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Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:39 PM · On: The Meadow
Short but Beautiful. Loved it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not a long chapter writer LOL Glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for reading!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:36 PM · On: The Meadow
hawt update.... thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:29 PM · On: The Meadow
Can't wait to see what you do with the change and their relationship afterwards! Congrats on the award- I voted for you, too. Your story is definitely one that I like to reread.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for voting! *big kitty hugs* You are totes awesome bb! *MWAH*MWAH*MWHA*
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:13 PM · On: The Meadow
mmmmm.good one!
talking about what he's going to do after the change...oh.yeah.
and everything about edward is lickable! ...tongue hanging out, wanting so bad to lick something now.... time to dig out my popsicles! my Twilighted dessert of choice(next to edward of course)!
Author's Response: LMAO! Niiiiiiice! Thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!! *MWHA*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:02 PM · On: The Meadow
Love it
Naughty photo boy! His prude days sure ended lol
So, will Tanya play nice once they are in Alaksa or will Bella have to take her out
Author's Response: Yeah, I think the prude has seriously taken leave LOL! Thank you so much for reading and stay tuned to find out about Tanya ;-)
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: MKiefer (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:02 PM · On: The Meadow
Woo Hoo!!!! SEXPENDERS!!!!!!
Love the chapter! Need more now!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much bb! I loves me some sexpenders! You rock! *MWAH*
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Coming Home
I can't remember if I posted a review the first time I read this chapter or not, so just in case I didn't, here goes...
This was so damn hot! I love how he took her on their couch! I love the note from Emmett!! I love how disgusted Rose is by the whole thing! I would have loved, however, to have heard Carlisle's viewpoint. I can just imagine him attempting to maintain the clinical detachment of a doctor and a father, while at the same time being a man and thinking, "Hellz, yeah!! I woulda done the same thing to Esme!!"
Thanks for all the work you've done writing this series! It took me a while to actually start reading it (so many other stories, too little time), but once I did, I have been hooked!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying my lil fic! Please stay tuned!!
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:14 AM · On: The Honeymoon; Part One
Holy hell! Is it hot in here??
LMAO at Edward's colorful candor.
Great chapter
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews!! I have enjoyed every single one of them and I'm so glad you are enjoying my lil fic! You rock! Please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:33 PM · On: It's Time
That was great :)
And the whole lagoon thing... fan-fucking-tab-ulous. Really
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
wow. yeah that... that was awesome.
The bit at the end was positively heartwarming :)
I like how you have changed him, but you didn't just *poof* he's suddenly a freak - it's been a process and we've gotten to watch the metamorphosis from 1918 prude to 2009 dude :)
Fantabulous chapter!
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Naughty Bella, Dirty Edward
Holy crow!
The bit with Charlie was sooo bad it was good :)
Great chappie
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:35 PM · On: The Fantasy
ROFL... I know I already told you I love Emmett, but after this chappie it bears repeating... I LOVE Emmett :)
My first (who just so happens to be my hubby now - not that he was then...) could've really benefited from some of Em & Jazzy's 'pearls of wisdom.' LOL I guess I would've benefitted from him receiving said pearls :X
Anyhoo...
Fab chappie
~Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Picture This
whoa...
I wouldn't have thought he had it in him either. But Bella's all kinds of happy that he did :D
That was hoTT!
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:47 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Ok This was just dripping with awesome. really.
One teeny tiny thing that jumped out at me tho'... alligators are cold blooded. Jazz wouldn't want to eat them at all. Not that it substracted anything from the story, but it did jump out at me & so me being me had to mention it...
My socks r rocked & its all your fault :)
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Coming Clean
sometimes... one word says it all so much better than even a well thought-out prose full of colorful adjectives and dynamic flattering.
This is one of those times, & that one word would be... wow
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:21 PM · On: The Talk
Careful - You'll need a license for chocolate-covered, dirty talking Edward - that's a deadly weapon...
Awesome chapter :)
Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Coming Undone (V)
I've read a couple of stories with a pervy-ish Edward in them, and most of them just seem wrong, It's like your reading about Bella & a totally different guy named Edward. You seem to have captured Edward & while you've twisted him a bit so he's not such a prude, you've remained true to his essence. I like that.
Well Done
~Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Perversion (V)
I love Emmett! He is my all time favorite perverted horny asshole :))
& I about spewed Mt Dew over the gherkin jerkin' Never heard it put that way before :))
Great chapter
~Sonia
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:07 PM · On: North of the Border (V)
Great start :)
Found this on the Indies sight (made a list of stories to read from the nominees) Wish I'd have found this sooner :)
Looking forward to reading more.
~Sonia
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:33 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
I closed my eyes and ran the tip of my tongue over my top lip, faint traces of Bella’s flavor lingered on my skin. “Amazing,” I heard myself say before I realized I was actually speaking out loud.
I opened my eyes to see Emmett and Jasper staring intently at me.
“Can you still taste her?” Jasper barely whispered.
You have no idea how many stories I re-read just so I could re-read these lines. It was excruciating, but someone has to make the sacrifice. Seriously, one of the hottest scenes EVER!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, I loved writing that scene, it's one of my faves.
Thank you so much for reading, please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: ashleyr2305 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Coming Home
I can't wait for the next update! I really enjoy your take on the story; the plot sequence and Edward's point of view in the narrative are detailed and interesting. Keep up the great work! <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so happy you are enjoying!! Please stay tuned!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: D T L RP (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Coming Home
WOW!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:22 PM · On: The Honeymoon; Part One
Good thing I wasn't on the hammock with him...we absolutely we have landed face down, mouths full of sand...and the hot factor would go right down the drain!!
Author's Response: Edward says, he would have kept you upright, he's skilled like that ;-)
Thank you so much for reading & please stay tuned!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:09 PM · On: It's Time
Yay! The honeymoon begins!!
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Loved this chapter!! Love how Emmet & Jasper give Edward such a hard time!
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