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Reviewer: ayden2408 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Epilogue (V)
finally finished the story its so good i really enjoyed reading it
Reviewer: LillyTigress (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Epilogue (V)
I absolutely loved this story. Took me long enough to finish. But it was amazing. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Well, it was really stupid of them to kiss in that huge window knowing she lives right there. The only thing she has to do is look through her window...
Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
OMG! I would've cried my eyes out of embarrasment! LOL. Poor thing.
Reviewer: tarafaith1 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
woooops...seems edward is gonna have a challenge on his hands with ms swan..lol
Reviewer: tarafaith1 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
oh my god i cant stop laughing....imagine hat happening to you..i would die...that is gonna keep me laughing all day
Reviewer: tarafaith1 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
oooooooooh... i can tell this is already gonna be goooood :)
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
is she preggers and needs edward to play daddy??
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
yay karma!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
That house is ridiculously gorgeous! And who doesn't love taboo??
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
Now granted, I am not a hockey fan because the fighting pisses me off. But I have got to admit that hockey players must have AMAZING physiques since they are always in a constant state of movement...
Oh, and poor Bella.... she is never going to live down the vibrator incident...
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
And they meet! YAY! I wish I was brave enough to go out to a bar the first day in a new city. I am just too lame. LOL
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Epilogue (V)
I just found missed chapter alerts in my swamped in box. Great ending to a lovely story!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
OMG i think i would die!! :)
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 05:51 PM · On: Epilogue (V)
This is going to be long so get ready! First of all I absolutely loved this story!!! It was so refreshing and your writing style is excellent. You had everything a person reading this wants...a great storyline topic, funny, loveable characters, slow build up to possible drama, hilarious situations, and payback and revenge for the nasty little things certain characters do to harm our favorite six pack. I love all the characters and I am neither Team Ed or Team Jake. (I read both cannon pairings, heck Ive even read Jazz/Bella and Em/Bella pairings and in their own way are good.) but when it's one or the other we always want to see the HEA to the story no matter what. I just told a fellow reader that I love your Bella in this story. She still has her worrisome antics, but she was a very confident and strong person in this fic and I love how you wrote her handling the James situation. That took alot of guts (I knew she had that on her!) I don't like too much angst so you get a thumbs up on how you wrote their relationship without much of it. Oh, and thank you for not making Ed the player that most would write him being the sexy rich hockey player that he was. It was good knowing that Tanya was his only real problem and not dozens of scorned women still wanting in. And also thanks for not trashing Jacob and making him into 'a monster' or making his character look bad. what you did was respectable and I appreciate that effort!)
So I guess I can end with saying you are one of the many that have totally blew up my rockometer with this fic. Thanks for sharing your story and your talent with us readers and I hope to read a many more of your works.
Hugs, and squeezes, Stephanie
Reviewer: EJ Santry (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 05:55 PM · On: Epilogue (V)
I greatly enjoyed this story. This was recommended to me by two people when I was searching out Hockeywards after watching the All Star Skill Challenge last weekend. :)
You grew Bella nicely from someone oblivious to the game to someone who has found the magic and excitement of the sport. That it isn't just about sticks and pucks, but the inclusion and combined energy you get watch and cheering with 15K people. Especially in big games, it almost pulses.
I liked your Edward in this one. He is the first one to fall unabashedly. He wants her, and pursues and often begs. It is fun to see him be the irrational one and Bella the beacon of practicality.
This is exactly what I was looking for when I put out the call for recommendations. Very well done!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Epilogue (V)
Great story and a wonderful final chapter, very sweet and touching, with a few entertaining highlights. I loved it, and I am sad to see this story end.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)
Great chapter, Glad they won the cup, and I loved reading their reactions and interviews. I especially loved the proposal at centre ice, very romantic that at such a moment Edward is thinking of her and their future. very touching and emotional. A great story, I can;t wait to see what happens in the epilogue or what you come up with next.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
love the way they handled James and the press, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: twistedntempted (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
Ha karma got Jessica and I can't blame Bella AT ALL!! Holla! I'd have em tied to a bedpost somewhere :)
Reviewer: twistedntempted (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
dum dum dum.... and I'm hooked!! Great work girl!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Epilogue (V)
Great epilogue!!!
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Epilogue (V)
wonderful epi. I'm a sucker for a hea, always makes me happy.
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)
That was awesome! What a wonderful proposal. I really enjoyed this story, thank you.
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
I like that she went to Denali. Is Tanya going to come back and be a bitch?
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