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Reviewer: Nicole9965 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 20
Holy shit. That was just wrong.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 20
Holy shit, holy shit, please don't leave it like that, can't take the wait. This chapter was well worth the wait. And damn it was hott, I can't believe she found them and then broke the window holy hell. Have a great vacation. Can't wait to see edwards point of view.
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG - these poor kids! Can we please have a moment out of Mean Girls and have a semi or bus just run the Tanyabeast over already?!?!?
Hot chapter...and the list is hysterical.
...good luck with the moonlight awards; i've placed my vote :-)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20
This was a great chapter!
Edward and Bella's night was perfect...until she showed up...Grr. Can I beat her up? Seriously, someone needs to. I'm sure many would agree with me.
Please, please update soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20
Now, if most of that chapter weren't a super-hot lemon, I might be a little irritated at that cliffie you left us with right before you go on vacation....
But seriously, that was an awesome chapter. Their "finally" sex was so hot, and I absolutely loved Alice's checklist. But I think they should call the police...they have a crazy-ass ex-girlfriend on their hands.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 20
I knew Tanya was crazy azz hell. I'm scared for next chapter.
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 20
you let them do it and then all hell breaks loose only for you to go on vacay????? witch!!!! Just wait till you get back Missy!!!! We're gonna have words if that bitch of a character you let loose doesn't get her ass handed to her!
Reviewer: mickeygirl24 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 20
This whole chapter was an oh my god moment.
Them together was just hot as hell.
and the other
Bella just needs to whoop some ass and be done with it.
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
You knew she wasn't going to go away. She's fucking crazy. Poor Bella she's so sad but she got laid good. Just call the cops and haul her ass away.
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
You know, I kept reading - loving the intensity, but fearing what crazy ass shit the nutjob would pull. I'm actually thrilled that it was just breaking the window, because I was sure they would go to check on Masen and find the poor kid missing and a random note from the crazy lady, maybe a rabbit boiling merrily in a pot on the stove. So from my perspective, this is still a win. *grin*
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 19
I love Edward in 'uncle' mode. The fucking sweetest thing ever.
I love Alice in 'momma' mode. Feisty and protective and tender and pure love.
I love Jasper in 'husband,' 'brother,' 'friend,' and 'daddy' mode.
And I love Rose. And Emmett. And Bella. And little Masen. Oooooh, and I love you! I want to read EPOV during the breakup so effing bad!
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 18
I basically fucking love you! Ahh! I love all the little funny and cute and sexy and familial (is that a word?) moments in this! Yesssssssssssssssss. Best story everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 19
Finally! Great Chapter....has been one of my favorite stories.
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
I LOVE this story and I severely wanted to kill Tanya in that chapter with the kids and what she did and how she talked to Masen. XD I was laughing so hard with Emmett and Jake and Sam and the guys being gay? Nice one! lol
I LOVE this story but I really REALLY want to know what happened when Edward told Tanya to go outside! NIce story!!! I love it! :)
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was completely and utterly adorable, and heartfelt, and touching, and I want to go find an Edward.
Excellent.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
well that was a very good chapter. Edward crying was very sweet, good job!!
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 18
Tanya is a friggin nut bag.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 15
ah how sweet. I love gay Jake!!!
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
very hot, great chapter!! and i loved how you would re-name the compromise chapter-ha ha
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 19
hot damn!!!!!!!!! that chapter was out of control fantastic - holy crap! i can NOT wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 19
Awwww! I have had much wine tonight and am overly sentimental but I am way too happy that these guys have declared themselves to one another and hope like hell they get it on in the next installment. come on, don't maKE ME BEG!!!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness, that was amazing! seriously, loving this Edward, he always knows the perfect things to say. i was really hoping at first for this to be "that" chapter but this was amazing. Really, really looking forward to the next oen! :)
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
let her die
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love gay Jake, it is really hard to picture Jake & Sam, yeah....
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4
I agree : Gah!! Stupid cockblocking Tanya...
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