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Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I'm a little late in reading this chapter, but just to give you an idea of how utterly obsessed with this story I am....I am on vacaction in Hawaii this week, but still HAD to read this update....my husband was a little annoyed that I delayed our snorkling to find out about Alice's reaction!  MEN!  lol!

Anyway - I thought this chapter was great! I liked that they just came clean about everything to everyone.  Its so unlike other stores and I love that.  And Bella having to ask Tanya to be featured in an article??!!  Totally didn't see that coming.  And the whole bridesmaid's dress is very suspicious....I'm anxious to see if that turns into anything. 

I missed the hockey action - which surprises me, because I've never considered myself a fan - but I'm excited for Edward to come out of his funk and be a superstar.  I'm excited for the roadtrip...bitches don't travel; do they?  :)

Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why are you torturing bella???

why whywhy??

and is she going to end up being the other bridesmaid??

Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I love how the Cullens interact with each other. Joking and prying. I want to be a Cullen. You know that if Edward and Bella didn't go right over to Esme and Carlisle's house when they did, there's Emmett and Alice ready to butt their noses in and spill the beans. I loved the phone conversation relaying the info and Rose's and Emmett's reactions were classic. I love the Cullens. I'm thinking the Cullen women are a force to be reckened with and if I was Tanya, I would be shaking in my shoes knowing that the Cullen females were on a  mission against me and my plans.

Great story. Great chapter. I love the banter. Update quickly.

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Even if Bella feels she can't be honest with Angela (although as Esme says they'd insist on keeping her writing, so maybe she could be honest) she could tell her that she was asking because there seemed to be a problem between the Cullens and Tanya. She should tell her she doesn't want to write it, that Tanya has already had words with her. Keeping everything to themselves got them in this position in the first place, I would hope she'd learn from it.

I am glad that they are both realizing they have feelings for each other and aren't just fuck buddies. And that his family realizes this is good for him.

Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

shut it that is just trashy of tayna to get in the way like that psh...i'd bitch slap that hoe i don't care who her daddy is

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

This is gettin so damned juicy! I love it! I am so happy his family knows and are totally behind them ( I didn't expect any less actually) It also looks like someone is about to be a bridesmaid!!!!

I love it! I also sort of expected the reaction Angela gave about Tanya! This is going to make things so much worse!

Happiest of all.....they admitted the feelings! That it is not casual. I love It

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Grrr. First, Great update. Thank you. I love this story... second... effing tanya! Why is her role so big? LOL. Grrrr. I don't know if I prefer her as the bad guy or when James is (in all other fics. lol) I want to go all hong kong fuey on her ass. HA HA HA.

Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Oh no, that feature will not end well for Bella.  Great update!

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter and I'm glad that the family finally knows about Bella and Edward.  The road trip could be fun!  :)

Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

ohhhhhhhhh no i hate tayna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

So glad the Cullen's know about Bella and Edward now but I'm still worried about Tanya, and now Angela wants a piece done on her? Why? Won't she bring up dating Edward if they do it? That can't be good, can it? Just talking out loud. You don't have to answer. LOL

Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

good god, what is going on.....

 

can't wait to find out what is going down next!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

HOLY CRAP!

Is she PSYCHO? BATSHIT BONKERS?

When will the mystery of Tanya Denali be solved?

ha. Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

OH NO!!!!! NO COVER STORY ON THAT SKANK! I AM SO GLAD THAT EVERYONE IS HAPPY ABOUT EDWARD AND BELLA'S RELATIONSHIP. IS BELLA GOING TO BE THE OTHER BRIDESMAID? CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

BWAHAHA!! ALICE GOT AN EYEFUL!! I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

I FREAKING HATE TANYA! GAH!! I BET SHE IS PREGNANT AND IS TRYING TO FRAME EDWARD AS BEING THE FATHER! I WOULDN'T PUT IT PAST THE SKANKY BITCH! SHE IS GOING TO MAKE HIM PAY FOR DUMPING HER. I HOPE I AM WRON!

Reviewer: Suzana382 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Yay the detroit red wings!  mY home team!  hahahahaha!!  I cant wait for the next chapter, will there be any fluff?????  ;)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

uh oh... so what's the deal with Tanya then? It's good that the family knows the whole story now about E&B and the blackmail - but it looks like it's about to get a whole lot messier.

Oh and really, Bella bought the whole 'other bridesmaid is in NY' thing? Or am I reading too much into it and the other bridesmaid really IS in NY? lol

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter. I'm so glad everyone knows about Edward and Bella now. Can't wait to read about the road trip and see what happens with Tanya. Please update soon.

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I am so happy that it came out about Bella and Edward... at least the family can help out now with Tanya,

I am wondering what all Angela found out.  

I don't know why you didn't like this chapter....it was great and was important to the story.

Update really soon please

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter. I'm so glad everyone knows about Edward and Bella now. Can't wait to read about the road trip and see what happens with Tanya. Please update soon.

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Ok, I'm really hating on Tanya right now.  Not only is she a bitch, but now she's going to be a bitch with a cover story!  Gosh, can this suck any more?  I have no idea where you are going with this story which both intrigues me and agriviates me!  I'm agrivated because I can't stand what Tanya is doing and I don't like not knowing or even being able to guess at what is going on.  Yet for the same reasons is why I'm so drawn to this story.  I've gotta know what is going on.  I'm also very happy that Edward and Bella have admitted to deeper feelings for each other rather than just keeping in "casual".

Kathy M.

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

hmmm wonder what her story is....

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I really hope that Bella doesn't have to do a story on Tanya.  And I hope that they figure something out quick for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

You were not happy wiithn the chapter, but I think it helped move forward and worked great. I am glad the family finally knows, so they can join forces and crush stupid Tanya. I was really hoping Angela would find a little dirt, but maybe when they do the article (yuck!) on her they will figure some things out! I hope whoever Angela picks to write it, is a close friend of Bella who she feels she can come clean with. If they know they need to get nasty,  and are friends, then maybe it will be good. Hey uncovering dirty secrets would double sales anyway! Send Angela herself!

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