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Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

ohhhhhhhhh no i hate tayna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

So glad the Cullen's know about Bella and Edward now but I'm still worried about Tanya, and now Angela wants a piece done on her? Why? Won't she bring up dating Edward if they do it? That can't be good, can it? Just talking out loud. You don't have to answer. LOL

Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

good god, what is going on.....

 

can't wait to find out what is going down next!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

HOLY CRAP!

Is she PSYCHO? BATSHIT BONKERS?

When will the mystery of Tanya Denali be solved?

ha. Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

OH NO!!!!! NO COVER STORY ON THAT SKANK! I AM SO GLAD THAT EVERYONE IS HAPPY ABOUT EDWARD AND BELLA'S RELATIONSHIP. IS BELLA GOING TO BE THE OTHER BRIDESMAID? CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

BWAHAHA!! ALICE GOT AN EYEFUL!! I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

I FREAKING HATE TANYA! GAH!! I BET SHE IS PREGNANT AND IS TRYING TO FRAME EDWARD AS BEING THE FATHER! I WOULDN'T PUT IT PAST THE SKANKY BITCH! SHE IS GOING TO MAKE HIM PAY FOR DUMPING HER. I HOPE I AM WRON!

Reviewer: Suzana382 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Yay the detroit red wings!  mY home team!  hahahahaha!!  I cant wait for the next chapter, will there be any fluff?????  ;)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

uh oh... so what's the deal with Tanya then? It's good that the family knows the whole story now about E&B and the blackmail - but it looks like it's about to get a whole lot messier.

Oh and really, Bella bought the whole 'other bridesmaid is in NY' thing? Or am I reading too much into it and the other bridesmaid really IS in NY? lol

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter. I'm so glad everyone knows about Edward and Bella now. Can't wait to read about the road trip and see what happens with Tanya. Please update soon.

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I am so happy that it came out about Bella and Edward... at least the family can help out now with Tanya,

I am wondering what all Angela found out.  

I don't know why you didn't like this chapter....it was great and was important to the story.

Update really soon please

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter. I'm so glad everyone knows about Edward and Bella now. Can't wait to read about the road trip and see what happens with Tanya. Please update soon.

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Ok, I'm really hating on Tanya right now.  Not only is she a bitch, but now she's going to be a bitch with a cover story!  Gosh, can this suck any more?  I have no idea where you are going with this story which both intrigues me and agriviates me!  I'm agrivated because I can't stand what Tanya is doing and I don't like not knowing or even being able to guess at what is going on.  Yet for the same reasons is why I'm so drawn to this story.  I've gotta know what is going on.  I'm also very happy that Edward and Bella have admitted to deeper feelings for each other rather than just keeping in "casual".

Kathy M.

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

hmmm wonder what her story is....

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I really hope that Bella doesn't have to do a story on Tanya.  And I hope that they figure something out quick for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

You were not happy wiithn the chapter, but I think it helped move forward and worked great. I am glad the family finally knows, so they can join forces and crush stupid Tanya. I was really hoping Angela would find a little dirt, but maybe when they do the article (yuck!) on her they will figure some things out! I hope whoever Angela picks to write it, is a close friend of Bella who she feels she can come clean with. If they know they need to get nasty,  and are friends, then maybe it will be good. Hey uncovering dirty secrets would double sales anyway! Send Angela herself!

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Love the update. How interesting that Bella and the "other" bridesmaid are the same size and the colour and style suit Bella so well. Can't wait to see how this goes/ As for a cover story on Tanya; I'd never buy that issue! Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Great chapter, I especially love that Edward and Bella have admited that their realtionship is more than casual, it's about bloody timethat happened. Also wonderful to see that the rest of the family now knows and is on board with trying to figure out just what tanya is up to.

I can't wait to see what happens when the team goes on the road, and just what dynamic James adds to the story, egarly anticipating the nexst chapter, please don't keep us waiting for too long.

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

What?  You aren't going to tell  us yet...that's just mean.  Good chapter, glad the family took the relationship well but that was never really in doubt. 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I can't believe it! Angela wants to do a cover story on her? Unbelievable!

It was so sweet that Edward and Bella are finally open in their relationship and that they can kiss each other goodbye and hello. Sweet! It's nice that everyone approves also. It's great!

Please update soon?

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

uh oh.  so far so good...minus the tanya stuff, but im just not a fan.

Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Yeah it is different to your other chapters...I think it's the layout. But it rights itself towards the end. I'm not sure if there is anything that can be done to fix it. As you said, it moves the story in the right direction. Anyway I still enjoyed it! :)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah it's just one of those chapters...i dunno. Thanks for the positive comments though.

Reviewer: purely_blissful (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I'm glad that everything is out on the table now between Edward and Bella and that they no longer have to hide in front of their family. I'm curious to know what Tanya's motives are. I have a feeling what they may be. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

I am so glad Bella and Edward declared their feelings, so sweet! Glad the family took it well too. Still hating Tanya but not sure that will ever go away lol. Looking forward to more!!!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Thanks for the update.  I can't wait to read more.

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