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Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

I loved the whole morning. I am sitting here reading it and grinning like an idiot but I just can't help it. I was awesome!

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

I just love this story..

Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

FINALLY!!! We only had to wait 20 chapters for the big "L" word LOL...perfect! I hope I have a Christmas like that :D

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

hope your mid terms go well. I loved the Cullen's christmas, I can't wait to see what happens at the new years eve gala, I am sure it's gonna be great, I can't wait to see what happens.

I just loved the idea of Bella holding and feeding a baby while Edward is watching her, and how that lead to the two of them admitting to each other that there in love and want children in their future.

I can't wait to see what happens, please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update.

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

That was a very sweet Christmas chapter. I loved it!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Awsome chapter!!Just fucking awsome. ;D

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

christmas morning was perfect

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Beautiful chapter.  A lot of sweet things occur.  Tristan and Amy had baby Cody.  Bella got to feed Cody, which made Edward again think about Bella holding and feeding their baby some day.  Jasper finally asked Alice to marry him.  Then having Christmas with both families exchanging gifts.  It was wonderful.  A very relaxing and loving Christmas.  Now the secret of Edward and Bella being a couple is starting to come out.  He is taking her to the New Year's Eve Gala to benefit the children's hospital.  Alice got her the dress for the event for Christmas.  Edward and Renee gave her jewelry to wear with the dress.  The best part was they both finally told each other that they love one another.  Looking forward to New Year's Eve Gala celebration, should be a wonderful time.

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Wow!  That was a fast update.  Thank you so much.  Can't wait to read about the Gala next.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

best christmas ever! haha

Reviewer: eliza6801 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

I loved it! This chapter made me so happy, I am still smiling. Rather goofily too.

Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Aw that was such a nice Christmas. I loved how Bella slipped up and said 'our room'. lol. And Edward watching her with the baby, the I love you's...it was all great.

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

They said I love you!!! **sigh** Thank you! Finally! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Aww best Christmas gift ever!! Such a cute chapter-I loved it!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Awwww! Yay!!! It was perfect! I loved it!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

I loved everything about this chapter! Everything! It was excellent!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

such a sweet chapter from a sweet author!

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

What a great Christmas!  Happy the baby was OK, you never know.

I would love a tennis bracelet from Edward, too!!!  :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Awww... looks  like they went from enjoying the moment to thinking about the future... I saw lots of references to the future...  but they still need to get the logistics taken care of... the whole living in separate parts of the country thing... distance is such a pita... lol

Reviewer: Zing (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

They are just so sweet together!  I love how the family is coming together, and the fav couple is talking about the future so easily.  It just made me feel all warm and gooie inside!

Thanks for the update!  It totally made my night!

Kris

Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

awwww how sweet.  So why are they still keeping their relationship a secret? 

 

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

Great chapter! I'm glad Edward loosed up some and finally told her how he feels. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

so pretty! every last one of them!

Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

awww this was just sooo fluffy!!! i loved it

Reviewer: whoaacxh37 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity

I'm gonna have to guess you're from Calgary, which would make you a Flame's fan?

Well, keep doing what you're doing. It's turning out awesome whether the teams are my favorite or not(:



Author's Response:

I sure am! I love my flames.

Yeah it's hard to do a sports story with real teams without making someone upset about the teams and the rivalries. But I'm glad you still like it.

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