First, can I please tell you that I just scared my house guests by screaming for JOY when i saw that this chapter had been posted!!!

I can honestly say that I have had the most emotionaly reaction to your story that I have ever had to fanfiction stories.  You are gifted in your abilities and your characters feel so real to me that I have hurt right along with them.  Between this and the EPOV outakes you have shown your talent for writing...

Not for a review oft his chaper....FUCKING FANTASTIC!!!  This was such a highly anticipated chapter that I know it had to be hard for you, but you nailed it. I can't wait to see what is still down the road for these two. :)

You brought me to tears. I love it! I hope there are more happy times ahead for E and B.  :)

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What a beeeyoutiful chapter!! It was too big to express with just one smiley face!!!

Good for all of them for nearly taking Tanya out. THough inappropriate with Masen in her arms, I really wish Bella had gotten a chance to backhand that bitch as she stepped out of the booth. Or sick Rosalie on her! >:>  Grrr. I'm betting ten to a dollar that she trashes Bella's place, or car or something. PsychHO isn't done, I'm sure!  Time for a jacket that buttons up the back and a restraining order. :)

Wow, it's been a long wait for them to be free, but SOOO worth the wait. Masen is cute, but I can't wait until Alice picks him up tomorrow, so they can lounge in bed. Or go out for a romantic day, letting the tension build....although they might explode if they don't comsummate this romance soon!  A little mushroom cloud would appear above Edward's place. :)

THANKS for the update, and finally tossing Tanya back into the sea! (with the rest of the sharks.)

 

Brilliant! Mahalo=Thank you!

excellent chapter!

OME! i am so in love with edward cullen! :D <3 "i'm going to love you forever," so romantic <3 best chapter EVER!

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so wonderful....hopefully the crazy gets it now

I thought it was pretty good, but I thought there should have been more of a confrontation beween Tanya and Bella.  I think Tanya is dumb like a fox and knows exactly what is going on.

All I gotta say is FINAL-FUCKIN-LY!!!!!It's about damn time! I loved the chapter and I'm especially looking forward to the next one!!Let the love implosion begin!

That was beyond beautiful I was crying at the end. (you should have warned about that) But it's all good now... I loved it and that Tanya chick is a bucket full of crazy. Keep on writing

Luv u

xxx

First, I really liked how the Tanya bit ended. I could really see her not taking him seriously at first(at the cinema) and showing up at Chuck E Cheese just because he's tried to end things so many times before without actually ending them. However, I have a hard time believing that's the last we'll see of her. She doesn't seem the type to take no for an answer.

I also really liked how Edward and Bella reacted to everything. It's like they are finally getting what they've been hoping for since the day they met. However, it's really realistic, them being caught up in the emotions of the situation. Instead of everything being instantly great and wonderful and them skipping off into the sunset holding hands, it's like the emotions that were held inside, all the frustration, anger, love they weren't allowed to show, etc, is spilling out all at the same time. I think it's great how you've let them just "be" in that moment.

So, keep up the good work and I'll keep on reading. This really is one of my favorite stories on here. Probably more like my #1. :)

Halle-freaking-ujah!!!!!!!!

Love it! :D

this is my favorite chapter!! i loved it. you can really see how much edward and bella love each other in this chapter. really amazing. good job :)