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Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:02 PM · On: The Piano Bench
wow great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! *MWAH*
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:03 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Cannot believe you had me in tears at the end (I so rarely am affected like that). Charlie's love for Bella is so eloquently put forth. Truly, I think Edward would do almost anything to repay Charlie for the amazing gift that is Bella...
**small housekeeping matter- the word scintillating is spelled incorrectly**
Will enjoy this fic until you say it's done...
Author's Response: ARGH! My dang spell check was acting up on that doc last night. My secret is out, I can't spell for crap LOL!
Thank you so much for reading babes!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:43 AM · On: The Piano Bench
AMAZING!!! I am so glad to finally see Edward stripped down and dare I say "Human"?!. Keep up the good work. You walked the line of romance and smut perfectly. Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: BrunetteDevil (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:29 AM · On: The Piano Bench
lurve it! UPDATES ARE BETTER THAN KISSES!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! YAY, you caught up!! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it really does mean a lot to me!! You are awesome babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:18 AM · On: The Piano Bench
This was a sexy and very sweet chapter! I loved the conversation between Edward and Charlie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWHA*
Reviewer: BrunetteDevil (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Coming Home
heehee, edwards looking forward to vamp sex. idk, im very immature sometimes! but ANYWAY, great chappie!
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:38 AM · On: The Piano Bench
SWEET!! Ed, chocolate, and a tearful Charlie! It's all SO GOOD!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*MWHA*
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:00 AM · On: The Piano Bench
oh no, really.. that was great.. charlie knows.. awesome.. i love it when everyone is happy
Author's Response: Me too, I LOVE the fluff!! Thanks so much bb, you rock!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:58 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Whoa!!! Didn't see that comin!!! This story is wonderful. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:56 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Hmm, I knew I was in trouble when I saw the title of the chapter! That was sweet and slow on the piano bench, but hot and tasty-licking chocolate off of Edward's bod! Charlie!! He's always the fly in the ointment, but now he's the fly on the wall! Who knew that Charlie has been aware of Edward for some time now! I can't wait to see how you wrap this up, I know you'll come back with another awesome story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes, you rock to hard!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:52 AM · On: The Piano Bench
awwww, charlie made me cry!
Author's Response: Awwww I cried writing it too.
Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:01 AM · On: The Piano Bench
If I read that correctly, Charlie *knows*??? Holy mackerel! Love the piano playing!
By the way, could you tell me what vjgm means?
Author's Response: He does! IMO he'd have to be a pretty clueless cop to not have figured something out ya know.
vjgm is my beta's screen name and it's her kids first initials.
Thanks for reading babes!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:29 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Another cracking chapter - and another piece of furniture destroyed (as well as one being defiled!) I know this has got to come to an end soon, but I liked what you did with Charlie - as we all know, he did find out in BD, and I think the fact that you let him work it out for himself works better than SM's clumsy device of having Jake tell him everything about wolves and vamps in one fell swoop. I guess we'll be getting the transformation in the next chapter (bring it on!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Lizzie, I'm so glad you are enjoying!! Stay tuned bb!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:18 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Girl that was soo touching! Seeing Charlie so soft was a first and WOW he KNOWS!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:00 AM · On: The Piano Bench
OhJesushellshitdamnandfuck!!! I.Can't.Breathe. Boo, I don't know how you do it, but each new chapter is better that the one before...seriously. Chocolate covered Edward is pure bliss! The way that they shared the rich, dark chocolate through a kiss simply had me melted. And the piano bench, makeing love to a song composed by Edward to represent their love was so breathtakingly passionate. Needless to say I will never look at fondue or a piano bench the same way.*sigh* As for the rest of the chapter, well I just love Alice, what she's done to assure Edward & Bella "quality time" throughout the story has been priceless & I love her for it. Emmett, omg, love him too! He's so damn funny & cuddly, wouldn't change him for anything. And I have to admit I snorted at Rose's reaction...puuulleeaasse, she & Emmett destroy hoses for heavens sake. it was great. Finally, Charlie, dear sweet Charlie. His conversation with Edward couldn't have gone any better; it brought a tear to my eye.
Beautifully & passionately written, as always. <3 you hard BB!! MWAH!!
Author's Response: PIXIE!!!! You know how much I look forward to your reviews because they always make me smile!! You are the bestest bb!! I <3 YOU so hard!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:44 AM · On: The Piano Bench
I can't get enough of this story! I have lost count of how many times I have reread it.
I really like the conversation between Charlie and Edward. Having Charlie say just enough that we know he knows about vampires but knows he can't say the word! Good job!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: That just makes my day to hear that you reread! I love that with all my kitty heart!!
Thank you so much babes you are so awesome!! *MWHA*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:18 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Great chapter, god that chocolate sauce part was hot!
So Charlie suspects what he is, at least he's OK with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading bb, you rock!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:51 AM · On: The Piano Bench
wow, must say i am really enjoying your story, sad to say that it is nearly completed i could read forever thank you
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much vixen!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:24 AM · On: The Piano Bench
That was good. I liked the ending with Charlie. The best Ive read. It always makes you feel better when he atleast has an idea even if he doesnt
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:22 AM · On: The Piano Bench
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you Miss Sherrie!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:05 AM · On: The Piano Bench
lovely thank you xx
Author's Response: Thank YOU!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: jrh927 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:59 AM · On: The Piano Bench
This chapter was beautiful.
The Treatward wasn't half bad, either!
Author's Response: Thanks babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:55 AM · On: The Piano Bench
That Treatward had me cursing... but the chapter sure didn't. It was totally hot and filled with amazing lemons (multiple!) and a ton of love. You just feel the love these two have for each other. I laughed at Rose getting disgusted about the piano. HA! Like she and Em haven't done far worse!
I don't know what to think about Charlie. He knows. Oh man! He knows. This means that Billy (or Jacob) broke the treaty, doesn't it? What's going to be done about that, if anything?
Nice of Charlie to hug Edward in the end. I wonder what Bella's reaction will be?
Author's Response: Teehee, there will be a visual of the Treatward in my forum later today and I've also posted the visual to the piano bench lovin *wink*
Thanks for reading babes, you rock!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Ladybugs_Mum (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:25 AM · On: The Piano Bench
Great chapter!
The piano scene was just beautiful and what a lemon, Rose and Emmett were funny and the end part with Charlie was just lovely!
See you at the next chappie update...
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes, please stay tuned!! *MWHA*
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:43 PM · On: The Piano Bench
of course it will have to end soon, I do believe they are "acclimated"!! But this was another great chapter and I was wondering if you plan on doing a vamp on vamp lemon after her change??
Author's Response: Yep, vamp on vamp so they can compare to human on vamp.
Thanks for reading!! *MWAH*
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