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Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 8

yay!! i'm not the only person that sux at wii!!!!

Reviewer: jazzy89 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 17

ok, i have a request... please please please please please let Edward break up with Tanya tonight and don't drag this out any longer... I'm really starting to get impatient. lol :P update soon :)

Author's Response:
I know I know, impatience sucks. But seriously, it's gonna happen my dear, have a little faith in me! :D

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

that was pretty awesome. and now tanya is not only a bitch, but a crazy one at that. hahahahaha

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm really surprised Tanya didn't walk in on that little exchange. She needs professional help, yes? Love the story!

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

let's make a list shall we? gay jake and sam, and a drunk bella. all we can hope for now is edward is horny and then you just got yourself a party!!!! would you mind inviting me?

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

even more reason to not like tanya, especially this one, she sounds like janice. i LOATHED janice. uuugggghhhh. . . . .

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 17

Tanya definitely chose the wrong career path, bitch. Great update!

Author's Response:
Ooh are all those words up there like a code? I'm too stupid to figure it out.... :D I kid I kid.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

i never did like tanya. . . . .

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

gosh i cant believe tanya. excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh so what's onw or two more chapters to wait before the break up. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:
COUGHchapter19COUGH

Can you hang in there til then?? I hope so. :)

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

i really like this story. i mean a lot. it is so cute with the little kids but so damn sexy with deward. and i like the poem too. :D

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

Damn! Tayna is one psycho ass bitch!! I could totally see her boiling bunnies! I can't believe she let that poor little boy sit there like that. I'm worried about Edward & Bella.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 17

P.S. Tell Tanya that I'm 41, and if I didn't cross my legs when I sneezed, I'D have an accident!!

haha! 8)

Author's Response:
HAHA! Well I hope if she told you you couldn't go to the bathroom, you'd just kick her in the head and go anyway! :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 17

HOORAY!! I love updates!!

I don't even like kids much, but I am GOING. TO. KILL. TANYA. What a psycho effin BITCH!! Poor Braden! I cannot even imagine doing that to a child. GAH!! kill her!! I'm so with Bella - I would have wanted to punch her in the face, too. And I would have dragged her to the pee puddle and shoved her damned face into it! (sorry, gross.) Good for Bella for taking those kids out for some love and sunshine. grrr >:<

IMHO, Edward should just yell into the phone "I'm done with your crazy ass!" and consider it done. Are you gonna let her stab him or anything freaky when they meet tonight?? She's some scary shit! I don't even care if she's truly bonkers - she can't hold him hostage! I say dump her, toss Bella in the car, and head for a weekend awan and some serious taecher/student role play. ;)

Did I mention I want to beat Tanya? You must want to, as well - I'm sure her evilness just takes over your keyboard. :)

Thanks for the update!! Please, let the next chappie be long, juicy, and full of resolution. :) xoxo

Author's Response:
Thank you for that fantastic review!

Next chappie will still have some crazy in it, unfortunately. But juicy resolution is on the horizon.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: wilson55 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 17

What a total B Tanya is, I can't wait til he dumps the skank, and I hope Bella gets a few words of her own in. Another great chapter. Pleeease update soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: NumulaMoonshine (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awwww! how cute! i just loooove Uncle E

Reviewer: ktmac (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 17

CAN'T WAIT!!!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

I am so sick of the just one more day... one more week. Could he just dump the Bit@# already. URG. Great chapter by the way.

Author's Response:
I know.

Would it help if I told you that the break up is happening that night?

Hang in there, bb. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

please let him hurry up and dump the psychotic bitch with no remorse!!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 17

I teach first grade and even 6/7 year olds have accidents! I don't think I could have handled her neglect as professionally as Bella did!!!

Great chapter! I am soooooo ready for Edward and Tanya to be history!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 17

Wow, I can't believe Tanya! I really, really hope the break up happens. I imagine that T is going to find out about B&E. I wonder what will happen when/if she does.

If T's problems are related to mental illness rather than bitchiness, I hope you'll treat her with compassion. I know a number of people who are dealing with mental illness and sometimes it's hard for people to understand them because it is an "invisible" disease.

Author's Response:
The break up is happening that night after chuck e. cheese, I promise!!!! :D yay!

Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter but i am so worried that he will back down again and frankly i don't know how i will feel about it. i sincerely hope he has gotten over this dogooder issue he has going. he is only making things so much worse for everyone and i hope he finally sees it. please up date soon

Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter! I hope one of Tanya's kids spills to his parents about what a psycho she is - I feel so bad for them!

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 17

Why do I smell a major T-Bag bitchfit?!?! UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAASE!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 17

Tanya is mad, I hope Edward will be able to brake up with her.

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