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Reviewer: mayluna (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
is maria dead??? if not, i'm pretty sure she will be.
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Preface
I like what I've read so far. You leave just enough to keep the reader immediately wanting to click 'next'. Good summary too!
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
love it cant wait for more
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Preface
interesting start :) Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: unfortunately they wont let me post my next chapter i have posted it on twilightarchives.com and fanfiction.net though so look there for chapter 8
Reviewer: jeno3434 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
Please continue...I love the story!
Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
want more update soon please!
Reviewer: twinelz (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Preface
Is this story abandon? ;(
Please don't abandon this beautiful story!
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
this is awesome MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: im working on getting the next chapter typed
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
Well now I hate her even more! Well kinda, because she did turn Victoria into a vampire.
Bella said that she was thirsty, but not thirsty now, does that mean shes still alive?
Hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: actually bella said she was thirsty just not as thirsty as she is now, yes thats means shes alive but being punished as she should ill update when a get my groove back for this story cause im not sure how to write the next chapter cause it's in jasper's point of veiw and hes gonna be pissed in it so it'll be difficult to right and im working on another fanfic that they won't let me put up on here but it's on two other sites so im good
you know you love me,
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 6: Behind These Hazel Eyes
omg Simple Plan, Untitled. I l.o.v.e that song, its so upsetting though. very fitting.
Poor Alice, this is breaking my heart but putting back together at the same time!! Very strange!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: Time to Think
Wow, Bella is very wise!
Had to laugh at Alice calling her a bitch ;D
Karaoke night sounds tempting.. so does Jasper.. but I won't go into that ;)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Queen's Study - Jasper's Memory
God, I'm stuck now.
I LOVE Jasper and Alice, like really really love them. But... now I want Bella and Jasper to be together. Oh no!
I like how Jasper is remembering it all now. Bitch Maria sold the ring, I hope Bella ended that bitch ;)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Queen's Study - Jasper's Proposal
Aw I really love the flashbacks, they sounds so perfect.. but we all know what happened later!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: What Did You Just Say?
Short, but needed. I like how Jasper was taking on a fatherly role slightly by telling her not to talk to her mother like that! ;D
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Party and Surprises
I like how you've added flashbacks into this chapter, very fitting.
I wonder what will happen next!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Preface
I like this little preface, Bella is truly a queen, huh? She isn't someone to be messed with!
I found you're story a while back and I added it to my favourites, you may have noticed - you may not have - either way I have finally got the time to read the ones I've set to my favourites.
This is different to others that I've read, which is promising :)
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
oOoOo interesting!
I love it! lol
I wondered who could have had Jaspers ring.
It was good. but is maria dead now?
Author's Response: glad you like it amber. Im pretty sure i explained in at least one chapter that Maria had "sold" jasper's ring and no maria is not dead shes just more thirsty than she was when she bit Victoria
you kno you love me,
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: GothicAtHeart (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
I totally love this ! It's really good. A little overuse of question marks and such, but I really enjoyed this story. Update soon! Can't wait for more.
Sophie
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
How strange! Thats definetly weird. Wonder how Jasper will take it!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
Wow! this is great! i really like it! two thumbs up, its great!
Reviewer: cassieleexo (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Victoria's Past
brilliant story :)
enjoying it muchly!
can't wait for more!
xo
Cassie
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Preface
Awesome totally amazing! Just absolutely perfect intro.
Author's Response: thank you
you know you love me,
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Behind These Hazel Eyes
I love this. I was hoping that Bella and Jasper's relationship would blossem. and its good that Her and Alice can be friends. I cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thankx for the review, Amber. I'm working on a conflict right now though and I'm also telling Victoria's past... who knows where that will lead me. love you lots.
you know you love me,
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: KaitlynLucilleHouston (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Behind These Hazel Eyes
AW WHAT A GOOD CHAPTER
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Behind These Hazel Eyes
wow so wow lol
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