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Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

What!!! Why couldnt she have stabbed herself. I surely hope he is ok. 

Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 21

Yea lol I like this story but the end of this chapter was just a tad too dramatic, lol.

I hope that before you finish some story, there will be some more loving!! Because ALL that UST cant be fixed with only one time lol.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 21

Holy shit.  And you leave it THERE?  Please update soon, I don't think I can take it! 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

oh wow. that was big. i really hope edward will be alright. and masen. hopefully he slept through all of that.

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 21

Oh WOW!!!  That was intense.  I sensed that Tanya would do something drastic and it still shocked me when it happened.  I guess I wasn't expecting something that crazy.  WOW!!!

Why are you leaving???  I'm still trying to recover from the news that sixeight is going on hiatus.  Not you too.



Author's Response:

Dont worry I'm not leaving, just hanging out a bit until the angry mob settles, lol.  I'll be out with the next chapter in about a week or so. :)

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 21

That was intense! I knew it couldn't be that simple!! Now, just hurry up and bring our boy back...

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 21

no...I Cried.



Author's Response:

Holy shit.

 

Did I just render YOU speechless??!?

 

I don't know whethter to be proud of myself or cry with you!

Reviewer: LovesHisGoldenEyes1901 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 21

NOOOOOO!!!!! Edward please don't die!!!! It's not fair!! You have to live!!

Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 21

great chapter!! i can't wait to see what happens!! boooooo for tanyas pov lol, only because it's going to make us wait to find out what happens! =)

Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

Sweet baby JESUS, what the French, toast!?!?!?!! I so did NOT see that coming....like at-fucking-ALL! Holy shit, I'm very sad....please make me happy...please please pleeeaaase! I'm gonna go curl up in a ball and hold myself *sniff* But um, yeah...awesome job, still love you even though you totally ran over my fucking puppy with that LOL!

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 21

arghh......you and Tiffany are going to be the death of me.....

cant wait for the next update.....

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 21

oh my god! no! no! he can't die can he? oh god!
tanya POV eh? interesting...i had a feeling she might hurt edward or bella or masen or SOMEONE just cause she is that much of a phsyco!
the POV might explain things better!


please don't be too long with an update!
also, i'll see you for some heineken!

Reviewer: mickeygirl24 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 21

Oh my god.  I can not believe you ended it like that. I will be sitting here biting my nails until you post the next one and the next one.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

You can't kill Edward! You can't!!!

Please update soon? I'm not looking forward to Tanya's POV. (But I'll read it anyway. XD Your writing is awesome.) I just want to see if Edward will be alright.

Please don't kill him. :(

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 21

holy shit......please oh please tell me that he is going to be alright...PLEASE

can't wait for more

Reviewer: kellyjaxn (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

I read this chapter this morning on fanfiction.net. I don't think I've ever really cried over a fanfic before. Sure, I may have gotten a bit teary eyed but NEVER cried. I could totally see the situation from all three points of view and it just broke my heart for each. So, excellent job.

Btw, I knew something like the rock through the window was going to happen b/c that's just Tanya. However, I didn't think she would ever hurt Edward, even though it wasn't done on purpose.

I don't get why Tanya thanked Bella after Bella broke her nose.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

OMG!! I figured it would be a gun, but a knife.  To cut her wrist and then stab Edward in the stomach.  Oh no, I would have done the same thing to Tanya.  She deserved that and more.  Especially a straight jacket and a padded cell.  Most of your readers knew she was psycho long ago.  The way she treated her class at school, the avoidance of talking to Edward, leaving town to avoid the talk, bringing up her mother's death again and again. Then we have Kate would had the nerve to ask Edward and Bella for more time to reach her sister.  She needed help before, counseling, medication, whatever.  Especially from her sister knew she wasn't right, when she was with her, forced her to seek help, or commit her.  I am so upset, I can hardly think straight.  This is suppose to be an Edward and Bella story right?  We always expect a happily ever after ending.  It's coming, right?



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I could never keep those two apart.

It just ain't right.

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

Fuckity fuck fuck! I never even imagined this scenario!

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 21

say wha....umm....**slaps face-mouth still hanging open**

 

wasn't expecting that. please don't kill edward...kill tanya....that bitch...

Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 21

Dam I was so happy when I saw you had updated.  I just read a sad fic n thought oh good Show and Don't tell that will cheer me up, how fucking wrong was I!!!

Seriously???  Seriously??  How can you leave us hanging like this??  And I hope you are kidding about next chapter being Tanya POV!  Who cares what she thinks!?  Only good thing from that chapter is that Bella kicked Tanya ass.

I'm away for another box of tissues now.  Please update soon

Reviewer: RestfulDreams (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 21

holy frigging crap. 

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 21

Well not what I was expecting but it works. Tanya POV and in the main story you say? Hmmm... this facinates me, I look forward to reading it.

Reviewer: indianagirl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 21

I think I would have beat the shit out of her right in her stupid head. Kick her right in the face and hope that I break something so it would always be f'd up. lol and GAHHH to you ending this chapter like this! lol

Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 21

Woah...

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 21

I had a feeling something like this was going to happen. Damn Tanya. Great chapter.

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