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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

I am all caught up what an amazing story!!!!  I can't wait for more I loved the proposal and delay of reply perfect for your Bella...  Worried about James as you would expect!  The story is intense so why wouldn't I be right?  Post again soon!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

lol and that is why i love don cherry he is so freaking hilarious and his outrageous clothing makes my hockey night :P lol im a Canadian and a Leafs fan:P

Im sad you didnt have them play the Leafs:(

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 27 - A Disaster of a Night (V)

oh shit this cant be good

i have abad feeling about this!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)

oh shit this could not be good

this definitely could not be good

that was definitely an interesting chapter!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 25 - All Star Battle (V)

ohhh man first itw as tanya now its james cant they leave these ppl alone!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Back in the Game (V)

yaaay bella has her job back and take that jessica! and Tanya and Magazine owners!!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Reunion (V)

ohhh my what a reunion that was!

brilliant chapter:D

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Home Again? (v)

that chapter made me sad :(

i feel upset that that they didnt give in i hope the magazine gets alot of negative publicity!@!!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Night to Remember (V)

awww shit stupid Tanya Denali did somethign didnt she

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

mmmmmmm hot

so freaking hot! that was an awesome chapter :D

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

awww that was really cute

i liked this chapter!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Christmas Surprise (v)

ouch

evil esme hahahah

they just got caught by four parents!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

awww that was really great

i loved this chyapter!

and i am glad tht they got a talk in!

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

GREAT GREAT Chapter pls pls update soon!!!!! I love your story!!!!!and of course I love this hockey world!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Swoon!!!!  They finally said I love you!!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Christmas Surprise (v)

SQUEAL So amazing I t otally had the idea before I read it wouldn't it be amazing if...and then boom hehehe  GREAT WORK!!!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

Great Chapter what a ride and he has no clue about Tanya yet I can't wait for him to find out about thta bit of info heheheh  awesome work

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

OMG OG OMG BUSTED!!!!!!  I squealed when I read this my son asked "mommy yous ok?"  I laughed and he smiled like silly mommy!   hahaha

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

OH come on!!!  This is Fing BS  I hate Tanya shes gong to mess up everything and although I have o clue what shes really trying to do unless she wants some attention from the tabloids for her career I could run her over with my mini van hehehehe

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

oh o see i knew it would be trouble things are escalating the wrong way!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?

OMG poor Edward!!  Bella you be a good bandaid and help with his bobos

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Planning

why do i have a bad feeling about this

i have a feeling that they are going to let things build up!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Recovery?

oh o why do i get the feeling there will be a buildup that will only lead to trouble?!

Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

i hope she drops off a cliff instead of coming back into the picture!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home

SQUEE  I hought she was going to tease and hold out on him...although it wasn't his fault it would have been so worth the punishment!

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