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Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Planning
So Edward has admitted to himself that he's in love with Bella. Yet we haven't heard anything from Bella in that area, is she just trying to deny it or is she scared? Only one way to find out, huh? Great job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Recovery?
I totally agree with you on adding the drama to the relationship. No one's personal life is all sunshine and rainbows. Another excellent chapter. ;)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
I think James is a nasty piece of work and I cannot wait until Karma comes and bites him in the ass royally!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Glad that Tanya is gone, yet I'm worried about what part James will play later. I think Edward's getting close to that four letter word. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Drama
Interesting events, can't wait to see how they play out. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
So now their secret isn't a secret so much any more. Now I just need to find out what's going on with Tanya. Excellent job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Busted! I'm hoping the family will take this all in stride, unless Alice doesn't tell them. Can't wait to find out. ;)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
James is a grade A douchebag! And I'll tend to Edward's injuries any day of the week :)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Okay, Tanya...definitely don't like her. I hope she doesn't mess up what Edward and Bella have, even if neither of them realizes it yet. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?
I really hope Edward doesn't let Tanya get to him too much. Great chapter. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home
Huh, I think if I was Bella I would have been pissed! But I guess all worked out for the best. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
Loved the bit about Jessica, totally deserved it! Yeah I think they're moving fast but sometimes that happens in real life. Believe me I am in no way complaining. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
So Edward has managed to piss off Bella already. I wonder if she'll let him make it up to her? ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
It seems like the family is really taking a liking to Bella and vice versa. Good work. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
Yummy! Hockeyward, he doesn't seem like a prick in this story, but that could change of course. Can't wait to find out. Excellent job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Interesting...I'm dying to see how it goes when they meet up in the morning. Can't wait to see the rest of the family. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Lmao, that was priceless! Only that could've happened to Bella. Perfect. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
Ha! I've been meaning to read this story for some time now, I know I'm behind but I hope to catch up pretty quickly. From reading that last line, I'm sure to enjoy this fic. ;)
Reviewer: halfvolturi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
Oh my god - please update soon. I'm on the edge of my seat!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
Welcome back! James is such an asshole! I am ready for Bella to lose the job anyway because it is setting her up to leave Edward. Time for one that will work with her being with him. Perhaps team PR person.
Reviewer: halfvolturi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Sweaty edward after hockey practice...in the shower is necessary in ANY story! Loving this SO much!!!!!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
cute meeting! i am glad edward's not a man-whore... or at least he doesn't appear to be thus far :)
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
hilarious!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
i think it is bull shit and because my child is driving me batty today and I am PMSing....I am noth appy with you! The fact that you let that scum have that much power over them and didn't even get his ass benched because of the stick in edward's face...just makes me even more mad at this bullshit!
Now that the rant is over....I really liked the chapter! The drama added so much plot and many opportunities for more chapters to tie up loose ends!
I think you do a fine job at writing...so the rant was just me being pissed off at James...not you.....even tho you wrote him. !! HEHE :O) All is well, really!
Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
Great story. I read all 27 chapters in one day! I can't wait until the next update.
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