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Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?
I HATE Tanya! Always have always will.
Mezza
Reviewer: Heather U (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
So far I am really enjoying the story.. I am looking forward to more chapters
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home
I love Alice. :) That was freakin' hilarious!
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
I love how no one notices anything about Edward until he comments on Carlsile. :) Then Jasper is like, "wait a minute!"
Mezza
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
aww!
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Mike's character is exactly right! He is just so annoying! I also love Emmett. :) That is definetly something he would do.
Mezza
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Love it - totally worth the wait.
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
Taboo is an amazing game, this could go anywhere now.
Mezza
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Thanks for the update! I like this chapter- Bella and Tanya talking getting things straight. Bella and Edward becoming more.
Can't wait to see where you take ite :)
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
You are totally forgiven for your long absence as far as I'm concerned just for booting Tanya out of the way for a while! I need more E &B sweetie time and she was making that difficult....causing soo much unnecessary worry.
Now James....grrrrr.... I hate that guy! But I understand how necessary that was. Moving right along....
I love Edward as a hockey player! It is freakin hot! I can't wait to see more. I am excited about the wedding that Bella is getting dragged into as well lol. I can't wait! I love the characters you've created. They compliment the story and each other perfectly.
Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
They're so cute!
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Uh, Bella's just hungover right? I hope you're not implying she might be pregnant because it seems the story has enough drama without the mess they'd find themselves if she is. I love the story, though definitely an interesting twist, with the boys playing ice hockey. It'd be nice to see some more Jasper action, so many people stick him in the back round like SM, very few people give their version of Jas any depth at all. Have him beat up James, not Emmett. Well Emmett can help, he'd never forgive Jasper for leaving him out. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: rt04 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
I'm with you.... YAY Penguins! And for some reason, I keep picturing Edward as Sidney, Emmett as Malkin, don't know why, but oh well. loved this chapter and thanks for updating.
Reviewer: thovampire (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
WOW! I love this story. definitely going to be added to my favorites list! I love hockey too so its like a double plus lol. Please update again really soon. This is an awesome story!! Great job writing it!
Sarah
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
Aw Edward likes her! :D
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
That was amazing! I'm in love with this story now. :D
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
I'm never flying. The possiblity of that happening to me, even without the 'gag gift'. Oh I think I would die.
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
I like this Bella, she is kinda like me.
Mezza
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Love this story. Cannot wait for updates!
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
I am so glad that you are working on the story again! I have missed this story :)
Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
So worth the wait
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
even if there was a ridiculous wait it was worth it. :) I know what it's like seeing someone go down from an injury, personal experience with my sister doing (only her's was from basketball).
can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: inlovewithtwilight (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
love it but i hate the fact that it took so long for this chapter.... please post the next sooner!!!!! i cant wait too read it!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
Whoops! head injury! of COURSE I meant JAMES and Tanya - I wouldn't sick her on poor Jasper!! I wub him :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Love this story! Please update soon!!! :)
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