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Reviewer: wendylove (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
:)
love it
Reviewer: Kolene (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
I really like this story. Have you thought about becoming an author of books and not just stories? I think you could really make a go of that. Great job and thank you for the story.
Reviewer: PuchuSwanCullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
omg! why the wait!? :[ lol hurry!
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Great chapter! Poor Edward, but now Bella can nurse him back to health. haha.
Reviewer: DramaVamp (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Oh, I'm so glad my other favorite stories hadn't been updated yet because it gave me a chance to read yours, start to finish, in a few hours. Awesome! However, I have to ask...is Bella really just hung over, or is there something else brewing????
Reviewer: ColemanTwilighter (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Hurry up and post again, I really got into this story, more than i thought i would.
Reviewer: springlilys86 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Ok, really liking the story, but...did you have to make the Wings the bad guys? I mean, really? We don't have anyone on our team remotely like James! I'm hurt!
...Still liking the story though!
Author's Response: It was mostly becuase there has been a pretty big rivalry between the two teams for a few years now...Since the 96 playoffs I think (Don't quote me on that I'm not positive) I have nothing personal against the wings.
I was pretty happy when they lost to pittsburgh though!
Reviewer: jessicacullen09 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
god i love this story.my brother plays hockey so it's cool to be reading this :)
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
urgh love this! always makes me feel giddy
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
I enjoy seeing Bella taking charge and changing her awful luck. Good for her! And I'm glad that Edward will be ok. Maybe this will give he and Bella a little bit of bonding time too.
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
I knew it!! Alice!!! the window!!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Bella to the rescue!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?
love it!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home
HaHa...that was funny. Edward owes her new bras and capris...
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
I like the Jessica bit. And good call on the Angela doing the interview!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque
I would rather have gotten married at the estate...How pretty!! So when does Edward find out about the vibrator?
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
I'm happy to see Tanya go. Please don't let her rear her ugly head again! Loved the ending, "you couldn’t have found a better girl if you created her yourself" very nice touch!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
LOL! I'm liking this Feisty Bella!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
worth the wait, but I am certainly looking forward to the coming updates. I am glad to see that Tanys is going to be out of the picture for a while, but I get the sinking feeling she isn't gone for good, and will be back when it will hurt Edward and Bella the most. I can't wait to read more about the rivalry between James and Edward, because I am sure that it isn't going to stay on the ice any more.
I also love how Edward has realised just how much he cares for Bella, and I think his injury might prove to be the wake up call Bella needs to realise her Feelings for him.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Just started reading your story. I know nothing about hockey, but I suppose that doesn't really matter. I like it and look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Poor Edward! I really dislike James, I want to press a 'dislike' pr 'thumbs down' button for him. I'm thinking James is going to try something with Bella considering his past. I really hope Edward and Bella aren't just going to be together while she is writing the articles, I might cry if they are.
Wonderful story I finally caught up, I'm in love with it! :D Wonderful writing can't wait for more! Tens all around.
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Drama
Gosh I can hate James, Jacob, and Tayna in one chapter! YAY!...Yeah, I really hate them that much.
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
Now I'm nad at Angela.
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
I new that was going to happen sooner or later. I just don't know what Alice is going to do. This could go really well or really bad.
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
I didn't think it was possible to hate her any more, but I do now.
Mezza
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