Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
So what is everyone's favorite sleazy smut slut up to? Perhaps trying to cover up lesbian tendancies? Make a boyfriend jealous? Further her career, yeah like this would be necessary? This should be fun.
I love that it is not going to affect the developing relationships between Edward and Bella. But I can't help but wonder where that is headed.
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
there was his dream and next to her his nightmare, I just loved it. Some suspense and intrigue mixed with sexual tension and budding romance, an well written to boot. Excellent.
I have the feeling this could be the make or break of Edward and Bellas relationship, I can't wait to see how the family handles it and what Jessica manages to dig up on Tanya. As always you have left me on the edge of my seat egarly anticipating the next update (especially if it has the promised Bella and Edward sweet bit's), please don't leave me here for to long, it gets uncomfortable real quick.
Reviewer: hihotintin (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Ugh stupid Tanya.....such a ruiner! I can't stand when people listen to personal calls, it's so rude! Ugh she just makes me so angry!! I'm gonna need some sweetness after the better taste Tanya leaves in my mouth! What are her motives, I can't wait until she gets what is comming to her!!! Great chapter, but I'm looking forward to the next even more.
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
I am still really enjoying the story, but curious to know how much Edward is going to tell his family. I assume he still wants to keep his and Bella's relationship secret, but in that case, what does Tanya really have to hold over his head and get him to agree to the charade. Also, I can't wait to find out what her story is!
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
wow... What a bitch!!!!!!! I hate that tryfiln hoe!! I can't wait for Bella and Edward to put that slut in her place!! I love this story! Can't wait for more. Thanks Tsherm
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Firstly, I rather have short chapters that are posted as often as you can than 10,000 words chapters once a month. So thank you for the fast update.
As per the chapter itself, it raised more questions than anything else, but this is good, right? Right. It is getting more intriguing and my hatred for the Denali-Bitch is growing by the minute.
What is really her deal? It can't be only wanting to make Edward's life misearible. She doesn't care that he is dating Bella at all... She has money and she is the little princess of the city... I can't reckon what is in her twisted mind.
But it could be worse. At least Edward got to tell his family anf Bella the truth. (thanks for that, it would kill me if he had to lie to Bella)
Anyway, thanks again for the update.
Monique :-)
Reviewer: Smoochiefrog (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Ack, what a ho!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
not liking tanya even more now, what is she up to?
please update again soon!!! :)
Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Keep up this story! It is my two loves combined - hockey and Twilight! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Thank goodness for sweet Edward and Bella bits because I am fuming right now! I absolutely despise Tanya! I felt like I was in Bella's shoes for this one! Jeez can you get anymore desperate that chick is brutal! Still love the story, but I am so pissed right now! Ugh!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Tanya is pure evil. Grr...
It was sweet of Edward to protect Bella like that. :)
Please update soon?
Reviewer: sjm300 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Please have Tanya get run over by the Zamboni!! What a bitch!! Is Edward going to tell the family about Bella too? This is a great story!!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
ugh...i hate tanya! when is edward going to tell bella how he really feels? can't wait for that...
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
So, this means they will have to come clean about their relationship too. Oooo, I can't wait!
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
I like it! I am very interested to see how much Edward tells the family and what their reactions will be, individually. Keep it up!
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
HURRY UP AND UPDATE! i loooooooove it!
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
awesome chappie! scandalous though! :D
Reviewer: gmf1673 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
I just get so thrilled when there's an update on this story,. It is my favorite one- i love hunky hockey Edward. But I hate Tanya and really want to see her slip on 16th st and get run over by the shuttle. Please???
Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Oh man, I need really sweet Edward and Bella bits NOW! I don't like this turn of events at all. I'm thinking Tanya has some dirty tricks up her sleeves and it's not as simple as she implies her plan to be. I also think she has something not so printable in her past or currently that she's trying to cover up. I have to wonder why the timeline? What's so important with Christmas? Is she really just trying to get into the wedding on Edward's arm? That seems not so likely. I'm betting she's bedding some undesirable person and doesn't want Daddy to find out about it or something to that extent. I would say she's preggo with some scumballs kid but then I'm not sure her timeline fits to imply the kids' Edward's. I feel so bad for Bella and for Edward. Edward needs to come clean with the rest of his family so that they can all fight for him and Bella and get Tanya the hell out of their lives. I'm thinking blackmail works in both directions... and the Cullens better pull some serious shit out of their pockets to nail Tanya with or else Daddy will take them all down. Oh, maybe they can get the dirt on Daddy instead of Tanya then they'll both go back under the rock they came out from.
Great story. Great chapter. I really hate where this is going with Tanya because I hate tension and blackmail and angst and lying and manipulating but it will make the story better in the end. Please give me some sweet Edward and Bella bits now! Please!!!! Update quickly. Great job.
Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Interesting turn of events - curious to see where it goes. I do like that at least Edward is being truthful about it with Bella instead of breaking it off with her. I also like that Bella is immediately on the offensive.
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
DAmn Tanya! That girl is just plain evil! I love the fact that Bella is gonna try and go after her! I can't wait to see how the rest of the family takes the news that Tanya is on the warpath once again! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Arggggh! I can't wait to see what you have planned for Tanya! Keep up the good work. This story is really good.
Reviewer: cresponina (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
OMG .... That WITCH!!! OK PLEEEEEASE tell me they find something on her and bring her down!!! I HATE TANYA!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Maybe edward can convince Carlisle to let Tanya be his practice puck and he can shoot her off one of the poles on the goal? That would be funny.
Go Penguins!!!
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
What a bitch that Tanya is! Daddy this and daddy that. Spoiled rich girl bitch better not mess with my favorite couple.
I hope Angela finds some dirt on her for Bella. Looks like she is going to make Edward and the Cullen life miserable.
Make her go away, please.
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