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Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:47 AM · On: The Fantasy
Keep em coming, I am loving this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweetie! *MMMMMMMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:36 AM · On: The Fantasy
oh yes, please. Tongueward in the Volvo...quickly please.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you for reading babe!!
Reviewer: Rebecca123 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:21 AM · On: The Fantasy
haha emmett is so funny! i love him ;) and your story is great :) can´t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:19 AM · On: The Fantasy
OH.MY.GOD. Amazing chapter(again)!!!
Just a couple things for you...
1) I adore Emmett(& Jazz), not to mention Alice...partners in crime...hehehe! I'm so thrilled that Edward is opening up & having FUN, not just with Bella but with his brothers too! About damn time!
2) I'm feeling the desperate need to hunt...that fantasy is HOT beyond words!
Ohh Tongueward...*thud* Yes, please!
Amazing as expected...can't wait for more...big smooches!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Miss Pixie! You completely rock girlie!! *MMMMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:55 AM · On: The Fantasy
I sooooo can;t wait for Tongueward!! I'd love a littlem romp with him!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading bb!
Reviewer: Lobo (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:54 AM · On: The Fantasy
The brothers are truly brothers!!!! Can't wait for the dextrous edward in the car. Was it intentionally not included or will it come out later, but shouldn't edward be more than aware that he WILL make bella bleed during their first time? Come on. she's a virgin whose first time is a rock solid vampire, she will surely bleed.
Author's Response: Edward is very aware that and it will come out later, I promise. Thanks for reading babes!
Reviewer: RobyPattinson (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:50 AM · On: The Fantasy
Oh My God !:!!! the backseat of the Volvo ... i wanna see (or read) that !!! :D
MWAAAAH I love it !!
Author's Response: *MMMMMMWAH* back atcha babes! Thank you so much for reading!!
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:22 AM · On: The Fantasy
I don't know where you get your ideas and inspiration from but I love it!
Ninaxxx
Author's Response: I get some of my core ideas from what the readers want to to read about. I have the best readers EVER!! Thank you so much babes! *MWAH*
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:49 AM · On: The Fantasy
ohhh man, i can't wait until the car ride. please post soon,thanx for writing
chasity
Author's Response: Thank you Chasity, please stay tuned!!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:06 AM · On: The Fantasy
Dude...that hunting fantasy of Edwards was just...guh...pure hotness right there! And OMG Sentimental Jasper was just so adorable! LOL!
Some great lines in this one, and I think almost all of them came from Emmett, hehehe..."perv couch" ;-) Although Edward's "sex plans for the after party" had me in stitches!
Can't wait for the next chapter. SO looking forward to some sexy car times!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:56 AM · On: The Fantasy
i nearly fell off my seat laughing, my son told me "to never do that again" i laughed so loud he said it was painful! update soon please
Author's Response: LMAO!!!! Oh that is just awesome, I love it! Thank you so much for reading babes!! *MMMMMMMMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:27 AM · On: The Fantasy
I LOVED how Edward was "Yes ma'am" to his momma. Haha Sexxy beast. He's got so much respect for his momma, but oh how I'd love for him to just disrespect my body and do me right!
And I like the little moment between the three boys. Emmett and his manliness is just so fucking beautiful. He's so afraid of it that it makes me squee and want to punish him.
"There was still a part of me that was just itching to defend Bella’s honor, the gentleman that would rush in and make Emmett take back such slander of my beloved." LMAO Very Edward. I love the word choice. It just stuck a chup in me and made the little wings of my heart whoosh. I felt like Edward was "saying" (or thinking) this while he was like naked and trying to be proper. Just funny and I love it.
The man-lovin' is really sweet. I like that it's what this chapter was all about... for the most part lol their love for each other really does run deep and I love seeing that.
ANNNNNNNNNNNND I can't believe you just left us there on the side of the road. Please come back and pick us up for the smut ride! Give it to us hard!
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweetness! Sorry 'bout leaving you hanging like that, but I just can't help it. I'm so glad you are enjoying the smut ride ;-)
*MWAH*
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:31 AM · On: The Fantasy
LoL male bonding... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *MMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:55 PM · On: The Fantasy
Hot Bella fantasies, fun times with the fam, wicked advice from his brothers. This chapter has got it all... and I like it! teehee
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!!
Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:37 PM · On: The Fantasy
I gotta say as weird fantasies go, the one in the woods he had just after hunting, tops the list. I confess it was very hot.... I'd like to keep reading about Edward being more raw and nasty.... how about it? I'm sure Bella would appreciate it if Edward "let his freak flag fly".... wooooo.
Thanks for the great story... there will be a smile on my face tonight as I fall asleep and it won't be because of the 'sand man'....
Author's Response: LMAO!! I think Edward has more than one freak flag, I think homey has a plethora of flags up his proverbial sleeve ;-) Thank you so much for reading bb! *MMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:28 PM · On: The Fantasy
interesting. I wonder if Edward will so share with his brothers. But, it seems so real, so humane.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:14 PM · On: The Fantasy
oh man that was a fantastic update, seriously can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you babes, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:07 PM · On: The Fantasy
*squee* Just when I think you can't get that temp to jump any further... *bows* Not worthy!!!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much babes! You ROCK! *MMMMMMMMMMWAH*
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:53 PM · On: The Fantasy
The interaction between the brothers was so entertaining in this chapter! I don't think I've ever read a scene like that before where they're all just...happy, playful, comradely. It was super cool. And, zomg, I'm so excited for car-time!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you are enjoying my little fic! Please, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:48 PM · On: The Fantasy
Yum I LOVE me some Kinkward fantasies! I love stories that take a look into Edward's fantasies, because we all know, like you said, he's a closet dirty boy....mmmmmm
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: He IS a closet dirty boy. It's the quiet ones that sneak up on ya ;-) Thank you so much Miss Sarah! Loves to ya babes *MWAH*
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:36 PM · On: South of the Border
wow
Author's Response: Thank you! Please, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:35 PM · On: The Fantasy
Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks babe! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:29 PM · On: The Fantasy
That was good as always iloved Emmett he so funny i cant wait to see what happens next:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: carolinajoy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:20 PM · On: The Fantasy
I love your Emmett and Jasper more than anything else in this story. Very nice!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I love me some Em and Jazz, they are so much fun to write!
Thanks for reading and please, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:12 PM · On: The Fantasy
LOVED!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *MWAH*
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