Reviewer: zanyzay (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great chapter! I love your story!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
they handled that very well, i just hope Denali isn't going to put some kind of negative spin on the article
Reviewer: lalalaney (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
haha well this chapter ended on a good note. cant wait to see how this story turns out.
Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great chapter! I was wondering what would happen when the story finally broke.
Reviewer: seadragon (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
yah! james is dealt with finally. i liked bella's actions. quick, decisive and with minimum fuss. great chapter.
Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great chapter. Cant wait for next update. Happy Holidays.
Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
love it
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great chapter. Glad Bella got the truth out there before James started spreading rumours. Too bad she lost her job, but she'll be with Edward now. Hope she can find another job though. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
:)
Reviewer: lady-Suze (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
Hey!
I'm so glad you updated. I know how much time it can take to write a chapter, so just take all the time you need. I'll still be here waiting until you post the next one. :D
xxx Lady-Suze
Reviewer: cullensbabe (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Funny
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
great chapter!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Screw short that was awesome!!!! I am so glad its out in the open no more hiding!!!! Great Chap Happy Holidays and maybe for New Years Post again soon hehehhe <3
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great Chapter.....
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
LOL Damn Bella has brass! I love it!
Reviewer: clanmoran (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Good chapter----had me worried in the beginning, thought we weren't going to find out what she did! Can't wait to see James' reaction/response to all this!! hehe
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Bella released her story to the newspaper. She wrote the article and included the reason for coming out into the open. James and his blackmailing schemes, to end the hold he had on Edward during the games. This way with her evidence (recording) anything James would say would be considered a lie. Very smart. Bella knew she'd lose her job. Edward was worth it and putting his mind at ease the remaining of the playoffs games was all she was concerned about. She will continue with the remaining two articles for the magazine. Then move permanently to Denver to be with Edward. Appeared the press conference went fine. Looking forward to the private interview of Edward and Bella with Mr Denali.
Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
I'm so happy to see that you have updated your story... Keep up the wonderful work!
Hope ur having a fabulous holiday season =)
Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
So happy that Bella found a way to beat James. I have a feeling that magazine is going to be sorry they let her go and someone else is going to scoop her up happily.
Really looking forward to see how things go now that they are "out" and on the team is on their way to the Stanley Cup!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Can't wait for the exclusive interview with Mr. Denali! :)
Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
I so glad you came back to the story!! Its one of my favs.
Happy Holidays!!
Marie
twicrazreader
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Old Enemy, New Battle (V)
aaahhhh! update soon please :)
Reviewer: Fayebaby (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Old Enemy, New Battle (V)
I am so ready for the world to know about edward and bella, and james needs a taste of his own medicine!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Old Enemy, New Battle (V)
james is such a cocky SOB. I hope Bella's plan works and is able to discredit anything james says. I'm glad that Edward finally told her what's been going on.
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Drama
SPEECHLESS !!!!!!!
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