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Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
James is always up to no good. Great chapter, was worth the wait!
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Hmm...you want to know what I think? I think you need to post another chapter asap! I've really been enjoying this story over the last two days (when I rally should have been doing my own writing). And I love a hockey-playing Edward! Thanks so much for the fun distraction! Feel free to distract me again anytime!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Great chapter. Loved it! Glad you put some hockey in there too :) Hope James can't get his hands on any proof. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: skye282 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
lol Poor Bella, that would have been quite the situation to find herself in. So far looks like this is going to be a great story. :)
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Sorry to hear about your computer problems. I hope they are fixed now and that exams went well. Glad for the update and can't wait to see what James has in store for our favorite family.
Reviewer: blurlm (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
This chapter came at the perfect time! I was beginning to suffer through Avalanche withdrawls (*le sigh*), so it made my day to see a new chapter notification in my inbox!
Well done on this chapter. I really like the tension with the whole Edward/James/Bella/Jacob thing...call me sadistic like that! Can't wait for another update!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
James is a dick. Someone should shove his ass into the board. I volunteer!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Real life happens-there is no need to apologize! And James seriously makes me want to scream. He's like the complete opposite of a jersey chaser and it infuriates me! But I'm really excited to see how all of this is going to go down!
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Great chapter!! Definitely drama starting..cant wait to see what happens next!!! :) Thanks so much for the update
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
I glad my boys were able to handle him a little. Temper temper Edward, you gonna have to learn to control that.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
great chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
"Avalanche player found unconscious with puck stuffed in his mouth....film at 11...."
Yeah, time for James to get taken DOWN!
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
I really hate James ... makes my blood boil. I really hope nothing bad happens and if it does, then they can easily rectify the situation. Great, rocking chapter!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
glad to see another update to this fantstic story, especially one as entertaining as this. I can't wait to see how James stirs everything up, especially since the Cullens have just got it all sorted out. I also loved Edward and the Cullen boys response to James comments on Alice and Bella.
I can't wait to see what happens next, as I am sure it will be just as well written as this chapter. Please don't leave us all waiting to long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
James is a piece of dirt...Grrrrr, can't stand his arrogant ass!
Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Yea, gotta hate James. I still dislike the choice to make him a Red Wing... But that's just my bias showing. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Finally. It was great. I'm getting a little nervous, but that sounds like a good thing.
Reviewer: Maxennce (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
mmmmm that will definitely prove to be an extremely interesting chapter if I do say so myself. keep up the great work, and hope you manage to keep up with everything as well as keeping your riveted readers entertained
Cheers
max
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Great chapter! James needs to get a life. So does Tanya. Do these people really have nothing better to do with their time than sit around and plot revenge on people. People who, by the way, have really done nothing to you. Maybe they should both start reading fan fiction as a way to occupy their time. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: bahahaha!!!!! so true...they would totally be less interested in revenge if they read fan fiction!!! Then again there is a lot of revengein fan fiction...maybe they'll get better ideas for revenge
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Hoping for a Pens vs Blackhawk final... what about you?
Author's Response: I am actually going for a Pens vs Sharks final....I love my Pens....but San Jose has been probably one of the best teams for the last 4-5 years...and probably deserve a cup....Wouldn't mind the Blackhawks for the final though....but I'm not sure they have the goaltending to do it...everything else is going good for them....but I'm not sold on their goaltending.
I HATE Montreal and Vancouver...so really anyone but those two would be great, but I love the Pens too. Oh Sidney Crosby...good Canadian boy...he's like my hockey hero...and ever since the gold medla overtime goal in Vancouver I have even more love for him.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
Good chapter, can't somebody get something on James, like an underage drunk girl in his hotel room. ;)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
yay, an update, can't wait to see what happens. don't really remember why james hates them though, i may need to re-read some
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
James is a ass!!! I'm glad Bella is better about telling Edward how she feels...Good chapter! :0)
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
oooOOOOOohh....lookin good!! :D
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)
good chapter, happy to see it update
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