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Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:17 PM · On: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine
That chapter made me cry.Awesome writing!
Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Fools Rush in Where Angels Fear to Tread
Wow l really like this story. It's definately the first of this kind for me on fan fic but I love it none the less. Awesome writing. Cant wait to catch up so I can join in on the thread.
Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
Long chapters are very, very good!!! I dont know if I can wait, MORE NOW!
Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
I don't mind the long chapter at all. :)
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
Aw, how can you leave us hanging like that?? Great, fantastic story... Twilight meets Fallout was a great idea! I love both these universes (well, i love playing the Fallout games, I'm obviously not a fan of nuclear destruction!) so it's really nice to see them both in a fic... Hope to read more soon! I love how you kept the characters true to themselves, and how believable the whole story is. You are a great storyteller and I am awaiting the next chapters with impatience! *
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Fools Rush in Where Angels Fear to Tread
“I come here to get away from it all.”
God, you have no idea how that sentence got me! It was like I was alone in the dark with Edward and this sentence startled me! Like she'd whispered it into my ear... Believe me, it is pretty rare that a fic gets to me this way, and as a fic writer myself, that is exactly what I would love to do to people reading my stories!
Many thanks for this great story! Off to read some more, though I should be studying!!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:12 PM · On: He Who Hesitates is Lost
Moving along well. This was very tense, but thankfully Emmett came to our rescue; he's a funny m-fer!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:44 PM · On: As You Sow So Shall You Reap
It's always annoying when Alice gets a horrfic vision and then just fails! lol. This is moving well. I'm so in aginy over the 'power' that Maria has.......'Bella' perhaps? All vamped out, of course!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Prologue
Brilliant, I can't wait to get more into this. It's very original. The depths of your writing, so far, is bountious.
Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
OK, I've spent hours and hours reading this and am completely and utterly hooked! I love the way you're writing this from the past and present and can't wait to see how it all ends.
I wonder what Jasper is up to in the South? Will he ever return?
I love that the Cullens are mixing so well with the people of new Forks, and that they finally feel at home after so long. But I can't help feeling that Bella may be out there somewhere, probably as a vampire. Or if she really isn't coming back, I wonder if Edward will find hapiness with someone else (Tanya) or will he kill himself? I can't wait to find out!
Reviewer: banana526 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
:) Can't wait!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:58 AM · On: All Things Must Pass
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Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:21 PM · On: None So Deaf as Those Who Will Not Hear
Onward march... =]
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:04 PM · On: The Darkest Hour is Just Before the Dawn
K, stratch that. ALL the Cullen's, INCLUDING Edward and EXCLUDING Carlisle are selfish! Fuck, they don't need him as much as the humans! Just as carlisle said, they are campires, they can survive, even mentally. Geebus, I don't know how much of the fucking selfishness I can take! Really Edward? And Esme - she is such a WITCH playing on people's guilt, with no thought of no one but herself, who isn't even in any danger! Ugh, I can understand them being lost without their leader, but seriously!?!
Author's Response: Okay... simple solution. Stop reading. You don't like it, so why read it?
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Fortune Favors the Brave
Esme is such a cry baby!
And yes, if only the whole world was small children, then Rosalie would be Mother Earth and compassionate all the time. I do feel bad for her having to witness that and thet their is some part of her heart that is unscathed.
Author's Response: HUh.... okaaaaaaaaaaay.
So I am a little confused as to why you are still reading? If you hate the characters so much I just don't understand why you would keep reading? I give up on fics all the time when I can't get on board with the characters.
Everyone is so quick to always defend Edward or Bella, but are never able to forgive the faults of other characters. It's odd how utterly and absurdly people are protective of Edward.
Just surprised that you are still reading, that's all.
OCD
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:08 PM · On: A Chain is Only as Strong as its Weakest Link
Sorry to keep bitching about it, but seeing as they keep annoy me every chapter, I feel no qualms saying that the Cullens are infuriating me!
And I REALLY don't like Esme. A first probably, I know.
*sigh* Thank Jesus for Carlisle, or my sanity would be questionable. I don't see how Edward deals... O, that's right - guilt.
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
Oh man! WhIat a crushing ending to the chapter!!!! I just read the story up until this point, and I must say that I LOVE it!!! I was a little apprehensive at first and skeptical through the first chapter, but I'm so glad that I continued reading!!! Not my typical brand of FF, but a delightful change (assuming one could use the word "delightful" in reference to this story). Nothing wrong with a dark FF every once and a while! Can't wait until the next chapter!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith
Oh poor Esme! This chapter had a lot in it and I am glad that things are starting to change/shift/progress. It means that we are one step closer to Bella *again crosses fingers and hopes like mad*!
Even though Edward has said goodbye to Bella, the memorial service I think will do one of two things. 1) Make him so sad and depressed that he decides it is time to be destroyed or 2) Realise that he can't really say goodbye to her because he doesn't truely believe that she is gone. Either way, next chapter is sure to be a killer!
Loving the updates!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:46 PM · On: That Which Does Not Kill Us Makes Us Stronger
UGH! The Cullen's are being unbelievably frustrating AND selfish!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:26 PM · On: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine
No time to comment. Onward march!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Pride Comes Before the Fall
Holy Shit. K, first, I absolutely abhor Rosalie! And I find it COMPLETELY infair that everyone is pissing on Edward about 'not thinking of the family' - BULLSHIT! That is all he has done for the last ten years. It is incredibly selfish for them to guilt him into living an existence he abhors just for them! UGH.. I can't believe them!
But I am totally excited for the action next chapter! Please, though, I can only handle so much Rosalie >=/
Author's Response: I have to say... I just got home and opened up the computer to your reviews and they have made my day! I love ready people's reviews as they are reading it all in one go. Totally makes me smile!
Like this comment... Rosalie has grown so much for me, so I forget that she's such a bitch sometimes. I really have never been a fun of hers in the books, and really didn't know how I was going to approach her in thi story... but eventually she kind of spoke to me, and she finds her voice. I mean... she has to be redeemable at some point, right? Why would the Cullens put up with her all these years? Why would someone who is as loveable as Emmett, love someone like Rosalie if deep down she was a horrible person.
Anyway! On with the show! I hope it will stay believable and true for you! Thank you for taking the time to read my story.
OCD
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Fools Rush in Where Angels Fear to Tread
Wow. Poor Alice...ad Jasper. And Goddamn it, Edward has to be the most selfless person of them all, giving up his search for Ali and Jazz, staying for his family, dealing with Rose bitchiness. Geez, after Carlisle he is most definitely the most saint-worthy and it kills me to see him think otherwise and for Rose to play those cards. I totally hate her at this point. Even in the real series she only redeemed herself unto the point of not hate but definitely not like! Humpf!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:37 PM · On: There's Many a Slip Twixt Cup and Lip
Loved LOVED that last line! Awesome!
And damn Charlie to heck! But, geez, I couldn't imagine living with his guilt. Poor Edward, knowing he was so close, and so earnest and yet still wasn't given a real chance =`[
I do heart Seth though =]
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:37 AM · On: The Ends Justify the Means
I loved the comic relief that came from the "Itsy Bitsy, Teenie-Weenie Yellow Polka-Dot Bikini" flashback! =D
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