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Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
This story has a interesting direction... different can't wait for your next update!!
Thanks For Writing!
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
I think I am really going to enjoy this story.
I will think twice about packing my B.O.B. for my next trip...gah I can just see that happening to me.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
I like! Poor Bella, what a mortifying way to meet the Cullens...yippee Edward stood up for her though! :)
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
This is REALLY good. I'm so picky when people write about hockey, I always want everything to be 100% accurate.
Author's Response: I'll try to make it as accurate as possible...I love the sport and I know it pretty well too so I hope I can keep it up to your standards...but any problems just tell me and I'll go back and get it right!
Reviewer: meerundhimmel (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I like this story a lot! Can't wait to see them in the meeting! LOL it will be fun :P
Reviewer: tickledpink89 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
This is very interesting. I can't wait to see where you take this. update soon
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Loving this story! Can't wait for an update! Cute way for B&E to meet!
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Hee...thought the vibrator part was hilarious....
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
It seems like you've gotten to a great start with this story. This initial interaction between B & E was nice here. Your Bella is hilarious. Bless her heart, I've spent half the story already feeling embarassed for her. The humor is nicely done here. Esme seems like a sweetheart and Edward doesn't seem like the typical playboy that I was worried that he would be. I'm glad they both realized who the other person really was before having to meet in front of his family. I was kinda worried that you'd have him thinking she was just trying to pretend she didn't recognize him to get more info. from him or something and he'd get all pissed, so I'm really glad you gave us that little insight in his mind at the end so we know that's not the case. I'm excited to see where you take this story! Please continue it!
Author's Response: Yeah I didn't want him to be the typical playboy...I worried it might seem like that with the flight attendant's comments but she was just going by what she'd heard...just rumors.
Yeah I didn't want to make it out to be that he thought she was trying to scam him...that's a bit overdone (Not necessarily with twilight fics, but just in General), and I wanted something a bit different. I'm glad you like it so far...I promise an update soon.
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I LOVE this story! Please update soon. I can't wait to see the meeting in morning!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Just found your fic, and read all three chapters. Gotta say I'm enjoying it a lot! LOL I giggled for a good five minutes after the vibrator incident. And enjoyed her and Edward in the bar, even with her changing her mind about going on a date with him. Can't wait to see them meet in the morning, with the other Cullens around.
Great job, I can't wait for more! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
What an interesting concept for a story. I like it, alot. Your writing skills seem solid. Grammar and punctuation are good. I hope to read more because I think this story has great potential.
Reviewer: McDoogle (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
so far so good
Reviewer: alandava (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Oooh, hockey and Twilight, brilliant! You are off to a good start even though you used the Avalanche. Die hard Wings fan here, and the dirty Av's are probably our most hated rivals. One favor to ask, call the hockey groupies puck bunnies, that term always cracks me up!
Can't wait to read more,
alandava
Author's Response: Yeah I chose the Avs because I'm a flames fan and I have no realy hatred for the Avs...but also no real love for them either...the wings however...not so much my favorite...but since you like my story so far I'll forgive you! just kidding...gotta love hockey rivalries though!
Puck bunnies....if there will ever be anymore mention of hockey groupies I shall call them puck bunnies.
thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I like it.
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I just finished reading all three chapters. I enjoyed them. I don't understand hockey, but I have seen a few games nothing pro just minor league ones. I am more of a basketball fan. But this story so far is one I will be looking forward to updates on. Update soon.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
awesome! Can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I'm loving this story so far. Please continue!!! Do they have something on twilighted.net that will alert me to when you've updated (like they have on fanfiction.net) that you know of? Anyways, I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
I am laughing so hard.
I hope Esme doesn't judge.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Yeah, I think its alright to play hard to get sometimes....
Reviewer: MforEdward (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I really like your story. Something new and different. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
YEAH! A combo of my fav characters and hockey! AWESOMENESS!!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Great story, I loved the airport scene btw!!! I can't wait for the next update:)
Reviewer: kg15 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
Yay the finally met! Looking forward to the next chapter:)
Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
I'm so excited about this story! I really love it so far and can't wait for more!! Great job!
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