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Reviewer: Bite Me Jasper Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
PLease Please please, continue this story, it's soooo amazing and I would love to read more of it!! Please?
Reviewer: Witch Hazel (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ppppllleeaassseee continue! You're killing me. I love this story and I'm so disappointed it hasn't been updated in a long time!
Reviewer: irinaj (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
please please continue! I miss this story! I just hope everything is fine for you!
Reviewer: Ms_A_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
Love it hope you continue writing :)
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay i've begged, now i'll threaten! Update this story now!! **grr**
not very convincing, i know, but i'm gunna need you to get on this because i love it too much for it to be incomplete!
Please? please? please!!! continue this story!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
please, please please tell me you have more in store for this story?!?! i'm so not below begging! **w/ sugar on top** XD
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
lol...was bellas prize winning investigative journalist parent ommitted until JUST now?..lol
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG. When are you going to update?!?! Great job!
Reviewer: marinob (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hee hee I am really liking how this story is going. It is well written and I love how the characters are progressing. And love that final alice line. Brilliant. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: charliedee (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm so glad you're updating, this is such a good story. Can't wait for the girls to find out.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ooh, I love this! Glad they got back fine, but seriously, that was a close one! And I loved the way Emmett was furious but Edward was the one to calm down first. I can't wait to see what happens with Alice looking them up. She's not the type to give up easily, that's for sure!
Reviewer: DDStein (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 7
having been a giant west wing fan this is sucking me right in! can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: becksishere (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 7
I absolutely love this! I've never read a story with this kind of plot before so I'm excited to see where you take it. I love your characters, when Jasper met Alice I was like aww. =)
Great job. Update soon! =)
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 7
Damn - Alice - prize winning investigative journalist...
that will not sit well AT ALL!
I'm really suprised that the guys didn't do background checks and found that out.
Some times its really hard for me to review due to the length between chapters. But so far your chapters have had an easy flow to them and theres not really much to be said about them other then the generic so good loved it blah blah blah.
I have enjoyed this story so far and can only hope that real life doesn't get in you way too much so you can bring us some more chapters soon.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh dear! I think Alice is going to get herself into a whole heap of trouble trying to track the guys down. I mean, she doesn't know that Jasper's the son of POTUS and Em and Edward are Secret Service, but you can bet that the moment she even starts to get warm, said secret service are going to come down like a ton of bricks. And her investigating would probably get read totally the wrong way, smirching Bella and Rose along the way.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Nights Eternal Dream (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
Dum dum dum! I can't wait until the girls find out the truth. I haven't decided if I'd like them to figure it out on their own, or be told by the guys. Either way, there's gunna be some exsplaining to do... ;-)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
Awww Emmett is just cutest thing...*ding...Waitress I'll have me an order of Emmett McCartney to go please..ding...ding* I have a funny feeling Alice has obsconded Jasper...lil pixie is sly
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow what a crazy way to start a party...Jesmond Edward is having a heart attack about Jasper. I sure hope he lightenes up just a smidge.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow what a crazy way to start a party...Jesmond Edward is having a heart attack about Jasper. I sure hope he lightenes up just a smidge.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow things sound stressful for poor Jasper. Edward and Jasper's jobs sound fascinating. Yay it's party time!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Whohoo the girls sound like a riot! I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Whoohoo what a way to begin...
Reviewer: Cats77 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
Your story is great so far. Excellent job of casting them in unique roles, I don't think i've seen anything else like it. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Bella -- edward is always in control, I bet!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
What a great twist: Edward & Emmett has secret service men! I hope they can still have fun!
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