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Reviewer: tineto (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 19
You couldn't have wrote it better... speachless..
Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 19
i'm crying it was beautiful. thank you.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 19
YAY! XD
Reviewer: Angel_Joy (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 19
Bye bye Tanya! Can't wait to get the outtake for this chapter. Great chapter!
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 19
So great... can't wait for the engagement. Finally!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 19
wow !! i lovve this story i am glad that she finley took the hint. and now bella edward r together with no one else in the way. I csn not wait 2 see what will happen next.
Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 19
LOVE IT AND LOVE YOU!!
this is the cutest effing story! masen is adorable, i want one! haha.
well rounded characters, good plot. thought you dragged it out a little but it was kid of necessecary, so i get it. tanya is one hella-bitch, hey? frick.
anyway, how bout we get some lemons up in here PUH-LEEEZE !
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
I thought Tanya would have attacked Bella. Great chapter, so glad they've finally got together.
Reviewer: k_a_y_l_a (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 19
ah man... surprised about tanya... does not know how to let go... but now glad to see that they can be finally together.... awesome job!!!!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 19
I can not beleive that Tanya did that to Masen. I am glad that Edward told her bye-bye, but for some reason my gut tells me you are not done with her yet. Please update soon I can hardly wait to see what is to come for the family.
Reviewer: lilicullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
yay! there done with crazy Tanya
Reviewer: twiluv140 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
ahhh sweet! I am a little worried about Tanya but I hope E and B remember she is not their responsibility. I also really hope Tanya doesn't go all psycho on Bella but I have a bad feeling...
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 19
GO Girl that was great IM so glad Tanya is out of the picture finally :) i hope she doesnt do anything crazy i guess ill just have to wait and see . again i loved it great chapter.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
YES!!!Finally!!Ding dong the BITCH is gone!!Great chapter!As always.. ;D
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
I have to agree with Edward that the first break up after the theater was too easily for someone crazy like tanya to accept. I cannot believe that she had the audacity to show up at Chuck e cheese. That was unbelievable.
Reviewer: Edward11 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 19
ding dong the bitch is gone....yeah right if it was that easy they wouldn't be Edward and Bella
Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 19
thank goodness... but it's not over yet is it????
Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
YES!! Wonderful!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm Dead! You killed me! in the BEST way possible!
I Told you not to worry about this chpt cuz you exceeded ANYTHING i could have possibly thought would happen!
FINALLY the bitch is gone. I was kinda rooting for Bella or Alice to give her a beat down after she talked to the little man that way :S
I am so damn frigging happy right now, B&E's declarations of love in Chuck E Cheese So epically romantic and definitely original to say the least :D
he even texted her even though they were a few feet away! *sigh* Tug at my heartstrings why don't you lol.
I just Loved it!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
HMM will that be the last we hear of Tanya or will psycho come out to play again?
Now get these two straight to a private place where they can go sans apparal and we can get past this tension! hehe
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19
Okay I liked this chapter - I felt like there were alot of I love you's but not alot of progression...Having said that I LOVE this story and can't wait for hp 20
Reviewer: angelt1029 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 19
Incredible! All I was hoping for and more!!
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Very sweet chapter! So much emotion! Can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: yorkdork (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love that all the cheesy lovey dovey goodness happened at chucky cheese. Well written, I am enjoying your story and excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: drema (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ahhh, that was absolutly beautiful. My heart and soul thank you for the gift of warmth and hope.
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