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Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:22 AM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
I always love the family dynamic when it shows up. Edward and Bella are so cute and totally HOT in this chapter. Very, very good job. One little niggly thing is that you may want to check yourself on using lose versus loose. Bella was "losing her sh*t", not "loosing her sh*t. I thought it may be a typo, but you used it incorrectly multiple times so I thought I'd mention it.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this chapter, and this entire story, truth be told.
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I went back and edited the extra o's out, thanks for telling me!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:19 AM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Phenomenal! that's it...I need to get my man to be more vocal too
Author's Response: LMAO!! Thanks babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 12:03 AM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Mmm I love me some dirty Edward! He needs to come out and play more often! But I literally cracked up at the ending! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:50 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Loved it ud soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:45 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
haha edward and his little underwear fettish lol
Author's Response: *heeehee* Thanks for reading!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:30 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Always love your Emmett; loved that Carlisle and Jasper got into the talk. End lines were great! Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much sweetness! *MWAH*
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:24 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Oh, I think I liked dirty talkward quite well, thanks!!! lol
Rather liked the frank talk btwn the boys too. I love how you have them give him shit. Really liked when Calisle zinged him on the "lady" issue! Damn, that Bella's a lucky girl. Thanks for having such a "creative" mind! mwaha!
Author's Response: Thanks babes! I'm glad that my "creative" mind could amuse ;-) *MWAH*
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:20 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
“Blow, okay! Blow! Blow blow blow blow blow! Now get the fuck off of me!”
OME that was hysterical! I loved the man-to-man-to-man-to-man with the boys and Carlisle...who knew the good doctor had a kinky streak?
And Dirty Talking Edward ALWAYS charms the panties off of us....delicious chapter, bb. You rock, hard.
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: LMAO!! Yeah, you should have seen me sitting at my kitchen table trying saying blow over and over again, trying to count the blows. The hubs thought I'd lost my mind ;-)
Thank you so much Sarah for being such a faithful reader and reviewer! *MMMMWAH*
Reviewer: rrensmeyer (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:45 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Please keep this going...such an interesting read. Emmett is so funny and I have enjoyed reading about Edward's "other" side!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *MWAH*
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:40 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Holy Crow! Fabulous! Hilarious & Steamy, who could ask for more?! OME, I just adore Emmett (can I have 'em, please?), he's just a brazen teddy bear. The coversation with Carlisle, Emmett & Jasper was a riot!
And the meadow...I have no words for that! *major swoon* I'm glad Edward let his inner perv come out to play!
Finally, why yes BEDward will do nicely! Thanks! ;)
Author's Response: Yes, pervy Eddie needed a little face time ;-) Like I've said before, I can't help myself when it comes to Em, he's just waaaaay too much fun!
Thanks for reading sweets! *MWAH*
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:32 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
as much as i love the hot, smutt edward---i so love emmett in this story-i know i have put that in my reviews a couple of times---but he cracks me!
Author's Response: You might have mentioned it a time or two ;-) He cracks me up too and as you can see, I just can't help myself when it comes to Em. Thanks for reading babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:21 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Damn. I love fan fic Emmett-just so funny, both "talks" were just so funny.
Author's Response: LOL! I love fan fic Em too ;-) Thanks for reading babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:17 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
This was the best chapter! I was laughing at the hilarious antics of Emmett then nearly passing out from Edward's sexy antics. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:40 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
Any one of those offerings would most definitely do. After the tests came back "positive" (positive as in, "go for it!! W00T!! *fist bump*") I was half expecting exploding Edward at the end of this chapter. LOVED that he totally got busted, hee!
They need some more practise *nods* Lots and lots more practise. Get on with it you two!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:37 PM · On: North of the Border (V)
Such a great story
Your mission, Edward Cullen, should you choose to accept it, Ha - love Em.
The alligator and Jasper was a nice touch - funny!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I couldn't help but use a gator for Jazz, it just seemed fitting ;-)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:33 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
hehehehehehehe!!!!!! Hilarious! BUSTED! What is he gonna say!?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: *heehee* Thanks babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:32 PM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
TOTALLY HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: firefly1788 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Coming Clean
OMG I loved it!!! Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Please stay tuned!!!
Reviewer: gogetter187 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:03 PM · On: The Talk
: )))))))))
Author's Response: ;-) Thank you!
Reviewer: gogetter187 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Coming Undone (V)
i liked this chapter!Q! yayyyy!.... its just so sexy..!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Please, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Coming Clean
i just read all of them....AMAZING! all the things i pictured reading the book....filling in the blanks. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Stay tuned, more Acclimation is in the works at this very moment ;-)
Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:13 PM · On: The Talk
This one is my fav...I love the dirty guy talk...funny! thanks again
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: whttrash903 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Coming Clean
If you don't write professionally you should! I didn't leave any comments about the previous chapters and for that I apologize but I was just too engrossed, consumed with wanting more, to take a few moments to type words of praise. So... please accept my admiration for your literary talent and heartfelt thanks for sharing it on this site. You capture the characters of Edward and Bella very well (particularly Edward, I think) and you write as captivatingly as Stephenie Meyer herself. Please, please keep weaving your Twilight magic here, I so look forward to reading it. Bravo!
Cheryl
Author's Response: Thank you so very much you just made my craptastic evening sooooooo much better. I'm very glad that you are enjoying this little trip inside Edward's head with me! You are totally awesome and please, stay tuned!!!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: Horizon77 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Coming Clean
Loved it! Poor Edward is totally in for it with Emmett, though. Speaking of Emmett, how wildly inappropriate (and totally IC) of him to wave his fingers around at the house. I about died laughing at that!
Awesome work ... Keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: LMAO!! That is one of my favorite parts of the whole chapter! I freaking love me some Emmett!!!
Thanks, as always for reading babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Coming Clean
Ahhh! Young lust. Isn't it fabulous (well it certainly is when you write it!) :D
Can Eddie come over and help me shred MY sheets?! *wicked husky chuckle* Until then I'll just have to keep reading your stuff!
Thanks for another 'rousing' chapter! (Nice interaction between the boys too, by the way.)
Author's Response: Thanks babes! Edward said that he'd love to help you shred your sheets, right after he's done helping me shred mine ;-)
*MWAH*
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