Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)
Love it!! Can't wait for the Epoilogue!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
I love how everything blew up in James' face. It is sad that Bella would lose her job but just think of all the doors opening to her. I have a feeling she could get any job she wants. Eh, who would want to work though when they are the girlfriend of Edward Cullen. By that I mean who would have time for anything else?
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Well I think Bella did the right thing even though she lost her job. :) I'd love to see what james's reaction is.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
im glad that bella came clean!
Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
i just found this story and i read it straight through! i look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Everything is out in the open at last. Wonder how James will react. Happy holidays and don't let us wait too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
great update!! can't wait for the next chapter. Hope they win Lord Stanley's cup.
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Yeah They got the upperhand. Have a great holiday.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
on the plus side for the current magazine articles - those last two issues are probably going to sell before they even get a chance to hit the stands :)
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Yay! An update.
I'm so glad that they got their side of the story out before James had time to get to the press, took the wind right out of his sales, and Bella gets to finish her articles, yay again. Lol
I hope the interview goes well for Edward and Bella. I liked how the whole family turned up at their door, it's like they have a collective mind, lol.
Loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to more, I've missed this story. Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year.
Jane x
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Jeez! What a relief that James didn't get what he wanted! I wonder if Denali will hire Bella after all this is over?
Anyways, excellent chapter, per usual. I really love the "team" E and B have become. They are so strong together. Can't wait for more
Katy
Reviewer: 2grtkids (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
So glad to see an update, love how James did not get the upper hand on them. Have a wonderful holiday and I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Jodipo1946 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Ok.. keep it going. She did the right thing. Head it off before it hits you. I am glad Edward has not abandond her. I was afraid he would bail.
Reviewer: Jodipo1946 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Road to the Playoffs (V)
Well he will break up with her now. You are writing this toward a breakup to protect her.... I hate that
Reviewer: Jodipo1946 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Back in the Game (V)
Well I am glad they gave in to Esme. If I was Bella I would start looking for another venue for my writing. Paper, magazine or whatever. These people are dumb. They no these gossip rags make up stories. Take a picture then make up a story for it.
Reviewer: Jodipo1946 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Night to Remember (V)
well, what do I think? I think that pretend to not be together would not work for me. Either you are or your not. I would be better off going home. Do the article with what you have and move on or he steps up either way she probably looses. As usual, Bella gets the shit end of the deal.
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
great chapter
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
I hope James is totally shown to be a slimeball publicly and irrefutably. And really....the Avs HAVE to win the cup!!! Come-on!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Finally! The whole mess is out in the open and Bella can stay near Edward!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Great great upadate plsplpslpls update soon!!!!! Dont leave us so long with out a great update!!!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Short, but I still loved it! Something tells me these next few chapters are going to be QUITE interesting!
Reviewer: lalalaney (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
i really do like the story but the way your wrtite the POV's is confusing. but other then that im still hanging in there and enjoying the ride.
Reviewer: jeanieinabottle (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
I'm sure you have your reasons, but Edward should have made her tell him why she wanted him to do this before he agreed.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Good chapter. I'm glad she beat James to the punch. Please update soon
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)
Sounds like Bella did the only thing she could to get a decent outcome in this situation. I'm glad to hear that things went as well as they could.
Thanks so much for continuing to share your writing. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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