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Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Still love this story. Hope RL isn't so crazy that you stop updating. Would love to see how this story ends :)

Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

You started the future talk and that is a good thing - hopefully.  Beautiful handling of the wedding. 

Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

You started the future talk and that is a good thing - hopefully.  Beautiful handling of the wedding. 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

This was really great. I'm glad that Rosalie told off those women. They deserved it.

I hope that Edward and Bella talk soon and make a decision. If they don't it will just be harder when she has to leave.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Ha ha! I have an evil bitch Aunt  Martha too. I think it's a prerequisite.

Reviewer: edwardsgirl13 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

YEAAAAAAAA! Can't wait for the next chpater! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

thank you.

-sierra

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Hey i really love this story its a really good idea it was a really sweet and mushy chap and i loved it =]

Reviewer: farmergirl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

It was great, really angsty. Will we have to wait forever for the update

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

yeah a update and another great chapter..

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

PLEASE let Edward and Bella make some positive headway in their relationship!  Too much angst isn't good for my ulcer!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

can't wait for more

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

sounds like a great wedding

Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Oh I was so happy to see an update on this one. :D

It's about time they talked. Finally! And I loved that Bella admited that she was even thinking of moving her life across the country for a guy. But not just any guy, the right guy. :)

Can't wait for the next one, and hoping it's not too far away. :)

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

I can only imagine how awkward that all felt for Bella! Even though they all treat her like a member of the family, she is well aware that she is not. With things still early in her relationship with Edward, that is really a difficult spot to be in. The aunt and cousin were beyond ridiculous and Rose was perfect, however when things like that enter your ears, they tend to stay in your brain! I was glad she and Edward had a bit of a heart to heart, but if they do not do so on a much more regular and ongoing basis, they really should not even attempt to have a future.

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Awwww Nice little Edward speech...about time they had that talk...they are so silly.

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Welcome back. You were missed! Great chapter. Glad that Edward & Bella finally talked about their relationship. Rosalie is awesome for defending Bella. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Very good.  I bet if Bella's article are a huge success, the mag will be happy to let her stay in Denver, and come to Miami once a month.  Computer are wonderful tools!!  Or maybe she should write a book!

Great story, I always read it when I see a new chapter.

What about evil James???  He needs to break a leg!

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

"Yeah your life is so difficult isn't it?"

That was a REALLY ugly thing for Bella to say.

Just because Edward is good looking and rich... doesn't mean he has less problems than Bella, just DIFFERENT problems.

At least Bella knows that when she makes friends, they are with her because of her heart... not her paycheck.

Rich/poor, ugly/pretty.... everyone has problems. And everyone thinks the grass is greener on the other said.

But that was a nasty thing for Bella to say... especially since Edward and Rose were going out of their way to make her feel wanted and a part of the group.



Author's Response:

Sorry, I probably should have made it more clear...but it was definitely said sarcastically; that's why Bella smiled afterward. It was not meant fo her to be spiteful. I definitely meant it sarcastically. Bella's not that mean

Reviewer: jpoopy (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

thanks for the update

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

I am enjoying this story so much. Hope you update soon. The waiting is killing me. PLEASE

Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

I wasn't expecting this to be a Tanya terror story but I guess now that I am in to it, I am stuck.  I hope this isn't going to be one of those 20 chapters of angst and tears and that this will be a strong Bella and Edward just in a lousy situation.

Let Bella find out the real reason for Tanya coming back and make sure Bella and Edward get her good.  Please let the Tanya humiliation be really BIG and hopefully before Rose and Emmett's wedding so B/E can really really have fun.

Also, please don't make this a never ending story - it is really good fic which is why I kept reading after the first chapter.  I often read one chapter of an in-complete story to decide if I like it and then put it in my favorites so I will get alerts and then read it all when it is finished instead of stopping and starting as updates come in. 

For me to keep reading an in-complete fic means I really like it a lot.

 

 

Reviewer: Longing for Edward (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?

Damn Tanya - I hope Edward gets his act together and realizes that if he lets her get under his skin she wins and we all know Edward is a winner.

How long are Bella and Edward going to stay in the closet?  We know she is worried about the whole conflict of interest (yeah right), she is probably just scared that he doesn't feel the same as she does.

Your Alice is so calm - I guess she doesn't like Bella as much as SM's Bella.

I  am looking forward to how you humiliate Tanya - I hope it is on the Jumbotron between period on National TV....better yet International a Canadians game.  What do you think?

 

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

Hey this story is really good =] i havent read one like this before and its really good =] poor bella and edward =[ i hope they sort it out =]

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

i can't wait for the wedding =]

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

Wow Edward is a jackass when he's hurt.  Emmett is right, they put up with him because he's family but someone who's not will only put up with that crap for so long. Flip side goes for Bella too though, if you're worried about something the only way to fix it is communication because as much as we'd love them to be our loved ones, especially signifigant others aren't mind readers.

Looking forward to the wedding and aftermath.

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