LZTZ (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 15

Ok, so the fight between Jacob and Bella was CLASSIC! I am LOVING Jacob as the Gay Boyfriend!!!!!

Keep it coming, because this story seriously is one of the best that I have read!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 16

The pressure is definitely hitting them both hard.  With Bella's nightmares, Edward's craziness, and the worry if it will ever be over with Tanya.  Edward is convinced he's telling her now and ending it no matter what.  Will he be able to succeed or will Tanya's manipulative ways cause him to hang in there a little longer?  Or will her feel guilty if she is admitted into the hospital on attempted suicide or in the morgue dead?  Lots of options.  Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here. Enjoy your vacation.

Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 16

I must say that I absoultely LOVED LOVED LOVED the fact that you had "I wanna know" by Joe in your chapter! that is like the ultimate baby making song! its one of my faves and it made me able to connect to the story even more! the story is getting really good, cant wait for 17! have a safe vacation!

~SP~



Author's Response:

lol, yeah when I was writing that, I didn't even have to think about what song to use, it was the obvious choice.

Thanks :)

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