Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
Edward on ice? Sounds VERY HOTT!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Just sat and read this in one sitting. I LOVE ME SOME HOCKEY - GO MN WILD!!
Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: kfoster2519 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
LMAO. I KNEW IT WAS A VIBRATOR! -goes to read on-
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Hmmm...what will Bella think of her visitor??? :) Glad to see an update!!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
OME that was hilarious. I'm laughing so hard I can't tell you what the rest of the rest of the chapter is about. I sure hope I didn't miss any importan facts. Yeah I remember the portfolios so I guess that's good enough, huh?
Sandra
True Story - My sister came to visit. A vibration was eminating from her purse. Her 15 year old son handed her the purse and said, "Gosh mom, the vibration on your phone is strong." So she unzips her purse, reaches in and stops the vibration and zips it back up. Her son says "Aren't you going to answer it?". With a straight face she tells him not now. He goes off to play videos. She looks at me and says "Oh, lord that could have been bad". The look of upspoke horror and amusement was all it took to let me know what it was. But that shit's funny I don't care who you are.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
cliffhangers are just mean. especially this one, I am sure Bella will not react well to finding edward outside her door, But I don't think she will have the heart to turn him away, yell at him maybe but not turn him away.
Love how the story is progressing and I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting for too long
Reviewer: kfoster2519 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
i love this. i really hope that bella punches jessica soon. muahaha.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
I was going to review after I'd read what was written so far by my goodness, that vibrator part was too much! LMAO
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Nope, not offended by mentions of vibrators... in fact, something embarassing would probably happen to me if I ever tried to take mine through an airport... I can see it now. A phallus shaped object appearing on the x-ray machine when my purse goes on the conveyor belt. Airport security confiscating it... what a nightmare.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
I can't believe this is it for this chapter. ......... Now we are all curious where Edward will stay the night. Please update real soon.
Great story
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
I have no room for another story but I've passed this one too many times and for some reason it calls to me. But any first chapter that ends with Bella telling Jessica to "Go Fuck Yourself" can be put off no longer. Looking forward to more.
Sandra
Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
This fic is amazing, and Edward is HOT. Mmm, hockey player...
Whoa, that cliffhanger is great! Well, well, let's see how Bella manages that.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
ohh well I think the first thing Edward should say is apologising for the food bill thing - but maybe find a way that Bella can accept so that she's not feeling uncomfortable about future meal tabs... this early in the story I can't see that being a good outcome though hehe
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
I just found your story today. I am enjoying it so far. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon... :)
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
In short, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! Some hockey would be appreciated, but I totally understand if it just doesn't quite fit with the flow of the chapter.
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
I really like your story. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
WOW! I wonder if he is gonna suck it up and go knock on Bella's door? I think she is pretty pissed off at him right about now. I can't wait to see what happens next! Loved it!
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
That house is absolutely phenomenal...I wish it were mine.
So do you have a son/brother/cousin/etc. that plays hockey? My little brother is a U18 Midget right now. I remember when he was a Mite. He grew up waaay too fast.
I can't to read about some hockey games, and especially can't wait for more Edward/Bella moments.
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Nice! Should make for an interesting evening...
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Where is going? To bunk with Bella?
Please update soon? I can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Oooh... so far it's really engrossing. The spark between Edward and Bella is electrifying, you wrote all the characters so well. I'm so enjoying this, especially what's going to come up next. *winks*
And yes, Edward on ice again... that paints a really sexy image in my head, ha! Please write more soon, thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: PSW8888 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Love this story! I realize you just updated, but I hope you are posting a new chapter soon. Love the hockey too!!!
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Awesome, keep it coming! I got a little confused at the point of views though. But i hope Edward doesnt have to sleep in the hallway.
Author's Response: sorry about the confusion...it's probably because I write as a omniscient narrator....and know what is going on in everyone's head!! I hate writing in first person point of view because you miss what the other characters are thinking, and if you want to switch to their POV in another chapter, you have to backtrack...as a writer I hate that...so I do it all at once.
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
This is a really fun story. I love jock edward.
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