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Reviewer: Sharonnewman (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Girl Fight
I read your posted chapters tonight and found it to be interesting. I to like the fact that it is different and out of character so far than most stories that are posted. I am a die hard fan of Bella and Edward together, however, the fact that he left Bella for Victoria of all people makes me want Bella to shove it down his throat and make him suffer somewhat for hurting her. How long have they been apart? I thought you hinted to 7 months but I didn't find that to be clear since she seems to be completely over him and I would imagine that would have taken her some time to get over him.
Author's Response: First and foremost, thanks for reviewing! and as far as your question, the only thing i can really say is that they've physically been away for 7 months or so and a lot of this could be anger and resentment to what he did, hell if i were in her shoes i'd do the same thing! LOL i really can't say much other than to read on i know that a LOT of things aren't exactly crystal clear at this point but it will eventually get there and when it does, it will all make sense! I promise!!!!
=D Thanks so much for reading! and please if there's anymore questions feel free to ask them, i will answer the best that i can WITHOUT giving too much of the unknown away ;)
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Girl Fight
Just had to add my two cents here in review form. I love this fic! I think this is such a new and different idea! I love the fresh take you have with Bella and I can't lie, it is YOU that rocks for listening to me on the forum when I couldn't get enough of the 'snippet' you wrote. I'm so glad to see this one on the site!
I loved the confrontation the most. I was cheering her on the entire time. You really gave her a courage not many people have in the wake of a bad break up and it's cool to see her not give in to Edward wanting to talk to her. He burned her bad and she is stronger then I would've been in her shoes!
I can't wait to read more...and I get to beta it!!! *happy dance* and per your authors note: so THAT'S where Emmett is!!! I have been looking for him everywhere! And you are far too kind to pimp my shit on you fic!! Face it, YOU ROCK!!!
Author's Response: my dear dear emmward! i must remain on saying that we both rock! And... i simply have no words for your awesome review :) I really am glad that you're my beta... the bestest booty-bustin' beta in the betaing world! LOL
oh yeah, WE ROCK! LOL
as for Emmett, i'll let you have him later, right now i need him to help me reenact your dirty Rob scene... LMAO! (bad me!) hehehe
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Moving On
Oooooh Edward what have you done to our Bella. I was so happy she stood up to him and pretty much told him to fuck off.
So Bella goes on line and chats? Will she meet someone she knows only she doesn't know she knows him?
I love that this Bella did not just fall back into the arms of the man that threw her to the curb - even if it is Edward. I hope she can stay strong.
Author's Response: First of all... Thanks for your review :)
and to answer some of your questions, yes, Bella does go online and chat but she feels that trying to find someone online is not real enough for her, read on and you'll soon find out who the mystery man is... muahahaha
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Girl Fight
GO Bella, GO Bella, GO GO GO Bella!!!
I'm so proud of her!!!
Author's Response: hahahaha thanks! i'm quite proud of how Bella's handling herself also... hahaha things will get better soon, i promise!
Reviewer: itsss twitch (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Moving On
i love it already. keep going.
Author's Response: Thanks! there should be a new chapter soon :)
Reviewer: sladky_devotchka (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Moving On
:eek!: I find it really, really enjoyable so far. Relax, and real chill...Edward! tsk, tsk...what do you expect from someone who isnt Bella!? Yay...keep 'em coming pleaz! =D
Author's Response: Hahaha, i'm really glad that you like it so far! and don't worry... they're only getting the essential stuff over with to get to the good stuff! Thanks for ur review!
Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Moving On
Awsome chappie! Can't wait to read more and see what happens! UD very soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks... your review made my day :)
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Moving On
yay for updates!
Author's Response: yay for reviews!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Moving On
well i hope this is not a total bella and jauke kind of thing
Author's Response: This is not going to be a Bella and Jake thing, but it also won't be a Bella and Edward thing.
Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Reality
Ah, lovely chapter! Bella's kind of aggressive toward Edward, isn't she ? It's sad to see they're not together in this story and I don't think they will be either, but I'm curious. It's very well written, and I wonder what will happen next to Bella. I also wonder what kind of problems Edward is dealing with. Anyways, I hope you UD very soon. I'm curious to read more! I think this has a lot of potential! ;)
Bye
Author's Response: Interesting take on that, I mean i thought everyone would kinda be on Bella's side because Edward left her for someone else but, it's great that i get to see everyone's point of view. Sadly i was sick of seeing either one or both of the fighting and then ending up together so i thought what would it be like if they tried to be together but it just didn't work, who could she be with and who would he end up with... don't worry i have lots in store for these two so stick around for the next chapter, maybe then things will be a little more clear for you!
thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Reality
Oh man, that's like exactly where I'm at right now, both emotionally and physically! Me and my bf of 6 years just broke up and I'm going to go visit my friends who go to CSULB this weekend, what a coincidence. Haha! This storyline seems different, so I look forward to seeing where you take this! :)
Author's Response: hahaha that is totally crazy, I mean i feel sad that you and your bf split up but CSULB is really an awesome place and i know that you'll like it, if not love it! well before i say anything else i just wanna say have fun and go to the tranquility gardens there... it's beautiful!
And thanks for your review! i look forward to posting more soon, so keep your eyes peeled! :)
Reviewer: MrsJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Reality
Hey,
I just wanted to say that I'm hooked! Good job. I do have a question...
Is this going to be an Edward/Bella story?
Keep up the good work and looking forward to another update.
MrsJacobBlack
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, to answer your question... this is NOT going to be an Edward and Bella story, she ends up with someone else; sorry but i was just sick of seeing every story be that way... so read on and you'll see!
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Reality
hmm this ones interesting so far :) i would like to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! more will come very soon... hopefully. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: PreciousRubies (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Reality
Yay, Bella gets to have guts in this fic. Was it Tanya that he left her for? Can we have a Ed POV?
P.S. I love her ringtone.
Author's Response: Muahahaha... all i can say is read on!!! who knows, an eddie POV may be in order... dunno yet! however... that is an awesome ringtone, since that's my ringtone for my ex... LOL thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Reality
yup i smell it, ahaha
but seriously...edward's being a jerk
will it be non-canon pairings?
Author's Response: I do have to say, mad props to Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson... hahaha he gave me the idea for that line! and yes, edward is a jerk! but the only non-cannon pairing will be Bella & Eddie... everyone is as expected, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Reality
I am so happy to see this up!! I love this fic, and where it is going....*sly grin*. I have told you this before, but it needs to be repeated here....I love the different take on the classic Edward/Bella relationship. I loved her back story as to how she got where she was and the introduction of Jerkward! LOL...wow that is way too close to my name, but it can't be helped.
I can't wait get the next chapter done and back to you so everyone can see how great this fiction is! I really love it!! Now, in keeping with our joke....Update soon! ;)
Author's Response: Hmmm... i wonder why YOU know where it's going! hahaha i totally love all the ideas that you give me, even when you don't realize that you do... that's why you are totally win! and don't worry i've already decided that to me you already are forevermore... Emmward! LOL
and yes, i will try as hard as i can to update as soon as i can! LOL ;) Thanks for the awesome review my fach-tastic beta!
Reviewer: pena514 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Reality
I liked the way Bella taked to Edward she need to tell him off. I Edward regrets later. Can't wait for the next chapter.I like it so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter will come soon, and will explain things a little more in detail as to why things are the way they are :)
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Reality
Muahaha. Go, Bella!
Author's Response: hahahaha Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Reality
Ooooooh, I think it is safe to say it is crystal clear! He leaves her and now he wants to talk to her because she understands him? I'm with Bella on this one...it just doesn't work that way. And yet it happens.
Very interesting start to your story if indeed that is Edward and Bella. I don't know that I've ever read a story that he leaves her for someone else. I'm ever so curious as to where this is going and hope to read more soon.
Sandra
Author's Response: I wish that i could tell you exactly where this is going but, i think it's too much fun that i can have you make up theories :) hopefully the next chapter will somewhat help... Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Reality
good for her! expressing your anger is healthy! Dont take his shit!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I wanted to hopefully begin to portray her as someone who came out stronger from the situation. hope i'm doing an okay job at that.
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