Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
OMG that is hilarious, i am loving this fic already!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
love it..
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Hey awww its good edward is back on the ice =]
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
I absolutely love this story! I love your writing style and hockey playing Edward! :) I can't wait to find out how things unfold, but I feel like there is going to be some drama here sometime soon before we get to the happy ever after. I'm fine with that but they better end up together! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Sweaty Edward after hockey practice...<sigh> Shower scene was hot!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home
LOL...what luck to have the family almost catch them...not to mention Bella having to hide in the closet...tears of mirth in eyes...
Reviewer: avalondancer95 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
HA HA!!! I'm from Denver and I was just picturinmg that whole scene in the baggage claim! HILARIOUS!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal
Oh busted on many levels...Jessica and the secret agent, Carlisle and Edward inadvertantly...it was all beautifully written.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Far From Home
Oh dear lord your gonna kill me with cliffhangers arent you...speeds off to nxt chapter to see what happens...
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Planning
Love Jazz, Bella, and Rosalie's plan about the proposal! Alice will be estatic!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Recovery?
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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - At the Rink
Poor Bella must have been mortified beyond belief but love that she put on a brave face.
Hmm Edwards skating...stares off into space dreamily.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 - New Home
LOL...talk about one heck of a first meeting...this is going to be one interesting journey.
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry
Awwww!!! That was so sweet and just *sigh* worthy!
So, who won the game? And what will Edward do with all that down time?I never realized hockey lasted so long; does it have the longest season of any sport?
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
LOL..OMG we are going to have to refer to that as the V-incident...was laughing so hard. I'm glad you put that in as it was just to enjoyable.
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Drama
James and little Alice? Huh.
Hope Bella feels better =[
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Sweaty hockey is always a good idea :) There is never a need to explain yourself with that one! Loved it!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Prologue - Unwanted Opportunity
Just found your story and can already see Bella is not to keen on the move...lol...I live in Wyoming and I know for a fact that Denver is quit lovely...
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Heheh... Edward in the shower is always necessary...
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Dun, dun, dun. She knowsssss; That little Pixie!
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Ew... Pens all the way. I could so totally do Edward and Crosby at the same time. Cool story though.
Author's Response: oh my god! YES, the Pens are my favorite East coast team...and I won't lie..I'm kinda mirroring my superstar Edward on Crosby, since Crosby is pretty much amazing. I do love the Pen's, but they are second to my Flames.
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail
Damn that itch! And I'm with Bella, I feel bad that Edward is having to sacrifice his sanity.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
can't wait for more
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)
Edward in the shower with me, I mean Bella, is always necessary.
And I agree it was a filler chapter but I did like that Bella had a chance to talk with "the girls". Sometimes it just helps to voice ones concerns and who to better talk to than girlfriends. Also liked the E/B skatetime. It was sweet and fun, although I get the feeling that Bella may beg to differ about the fun part.
Sandra
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