Hmmm I do believe I like the idea of Edward as a Hockey player. How freakin embarrassing that little situation was by the way. Edward already coming out all protective of her :) I love it.

These two are really teetering on the FWB (Friends w/benefits vs Relationship thing.  I have a feeling that they're both going to gradually see that 'keeping it casual' isn't going to work this time...

Ooooh I wasn't expecting such an early and wonderful appearance from Edward Cullen. That was very nice actually :) So far so good.

That is absolutely hillarious! Probably one of the funniest ideas I've ever heard! I love it. So So funny. Nice one. Oh and nice long chapters too. Thanks!

Calgary's a good team.  Jsut don't tell my husband that I like a Canadian team!!

Author's Response:

I love my flames...they just cannot seem to put it together for a good post season...stupid injuries... and your secret is safe with me. But in your husband's defence... I hate all OTHER Canadian teams...so aside from Calgary he has a point. =)

Great chapter.  I was so scared that Bella and Edward were going to get caught. Phew!

Anyways, I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. 

(thanks for including some hockey in this chapter.)

Poor Bella, stuffed in the closet all naked.  Hilarious.  Can't wait for more.

Bella's geetin' a little too eager, huh?

LOL! I'm surprised I didn't notice the oops of city names. Oh well, these things happen. Good cover up though. Okay, so this was a filler chapter but a few things happened that need to be explained in the next few chapters. Like what the hell went on at the family dinner, that they didn't invite Bella, and everyone had to interrupt their plans? I know there are families out there that demand family first but there must have had to be something going on if it was a surprise dinner only for the family. I really hope Edward takes it upon himself to get Bella's clothes cleaned and returned to her no matter what she says. That will give him some brownie points for leaving her, naked, in a closet in his workout room for two plus hours. AND with that in mind, why didn't Edward get some balls and say he needed to change his shirt or something before his family rushed him out of his house. He could have snuck in the workout room or said he left the light on in that room or something and went to tell Bella that he was leaving and that her clothes were in the trash. Not that she would be happy about it but at least she could get her keys and go back to her place and he wouldn't appear to be a complete abandoner. Shame on Alice and Rose for throwing out someone's clothes. That's not cool, no matter whose clothes they were.

Good chapter. Great story. Update quickly.

Author's Response:

Yeah Edward is going to have to work a little to make it up to Bella...epic fail on his part...there were lots of things he should have done yes there must be something done for Bella's poor clothes.

Family dinner is important I will go into that next time. =) the Family dinner changes the flow of things in the story.

omg you killed me with the Vibrator thing and with the kid...hhhhhhhhhh

LoL

hmm not so sure that "nothing happened" aside from B&E being unsatisfied... and Bella having to spend what, 3 hrs in the closet?!

Sure Edward could've come up with SOMETHING to get enough time to get Bella clear?

He'll just have to learn to be more inventive :)

Author's Response:

yeah epic fail on his part, but he'll have to make it up to her. =)

Thanks for reading.

ahahahhahaha. that's horrible! and hysterical! poor bella.

can't wait for the next update ;)

Great chapter!  Bella is more forgiving than I am.