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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

Well there is always snooty cousins in every family...

Awww just loved Edward's toast...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

LOL...oh dear lord drill sargeant Alice is just to funny...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Planning

Well I sure hope they come out and address the elephant in the room sometime soon...

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

So, it was awesome filler! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Morning

LOVED, LOVED it! Sweetest, most beautiful chapter ever!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

Yay Tanya is *as they say in baseball* Ouuttta heeerrrreee! Dances around...

While the injury sucks I sure hope Edward gets to hand James his ass on the ice again.

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Christmas Surprise (v)

That was so very... devious ;]

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Drama

Whoa toss in a little Jacob and James and now we have an interesting mix of mishief...loving it!

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

=]

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Oh dear lord a cover feature! WTF is Angela talking about?!?

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

Holy Freakin Hale!!

EEEEeeeppp Alice knows...looks at screen stunned

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - The Art of Blackmail

Well it would seem like Denver's sweetheart is a devious little bitch. I am curious what she is up to but I feel assured Bella will come thru with something to help Edward's stress. I hope that the Cullen's find out about Edward and Bella's relationship to as it will put alot of things right.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Home Ice advantage?

Aww poor Edward...He definatly has alot on his mind. Hope he opens up to Bella and screw casual.

Please tell me I can still hate Denali...uggg if she messes with the Cullen's I'll help Alice and Rose tie her up naked in the middle of Denver with "I'm a slut painted on her chest"

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

Love the filler!

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

So much anger Edward, geez.

I heart Jasper! He's so sweet *swoons*

Reviewer: marybeth315kcfan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

Great chapter.  I know that you said this was a filler chapter but it was still good.  Still let you know where Bella was when shew as talking to Amy.  Great update.

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

OMG that is hilarious, i am loving this fic already!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

love it..

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

Hey awww its good edward is back on the ice =]

Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

I absolutely love this story! I love your writing style and hockey playing Edward! :) I can't wait to find out how things unfold, but I feel like there is going to be some drama here sometime soon before we get to the happy ever after. I'm fine with that but they better end up together! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

Sweaty Edward after hockey practice...<sigh>  Shower scene was hot!!  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Going Home

LOL...what luck to have the family almost catch them...not to mention Bella having to hide in the closet...tears of mirth in eyes...

Reviewer: avalondancer95 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

HA HA!!! I'm from Denver and I was just picturinmg that whole scene in the baggage claim! HILARIOUS!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal

Oh busted on many levels...Jessica and the secret agent, Carlisle and Edward inadvertantly...it was all beautifully written.

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