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Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Reality
i really dislike this edward although im sure james is too good to be true. i hate people who think the grass is greener on the other side until they realize it only looks that way from a distance and once you get closer its not greener grass its weeds great writing cant wait for more
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Stand Tall (EPOV)
Well, I think Edward's thoughts are realistic. It's a classic case of the 80/20 rule. Bella's 80% of what he wants and needs, but he let Victoria's 20% distract him. I hope they talk in the next chapter because it feels like you are just stalling. I would love to see some progression in the plot line. Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for your honest thoughts, I try to base my stories on actual senarios... one of which was my own, i won't say which though :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: SilverSky (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Stand Tall (EPOV)
I don't like Edward's attitude in this story.
He should be on his knees, begging Bella to take him back, not treating her like she is his property.
But I do like this story I lot, I'm curious for what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really don't like that he's that way though, but he told me *insert crazy looks* that he needs to be this way in order for the story to be fully told... yes, i'm a bit crazy but if i wasn't you wouldn't have this story to read... not much of a loss huh? Anyway thanks for your awesome review!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Stand Tall (EPOV)
Bye Edward. Go screw Vicky.
Author's Response: LOVE IT! Thanks for your awesome review!
Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 03:37 AM · On: It's My Life
Still loving the story and I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: flippa (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:21 PM · On: It's My Life
i hope bella chews emoward a new one
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:14 PM · On: It's My Life
glad u are finishing this keep it coming :)
Reviewer: AKR (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:48 AM · On: So Hard to Say I’m Sorry…
This is so good!! Burn, E, Burn!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! finally anti-E fans!!! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Another Night
it sounds like edward wants a maid or mother not a lover what a creep he needs to grow up a little. i love the story though
Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:45 PM · On: So Hard to Say I’m Sorry…
Really enjoying this story.
I am assuming that there is more going on than jealousy.
Look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:17 PM · On: So Hard to Say I’m Sorry…
Why is Edward being so persistent in trying to see and talk to Bella. He gave up all rights when he kicked Bella out and moved Victoria in. He doesn't have a leg to stand on if he thinks they are still friends. After 7 months and still with the other girl, he's looking for someone to talk to him, who knows him? We have to wait 2 chapters for his thoughts? I hope he is not trying to get Bella back because if he is still being with the break-up girl and just showing up at Bella's house is defnitely not going to make her give him a snowball's chance in hell. What is he, nuts?
I am not so sure what to make of James - if he is a good guy or not but hopefully he won't hurt Bella. The whole looks at me like he wants to eat me, creeps me out but I am giving him the benefit of a doubt until I know more.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Moving On
Bella never sees herself correctly! Thank Goodness Rose is there!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Reality
I love a fiesty Bella! Edwards sounds like an ass!
Reviewer: eoh21 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:14 AM · On: So Hard to Say I’m Sorry…
Frankly, I don't really care about Edward in this fic...at all, not even a little bit. I am totally fine with Bella not hating Edward because in my opinion it's the clearest sign that she has really moved on. If she still hated him then she would still have feelings for him because hate requires a lot of energy and time. He made a mistake and it took him 7 months to figure it out? And, as I said in my review of the previous chapter he never said anything about what he missed about Bella and their relationship he only referenced things that she did for him and all of them could be done by his mommy or some other sucker.
I also like that James is the nice guy for a change. He's always the bad guy so I like that you've done something different.
Author's Response: First of all, thanks for the review, i really appreciate knowing your thoughts.
Second. I think that you will be pleasantly surprised with the way that things unfold in the future chapters, I know that the Edward i'm painting is not coming out to be such a pretty picture but he's got flaws that he will come to see and well... you'll just have to keep reading!
And, i had to make James nice. After being evil in so many other stories, he deserves this!
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Another Night
glad u are going to finish this!
Reviewer: eoh21 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Another Night
Welcome back! So after about 7 months apart all Edward is missing is the fact that Bella took care of him like his mommy used to? In his rant all he mentions are the things she did for him. Really? He had no issues moving someone else into their apartment let alone who knows how long he was with the new girl before dumping Bella.
I have no idea where you are taking this story but I would be so happy if Bella just comes into her own and never gets back with Edward.
Reviewer: klcivinski (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Another Night
i like it. cannot wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: miss_mandy (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Another Night
good chapter and you updated on my birthday :)
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Another Night
I'm still here and I'm interested to see where you take this. Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reviewing!
Reviewer: 2buzzybees (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Another Night
Glad your back! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and no problem, i'm anxious to be able to finish it, especially because i have two more stories that i'd like to share eventually. I also feel that in those stories i have grown a little and evolved. But enough about that... look for an update soon!
Reviewer: mariela23 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Little Moments
I'm reading ;)
I like it, maybe I find it at times developing almost too slow? But I like it, and I hate Bella with anyone but Edward... But you James is not the usual creep, and is quite nice!
So they drifted apart, he cheated and now he wants to get in contact with her after all this time? Why?
Oh and I loooove your Bella isn't the usual doormat!
Author's Response: First and foremost, Thanks for letting me know that you're still reading! I know that i'm making things seem like they're moving slow, but isn't that what RL's like? i don't want things to be progressing too quickly just because this has been days and not months or years. Thanks for the compliment about James (i'm sure that he appreciates it too. hehe)
As far as your question, it's a valid and good question. Look out for Edward himself answering those question and possibly making up more for you to think of ;)
thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Little Moments
Oh, James :D..
I think this chapter was cute, and I think James is amazing right now.. (You made me giggle! :D)..
And I think you write beautifully.
:).. Thank you for writing the story!...
And Gratz on the validation Beta :D
Author's Response: Alright the last one... whew! I'm soo glad that i made you giggle, and personally, i love the fact that James isn't some creepy weirdo! Thanks for your amazing compliments, they humble me and remind me that i'm here for a reason :)
btw thanks for the congrats... now off to validation land! LOL
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Getting by With a Little Help...
^.^....
Great as the rest, and Bella needs to breathe :P..
She's freakin out about James.. (Which I think is great.. somehow).. And yet she's confident about it.. :)
Amazing! Onwards!
Author's Response: 6th... hmmm i'm running out of things to say! Yeah, Bella does need to breathe, but i can totally understand her situation. Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing!
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Friends
=o... Onto next chapter!
This one was great ;D...
And you have to love Alice n' Rose :)
Author's Response: Fifth... Alice and Rose are indeed some of my personal favorite characters :) Glad that you like them too!
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Girl Fight
Again.. Go bella :D..
awesome chapter as usual :D... And I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Off I read!
Author's Response: Third... you gave my 5 stars, you SOOO ROCK!!! LOL
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